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Dancing With Your Love Chapter 22 pg 106 4/1 - Page 14

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Brilliant update... Plz pm me... Plz plz plz...
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i just finished reading the entire FF and i must say it is REALLY good !!
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i just now read all your parts first one is nice but after that i didn't like them much becoz what u did with kriya how can u do this with her pls make her fine pls pls i beg u and u know something that i cried while reading all the parts pls make her normal
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aminaaa the updt was sooo wonderful
the RH pic was amazing..loved it!! =D
liked the way all were busy helping each other !! =)
n my fav part rey always carring kriya
as he can make more muscels..; )..lol
n sharon wiping kriya's tears howw sweet =)
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All sat down on the the floor, looked around and let out a satisfy sigh out. All had a smile on there face. They have done it.



All decided to go home. Just two person wanted to stay back. Kriya and Rey wanted to stay. Wanted to finish the last details. Al went home. Kriya called her mom and that she will be late home today too.


Both Kriya and Rey was working quietly.


Kriya was painting and Rey was fixing the wires for there music system, projector and lights.


Kriya was too concentrate on what she was doing that she didn't see that Rey was looking more at her than the knife in his hand. Rey was cutting the wires, and same time at Kriya, He got lost in Kriya so much that he didn't see see or feel that he was cutting his hand. More than the wire.


After awhile he felt something painful and looked down saw that he had cut his hand, and blood was oozing out from his hand. He let out a yelp. Which made Kriya turn.


She was shocked when she saw Rey hand bleeding. She forgot that she was paralyzed and got up, but she didn't come so long. And she fell on the ground she tried to crawl to Rey. Which Rey saw. He that her legs was moving. He got really happy.


Then realized that Kriya had fallen from they chair. He ran to her.

He lifted her up and placed her at one of the dice. (You know those which is in the RH in the the show).


He asked her if she was alright which nodded too, But was more concerned about his hand. Where she sat there was a first aid box she opened it and started clean his wound. Rey got lost in Kriya, he came when he saw the horrified look. He looked at his had and saw the wound was not little. It was a really big wound. The cut was really deep.


K:- Rey, how did this happen?


When Rey was about to answer she cut him (Like Baatcutter always do).


K:- Forget it I'm making a small bandage of this now. We are going to hospital now.


R:- Arre, Kriya let it be. Its not that big.


When he got murderous glare from her he kept quite.


And mumered:


R:- Rani Lakshmi Bhai.


Which Kriya heard


K:- What did you say.


He looked up and saw a very angry face. Which make Rey stummer


R:- K...k...k...n...no..noth...nothing.


Which Kriya replied with a Hmmm. Not a happy one.


Rey thinking:- This girl is nothing to play with, she is her mom's daughter, I can so clearly see it, she looks innocent but isn't it a percent. Rey got up and he took her wheel chair and helped her up in it. Both went down. Rey helped Kriya in the car.


Rey started Driving. Kriya saw that they wasn't going to hospital but home.



K.- Rey where are we going?


R:- Home where else?


K:- Yes we are going somewhere else.


R.- You mean a date? Looked at Kriya with a smile. Which Kriya returned.


The said:


K:- No we are going to hospital now.



Rey stopped the car and looked at Kriya with a scared face.


R:- Why are you OK, are you hurt somewhere. Then it struck him she fell of the chair she must have got hurt.



R:- Kriya did you get hurt when you fell? Please tell me where it hurting.


Rey went on asking her question.


Which make Kriya scream.


K:- REY!!!


Which make Rey jump back on his seat.


K:- I'm fine.


R:- But if you are fine then why do you want go to the hospital?

Kriya stretched out Rey hand and showed him it. Which made Rey groan.


K:- So lets go to the hospital.


All they way Rey tired to tell her that he was OK he didn't need go there.


But forcefully she took him there. They arrived to the hospital. Both went in.


When both came in the doctors cabin, there sat non other than Dr. Armaan.


Armaan got shocked to see them as the check up of Kriya was tomorrow. But when Kriya explained him about Rey's hand. He understood.


Armaan opened the wound


A:- This wound his really big, good job you both came here. I need to stitch this wound


R:- Sti...sti...stitch it. No need for it.


K:- Rey don't tell me that you are afraid for stitches.


R:-n...n..no...i'm no..not...no I'm not afraid of stitches.


K:- Don't lie Rey, I can see from your face that you are scared. Which made Kriya laugh.


A:- Listen Rey it won't hurt, just imagine something or look at something I promise you that it won't feel anything.


Which Rey gave a nervous nod. Rey started look at something (Do I need to mention what he was looking at or who he was looking at)


He came back when he Armaan say done.


R:- Wow that didn't feel anything.


A:- See I told you, By the way this is what I say to Minnie, my 10 years old patient.


Which made Kriya giggle.


Armaan told Kriya to go out that Rey and he did need to talk about something. Kriya went out.


A:- How's it going with Kriya?


R:- Good, infact really good.


Which made Armaan confused.


Rey told him about the incident in RH. Which made Armaan happy and told Rey that maybe Kriya can start walking again.




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Sorry for late update i was busy with something important last Sunday thats why i didn't update. I kno its short but really tired need to sleep now


but i will update hopefully this sunday again 


Hope i made some happy today.



I have a important qestion to you all HOW THE HELL CAN YOU READ MY FF, I don't understand that you guys find it boring? If i was you guys i would have stopt reading this in the first chap. 


Guys all those comments you give makes me so happy, i know that i never reply to them. Just bcs i am to lazy. But every comment is really important to me. Thanks everyone how has comment on my FF.


Plz guys plz critzise me a bit too,plz plz so i know what i need to do better.




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Edited by Kriyanshlover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
heeyyy u made mee sooo happy
kriya can start walking again =D
n that thanx 2 that unvoluntered accident
but rey cutted his hand while watching kriya.. =(
glad she took him forcefully 2 hospital =)
as like  a gf takes forcefully the bf 4 shopping..lol
n dr armaan /ksg hayye hayye rocks
the 3som is rocking =D
continue soon
n its ok if u didnt reply the comments
as u r LAZY  ; )..lol..jocking
at least press the like button =)
it will be good
so see uu soon
love yaa