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An Escape Into Paradise: Discontinued. (Page 83)

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Sorry for this late reserve :( I didn't even know you updated hmpfh :(

DUDE how do you this. I am serious, your story is just growing more interesting each time you update. This was one of the best I read all through your updates Neha. It had everything fitting in perfectly, from being a very practical story, to yet having the most beautiful moments between Armaan and Riddhima, it was all perfectly weaved.

I think Riddhima is right in her own way. It's just the start of their relation, and she wouldnt want to feel like she is imposing or causing her own love some problem. It is a huge responsibility for him too, and if she plans to share it with him, it is undoubtedly a good decision. 
I love the bonding between the three friends and also how they've started to make Riddhima feel a part of their family. The relation forming between all of them is so freaking adorable to read. I must say Prithvi is quite a character ROFL

I found the scene between of them really adorable when Armaan came to know he had topped, and the fact that he was actually teary eyed, was cute.

I can see that Armaan and Riddhima will gradually get comfortable with each other, even though they're yet a little awkward around each other.

I don't know what to say about your writing Neha, because its always brilliant, but I must say the best part about your ff is how real it is. It's something that happens in any two people's lives. And the way you've made it so genuine and simple, always makes me want more.

So you better be updating SOOON Ouch

I love you Hug




Edited by Ankita.M - 25 January 2012 at 8:48am

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
loved both the installment!!! thank u 
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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 8:07am | IP Logged
very nice installment
loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
^^ edited comment :D 
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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Hey...
Loved the installmenttt..
awww...Armaan is such a cuteee and shy nerd...
I just love this ff..

Pls continue soon

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
I shall edit tomorrow, Kapische <3

Sorry! :( Really caught up :(

Love you xx

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Hey Neha...Just love both the installments..Love the way u describe Ridzy's  feelings and thoughts regarding three guys and about their home... Completely understood Ridzy's condition...She must be feeling so out of place...Armaan is a sweetheart..The way he Console Ridzy... Superb ..Love him all the way...Woww he score such a good marks in his exams...gr888...Love Prithvi  and Rahul also...Do try to continue soon... Take care

Lotsof Love
Geet

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged
First - Hug
At the risk of sounding senti, you've been one of only friends throughout everything Hug Thank you <3

Thanks for the update <3 and caring enough to give me something ROFL

Coming to the update, LOL, Rahul is jokes. Blowing the surprise, especially after taunting MY Prithvi of being a blabber mouth. The nerve of him.

Umm.. Sorry, I completely skipped the previous part before this ROFL Okay, so R wants to work, eh? I don't see a problem in that, in fact, it'll probably give her more independence. But I understand where A's coming from. He probably thinks that she's solely his responsibility now, so she shouldn't work. But that's just so chauvinist Stern Smile but, since its Armaan, it sweet, and so cute, sigh. I wish he was mine :(

He's going to do residency in her Dad's hospital? :O Oh crap! Nooo! That's like working for the devil! What have you planned for them, you Satan sent weirdo! :$ you better not cause problems in the face of a certain Shashank, I swear I'll kill you. But eh, not so much, I'm still excited ROFL

I loved AR's hug, and more than that, adored their group hug! I see best friends in the making, like the Big Bang Theory, only without the geeks, non-good-looking guys, and Sheldon ROFL

Adored the update! Love you xx

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