An Escape Into Paradise: Discontinued. - Page 33

-Anku-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I READ THIS like << long ago now 😆 But commenting late :( my apologies :( Been reallyy busy . KILL MY BOSS ARGHH.

Anyways :) AHH this is so different to your other ff, where my comments yet pending I know, and quite contrary to my normal behaviour I haven't edited it yet LOL.

Anyhow, this was fabulous Neha, I love how you've presented the story, by going into a narrative, its extremely well explained, and keeps you on the edge wanting to know more.

There is a lot left I guess, by which we'll understand AR's relation better, but right now one knows, that Armaan hasn't had an easy life, and Riddhima hasn't got much of love in hers. And they both kind of fill in the void for each other, which makes it such a strong plot.

You write extremely beautifully like I have said before :) and this one is no different.

Loved Armaan's confidence and the way he didn't bow down to Shashank's insult. And loved how Riddhima stood up for Armaan at the right time :)

The most amazing bit of the story is how AR both haven't yet confessed to the other, but yet know the truth, and do not need to tell this to the other.

Love the concept , do update soon <3

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cuteshilpa

@cuteshilpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

hey love the installment

it was awesome n loved the last part

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Swaatii

@Swaatii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Please add me in your pm list

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

I don't like Shashank Gupta.

And that's all you're getting from me. For now.

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Enough Now! I hate Shanky!!!! And how..HOW could you write this??

P.S. I LOVE MY SIGNATURE DABBA! Don't you ?? :P

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett
I don't like Shashank Gupta.

And that's all you're getting from me. For now.

Go and Die.

And I DON"T WANT you to like him. That's the whole point!!

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..
Enough Now! I hate Shanky!!!! And how..HOW could you write this??
P.S. I LOVE MY SIGNATURE DABBA! Don't you ?? :P

I always hated Shashank. So yeah, it wasn't idfficult writing it!😆 And above it all, I had to show that My Armaan is THE guy!☺️

And I love it too. Both of them, Kajen and Friends! *SIgh* It was the best thing ever.

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Maitree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

I always hated Shashank. So yeah, it wasn't idfficult writing it!😆 And above it all, I had to show that My Armaan is THE guy!☺️

And I love it too. Both of them, Kajen and Friends! *SIgh* It was the best thing ever.

But hadn't you said that we would like Shashank? Where did that goo?? 😲

And yeah, I know. KaJen and Ross-Rachel are L.O.V.E. <3 I was heartbroken when Ross-Rachel weren't a couple when the show ended! 😭

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Zarqaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Im 99% sure AR are gonna run away! I would if i had Shanky as a father! LOL

The other 1%..well eeh thats cause im not sure because YOU wont tell me! 😳

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

But hadn't you said that we would like Shashank? Where did that goo?? 😲
And yeah, I know. KaJen and Ross-Rachel are L.O.V.E. <3 I was heartbroken when Ross-Rachel weren't a couple when the show ended! 😭

They were a couple when the show ended cupcake!

And you'll like him. Wait.

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