Sorry for this late reserve :( I didn't even know you updated hmpfh :(
DUDE how do you this. I am serious, your story is just growing more interesting each time you update. This was one of the best I read all through your updates Neha. It had everything fitting in perfectly, from being a very practical story, to yet having the most beautiful moments between Armaan and Riddhima, it was all perfectly weaved.
I think Riddhima is right in her own way. It's just the start of their relation, and she wouldnt want to feel like she is imposing or causing her own love some problem. It is a huge responsibility for him too, and if she plans to share it with him, it is undoubtedly a good decision.
I love the bonding between the three friends and also how they've started to make Riddhima feel a part of their family. The relation forming between all of them is so freaking adorable to read. I must say Prithvi is quite a character 🤣
I found the scene between of them really adorable when Armaan came to know he had topped, and the fact that he was actually teary eyed, was cute.
I can see that Armaan and Riddhima will gradually get comfortable with each other, even though they're yet a little awkward around each other.
I don't know what to say about your writing Neha, because its always brilliant, but I must say the best part about your ff is how real it is. It's something that happens in any two people's lives. And the way you've made it so genuine and simple, always makes me want more.
So you better be updating SOOON
I love you 🤗
Edited by Ankita.M - 12 years ago
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