An Escape Into Paradise: Discontinued. - Page 21

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Wow , i loved the second half too.. the way u described Ridz's life .. The way you write is different and always leaves me curious...
Awesome <3

xoxoox

Hi Neha..!!!

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Hi Neha..!!!

Ok..firstly I ADORE the name An Escape Into Paradise..!! It is simply AMAZINGG and caught my interest in the fanfiction!!! (And yes I know all credits go to Shru..so I'll personally thank her too..)

 

Secondly..I vowed to myself to not read any new fanfictions, because firstly, I think I'm finally getting over AR..I mean the couple charm only probably because I haven't seen them both together in like, oh AGES! and secondly I have other stuff to get done, more serious stuff like Uni applications and do as much research with cost comparisons and visas (which are another word for hell!) etc etc.. But I couldn't actually help reading this fanfiction because the prolouge just interested me and then I thought..well it's only the first chapter..

 

ANd when I read it it's actually amazing! You have brought out Riddhima's past and her attitude ( the attitude I love in people) so brilliantly that it just left me almost speechless. I was wishing I'm more like her. Though how far I am, I don't know coz I don't judge myself..heck I can't judge others right then I really don't know what to think of myself.,.LOL!!

 

And Armaan's interest in her..or his "studying" was so hilarious! Poor guy is already smitten and still doesn't know it! And obviously, their first meeting really was like an escape into Paradise!

 

Well, you got me interested all too soon at your own risk, so when you can, please do hurry up with the next part..!! :D I'll do my utmost to pester you..!! :P

 

Love,

Sanaa

Originally posted by: maryamdiggi

Oh omg i luv ur ff, i dont know where to start,it's everything about it ur writting stly,the concept of the story,how they are both ENCHANTED by each other just luv everything.count me in bco's i want ur pm too!!

muahahahahahaha I AM SO HAPPY I EDITED ON PAGE 8 !! EEE YESS! :P

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Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

muahahahahahaha I AM SO HAPPY I EDITED ON PAGE 8 !! EEE YESS! :P

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Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

BASSAAANNTTTII !!! Tera Verrruuu Agaya! 🤣 🤣 Okay This was Maha-over-dramatic 🤣 But I can't seem to help it, since I love Drama 🤣 ROFL. So,So,So...I'm BACK to Edit my Comment and Give a Long One :) <3 ( Sorry for being late *holds ears* )

Title : Believe me, I have NEVER commented on a title before, but I am now, because I LOVE IT. "An Escape into Paradise"..Its a common phrase we use, but quite unusual and unique for a FF and thats what I like about it ;) Even the title screams,GO ON DUDE! READ IT !! :D Seriously, the title is quite gripping! Lovely thinking girlie :)

Prelude : Two smiling faces, soft, shy yet apprehensive smiles..moonlight..Aaahhh...Perfect Setting! As I have already told you, the fairytale feeling of this FF is the best thing about it! It gives such jitters and brings a Soft slow smile to your face :) Then the next bit..of a girl, normally dressed..but obviously, very unusually radiant in her smile..shy smile :) Awww <3 I love the setting! Absolutely perfect! I can so so imagine Riddhima like that <3

EEE OUR HERO ENTERS !! *dances* *turns on music* *sits with popcorn* *runs around* LOLZ I got so excited! Armaan HAYEEE <3 I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE The way you've described him here! "A fear of control his emotions, a fear of having to become a successful pillar for someone." This line made me Gawk at the screen because I was trying to imagine Armaan darling in this type of role and it FITS! Heehhe *blush* Okay So Stealing glances, smiling, awakwardness...Beautifully written :)

EEKS the next bit was EVEN MORE WOW.

"Just when the onlookers thought that they weren't comfortable with each other, the guy quietly entangled his little finger with the girl's. The girl looked at him, with a blush radiating from her cheeks, visible even in the darkness and gave a slow shy smile."

I loved this !! I was LITERALLY on air! I mean I love these little gestures they do. Its just so cute but so beautiful,makes anyone's heart flutter <3 And have butterflies in your stomach Tee hee <3 I LOVE THE PRELUDE! Matlab you think how much I will love the FF! Great going Neha!

Part 1: A Perfect Start. Armaan Mallik - Tomboy, King of Hearts, and both girls and their mothers being charmed by him..So Obvious! Tee-hee! "Four letters, two consonants and two vowels come together to form a word, easy to pronounce and just as easy to use- LOVE!" LOVED THIS LINE! I was grinning so wide in this! Fabolous girlie :)

I adore how you've brought out Riddhima's character. Woah girl, she silenced her seniors! GO BASKET! LOL :P I myself am that type of a girl,very less unhappy/quiet and a little boisterous, so I could match with her character and LOVE IT!

Ahaaa! So Mr.Supercool is hooked,huh? ;) Interesting :P I LOVEEEDDD LOOVEEDD how you describe this poor little guy falling in lowwweee with Our heroine :) "Study of the intriguing characters of a specimen by observing its activities!!" Oooh Really,Armaan? Nice Nice, I Likey, no...I LOVEY :) Awieee I love how he stalked a stranger,and ROFLMAO I loved the way you described her character! Your writing style says a lot about you,really...it has a kind of unusal charm, you know like..childishness,along with cuteness and maturity and Its kind of romantic...As I said,its like fairytales..SIGH, which I absolutely LOVE! <3

Heehee, I love Armaan playing with kids. Like he's ADORABLE. TOTALLYYY <3 MUAH MUAH types :P (sorry I get carried away when I talk abt him :P) So yeah,he found out about her from the kids...Shoo Shweettt :)

Riddhima's family is SO BAD and her kahani is so Dukhbhaari. 😭 I'm Sad, and I hate Shanky (When Did I not??) I adored how she always kept the book her momie gave her...thats the most touching thing ever! And the fact that behind that, she's living and smiling and is jovial, its so amazing...she is SO Strong! I want to say something here. I have a classmate whose story is EXACTLY same. The difference is, her Dad is totally sweet and awesome, and she has a little sister whom she's very attached to. But anyway, the mother part is similar...and its like I can relate to that. I'm sorry if this thing made u unconfortable/sad..I didn't mean to do that. I just wanted to share the thought. :)

"He was everything a perfect guy could be. Handsome, more than needed, with a smile that could send out positive vibes to people sitting even a mile away. A kiddish nature, when he was fighting with the kids and convincing them that he wasn't out in the game of cricket they were playing."

I WILL DIE IF YOU GIVE SUCH DESCRIPTIONS OF ARMAAN! AAA !!! I LOVE HIM I LOVE HIM! Unrequitted love che...But I LOVE HIM (Wait. What am I shouting? AND WHY am I SHOUTING,anyway? I could've said it normally...eh, whatever.) I Love their first meeting! I Lowwee it :D Basket ball ki jagah Cricket ball? EE WOW ! I Love! <3 So Riddhima and Armaan both took the risk of falling in love,eh? I LOVE YOU! *gives a air-tight jhappi* (Air tight yaane, a TIGHT hug that won't let u breathe :P)

So,I LOVE THIS FF. Now. and Always <3
See, I edited na? I'm sorry I know its late but SHTILL...I DID FINALLY <3

And u tell me, was it long enough? Coz Its one of my longest ones. :)
Love,
Maitree.

P.S. I love you more because you used my Siggie EEE :D