Nice reviews, everyone! 😃
I guess mine is one of the easiest to guess too. Anyway, to Davy Jones' locker with the secrecy now. 😛 😆 Thanks for the constructive feedback, I shall definitely do my best to keep these points in mind the next time around. Wanted to mention that I like to experiment as I go along, and therefore I deliberately focused more on action than investigation for this one. Perhaps because I had experienced that horrid terrorist mission from Modern Warfare 2, this was meant to serve as an insight into what the police and military go through to protect the lives of innocents.
For anyone interested, here's a bit more gyaan from the research I did for the story, mostly taken from Wikihow (uploading because it's too long to post here) -