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Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1 (Page 76)

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 3:06am | IP Logged
me first... :))) yippeee... :)))
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dedicated to your doll...you mean ta poupee...hehe...i guess i know the reason...

i mean why you are saying so... :)))

caught you even before reading it...haha...

and you surprise...now i know what it was...

waise sachi main bahut long update hain...i really love it...hamesha long long update dena...meko pasand hain...haha...


maan kissing geet to be a bit more with here...he knows how to strike the right cord...lol..like he made her loose herself in that kiss to such an extent ke geet bhool hi gayi thi ke ghar jaana hain... :P wah wah...and typical girl ki tarah...hamari heroine bhi sharmaati hain...awww...so sweet...


and rimi...

i love how she teases them all the time...

dost ho toh aisi...lol..

waise geet this is not right...rimi ke liye toh khaana nahi banaati aur MAAN the writer ke liye...well...waqt hi waqt milti hain aapko...haha...

but rimi itni achi hain ke she will definitely not feel bad or left out...like she only wish for you both to be happy and together...


maan coming in geet's room at night...it really isnt a good idea...hehe...both tend to lose themselves a bit too much...haha...sachi main i loved how you write and like you had told me geet had taken the lead...geet heroine se sherni ban gayi all of a sudden...hiha...


and that french waali part...

i must say tu es une bonne eleve...

je suis fiere de toi ma puce...

c'est bien...

t'aime fort and zoubiii a toi...


that room waali bit...how geet had paintings on her walls...each wall for a stage in her life n the last one she made a pic of maan.that was so sweet of her...showing the genuine love for maan...i loved the idea of that room...perfect...


awesome update reshuuu...

u were great ma fille...

loved it to the core...

continue soon and merci ma cherie...for the pm... :)))




Edited by zahra15 - 07 January 2012 at 5:47am

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gudiya muahhh
kya update the...
maan is too smart huh,,,,,asked geet to initiate the k***
and geet smartest to respond back...

phone gir gaya nahin to...Wink

waise geet cooking pasta...wah geet superb huh
and then loved the convo between maan, rimi and geet

photos wala part was awesome...so last part khali hona...maan ke liye tha...
great update
gudiya ur a fab writer

muaah...superb one dear



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Pata hai Falak dear tumhare iss update par mera kya comment hona chahiye ye toh main khus bhi nahi jaanti phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon

So maan does not want geet to go away from him ab kya kare ye dil hai k manta nahi haina Maanji are ye kya haal toh Geet ka bhi yahi hai wo bhi apne maan se dur nahi rehna chahthi par kya kare jaana toh padega hi

Hmm ye maan bhina ek chance nahi chodtha apna gift lene ka wah ghar tak lift di issliye kiss achha hai maan babu licence ka fayda uthayo hehe

Geet toh aivi nakhre dhika rahi hai wo bhi maan ko uska gift dena chahthi hai dekha maine kaha tha na de diya gift

Rimi is such a sweetheart wo toh sab jaanti hai k geet kaha gayithi geet k lal lal gaal sab kuch bata dethe hai hehe so geet ne maan k saath bitaye hue palo ka zikr rimi se kiya oops I mean jo cheeze delete karni thi unko delete karke hehe

Bechari maid ki job toh chali gayi

Dil toh paagal hai one of my fav movies

Movie dekhne k baad geet ne maan ko phone kiya aur maan toh baithe hi the nazre bechaye hue k kab phone aaye aur ye kya geet k demand par maan phir se haazir aur phir wo romantic moments haye main mar jaawa

Pyar toh jadu ki tarah kaam kartha hai ye baat rimi ko koi samjha de dekhona geet aaj sabse pehle utkar apne maan k liye breakfast banarahi hai aur yaha geet ne breakfast baanya nahi k maan haazir ho gaye

Geet itna possessive hona achhanahi hai hehe loved it when she said k aapki sweetheart sirf main hoon

Wow the last part was really unique falak dear the paintings and the diff phases of geet's life made me emotional

Loved your update muahh



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thats wat we call a magical update dear...awww geet's beautifully painted walls really made me cry...it was super magical n too emotional...
ab shuru se update ki baat karte hain...
maanji hai to most peaceful place but bechari ko jana to parega afterall pyar ka dushman ye zalim zamana...LOL
sahi kaha geet maan bara chaalbaaz h har baat p kiss but now m confused Confused maan ki baat bhi sahi h haq banta h uska apni gf se kiss pane ka...hehe
bhagogi kahan geet ur bf is very strong dole shole nai dekhe???
gud question maan bas kho gayi na kiss mein geet???LOL but ye lo ye to conscious hoke bhaag gayi par gud nyt kiss to mil gayi...zyada lalach achchi baat nai...haina maan???
i luved geet's txt specially "now don't make me blush more" dat bit was really very cute...hehe
rimi as usual was really sweet as a frnd n too cute n naughty wid her teasings LOL
luved d convo between geet n rimi n deir late night slumber movie...
kya baat hai agree wid u rimi bas naam p blushing chaloo...i luved deir sweet convo before movie n copy bit was awsome...hehe
awww maan is sooo damn sweet he kept waiting for her to finish wid movie n call him...Smile
oh god dey can't spend a second without each other guys jaldi shaadi kar lo tum dono ka kuch nai ho sakta...
uff wat a payback but d payback really got dem insane dreams reality hone ja rahi theen shukar h babaji ka sahi tym p fon gir gaya...hehe sabar karo guys...
oh god madam geet jo 11 baje bhi bistar nai chhod pateen apne future pati ki seva mein 9 baje uth gayin...ClapClapClap
now dats seva ki bhawna!!!!!
possessive geet rimi ko door bhi nai kholne diya...hehe
n heres reshus new passion french...kya baat h maan aur geet yahaan bhi same same dono ko french aati h but bechari rimi k baare mein bhi koi soch lo LOL
now d most beautiful magical n touching part of the update...
GEET'S PAINTING PARADISE
reshu the whole description of the room n den the walls dedicated to geet's phases of life was amazing...magical idea dear...
u beautifully described her connected emotions to each wall...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
n d last wall dat was waiting for d most special n precious painting of her life had me crying...i really don't hv words to describe d magic u created!!!!!!!!!!!
superb job dear!!! u were really fabulous!!!!



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luvly part...
ds par was full of emotion and deir luv...

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awesome update
love dit dear

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Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

luvly part...
ds par was full of emotion and deir luv...


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