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Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1 (Page 63)

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Hey Abby so finally I read all the parts together and I must say the concept is unique but more than the concept the way you have penned down the story is just incredibly beautiful
 
So Geet is a model and an aspiring actress whereas Maan is a writer they are waiting for their soulmates and the wind plays the role of cupid
 
Maan ne toh pehle hi nazar mein ye jaan liya tha k Geet is his angel that angel who will act as a source of light in his life but Geet ko thoda waqt laga hmm...hotha hai ladkiyaan itne aasani se koi bhi cheez accept nahi karti
 
First official meeting mein fight but I loved the way Maan pacified Geet their dance , then their friendship everything was written so beautifully
 
Ae lo ab toh naam sunkar hi dil ki dhadkane tez hone lag gayi waise dono k dreams k toh kya kehne I wonder dreams mein ye haal hai toh reality mein kya hoga
 
Geet toh sharmarahi hai dream k baare emin sochkar par Maan toh ekdum bindaas aur besharmo ki tarah babaji se keh raha hai k ye dream reality mein kab badlega Naughty Maan
 
 
Maaneet's date and the audition part the way Geet unknowingly accepts her feelings by telling ILU Maan everything was mindblowing
 
But the icing on the cake was when Maan proposes her confesses his true feelings in his own style hai Geet k jagah koi bhi ladki hothina wo toh ekdum flat ho jati
 
Chalo Geet ne bhi accept kar liya and the way u introduced MAANEET with the help of that neckpiece was amazing yaar
 
Rimi is a sweetheart another thing that I have to mention is those diary entries each and every entry was a masterpiece
 
 
 
Kaun kehta hai k sachhi mohaabat ko dhundna mushkil hotha hai
Kaun kehta hai k apne humsafar ki talaash mein hume bhatakna padtha hai
Sach toh ye hai k mohabat ek aisa jazba hai jispar khuda ki meher hai
Ek aisa khoobsurat makam hai jo k jannat ki ek ruhani sair hai
Bus ek baar apne jazbaat toh par yakeen karke dekho
Ek baar uss khuda k haath ki katputli bankar dekho
Puri kaaynat ek jut hokar aapko aapke manzil tak le jaayegi
Mohabbat k anokhe dariyaan mein khud hawayein isharo se aapko dubne par majboor kar jaayengi
 
Thanks for the pm Abby aur haan aage bhi pm karna
 
 
Love- Piya

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
hi dear..
just read all the parts in one go...

its wonderful story dear..
loved it ..
loved the name of the ff...

and the writings by maan...fantastic dear..
just loved all the parts...
superb writing dear...u r an fantastic writer...

finally they confessed each other..
waiting for many more parts dear...
thanks for this nice story..

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Amrutha

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
amazing part
dey are sooo cute <3
cont soon

harneet <3

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 3:37pm | IP Logged

Wow Abby…that's called back with a bang

 

What a beautiful update. I absolutely adored the name Maan gave to Geet – Angel and also such beautiful lines….it was just a lovely declaration. I absolutely fell for these lines

 

"Angel.. jaanta hun ye aansu khushi ke hi hain.. par phir bhi.. agar khushi me tum mujhe apni pyari si muskurahat de dogi to mujhe zada khushi hogi"

 

Dinner was so romantic. Actually everything was very romantic. Entire evening, lake, lotus, Dinner and off course the Song.

 

Rimi caught them because of Geet's neckpiece. But she is a good friend

 

Goodnight kiss..oye hoye…Geet use seriously bahut miss kar rahi thi…hai na

 

Lovely update dear….and quite a long one too…so thanks. And now stay…gayab mat hona

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
awesome update Clap

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged
that was amazing!
 
loved maneet moments!
 
cntinue soon!

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Hello everyone... Here's another update for my dearies...

Honestly.. I'm very very dissappointed with the number of likes and comments.. Truthfully i was so dissappointed that I didn't feel like writing but then I thought about the people who really love me and my FF.. So I updated it for them..

This is a humble request.. Those who are not interested in reading plzz just tell me so I don't have to PM u..

This part is dedicated to all my sweeties who commented and liked update and made me feel like somebody wants to read what I write... Thanx to each one of you... Love you guys..

Sorry for the mistakes if any..n sorry for no links..my internet isn't working and I'm updating from my phone..

Without further ado.. Here's d update..

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Part 13


Maan: Geet..tum kitni khoobsurat ho Geet.. Aur tumhara ye dil(Maan touched the left breast of Geet).. Wo to itna khoobsurat hai ki kisi kaale se dil me bhi roshni bhar de..

Geet: acha ji.. Maan.. Baaten banana to koi tumse seekhe.. [:p]

Maan: are nahi Angel.. Mai baaten nahi bana raha hun.. Sach me.. Aur tumhare ye honth(Maan seductively rubbed his fingers on her lips).. Dil to krta hai ki inhe apne honthon se alag hi na karun..

Geet: to kyu karte ho Maan..



Thats all Maan needed to hear.. He took her juicy lips into his.. Those lips seemed to be ready for him.. They felt as if they were the most tasty thing in the world.. Maan gently sucked onto them.. Geet too kissed him with equal fervour.. Maan bit his lips n then soothed the pain that he had caused in his passion.. Soon Maan opened Geet's mouth n started exploring the hidden secrets of her mouth.. They seemed like some treasures.. Treasures that were meant only for him.. His hand travelled downwards caressing Geet's waist.. Geet kept moaning his name in his mouth.. He slowly slid her top upwards and started caressing her bare waist..

Geet moaned..

He slowly took off her top.. Now Geet laid infront of him all bare except a piece of cloth hiding her feminity..

Maan squeezed her waist.. He then kissed her eyes.. She moaned.. He kissed the hollow of her neck.. She arched back giving him more access.. He then kissed her cleavage.. She moaned louder.. He then kissed her navel.. Her moans got louder.. He kept his left hand on her waist caressing her waist and igniting her desires.. He moved his right hand upwards tearing the only piece of cloth that was left on her upper half.. He moved both her hands over her mounts..squeezing them.. She held his hair tight.. The desires were burning in her.. He pinched her ni***** lightly.. She moaned loudly.. He moved his mouth forward to take those hard rock ni**** in his mouth adjusting himself over her body and..

THUD...

Maan landed on the floor along with his pillow..



Maan: OUCH...!!!!



Maan got up from the floor caressing his bum which got hurt with his fall.. He was panting.. He went towards the kitchen to get a glass of water for himself..

He drank a glass of water and calmed himself a bit..

He looked at the clock.. It was 3am..

He looked at himself.. His arousal was still upright..



Maan: Geet.. Ye tumne mera kya haal kar dia hai.. Ab to jaldi se tumhe hamesha ke lie apna banana hi padega taki mai apne in roz ke sapnon ko kabhi sach bhi kar sakun.. Ye khwahishen chupa nahi pata hun jab bhi tumhe dekhta hun.. Jab bhi tumhe dekhta hun ek alag si aag mere pure tan ko lehka deti hai.. Us waqt bas dil krta hai tumhe duniya se door apni baahon me samet lun.. Par mai janta hun abhi mujhe tumhe thora waqt dena hoga sambhalne ke lie.. Par vada karta hun tumse Geet.. Tumhara ye Maan ek din tumhe hamesha ke lie apni baahon me samet lega..



He went and laid on his bed thinking about how His Angel had changed his life and made it so colourful.. He closed his eyes but somehow sleep was faraway..

He was restless.. He wanted to talk to Geet.. He felt like listening to her voice..



Maan(self talk): ye kya bachpana hai Maan..abhi 3 ghante pehle tu khud use ghar chodkar uske sath time spend karke aa raha hai.. So rahi hogi wo.. Teri tarah pagal thori na hai wo.. Maana tujhe pyar hua hai Geet se..to iska ye matlab thori na hai ki tu be-fizool ki harkaten karne lag jaega.. Chup chap se so ja.. Kl subah baat karna..



He closed his eyes again but again.. He couldn't manage to sleep..

He picked up his phone and dialled Geet's number..

Geet picked up the phone in one ring..



Geet: hi Maan..

Maan: are Geet.. Baby.. Tum soi nahi?? Ek hi ring me phone pick kar lia..

Geet: nahi mai so to gai thi.. Par phir meri neend khul gai and really felt like talking to you but mai yehi soch rahi thi ki tumhe call karun ya nahi.. Kya pata tum so rahe ho and mai disturb kar dun..

Maan: Geet..sabse pehle..tumhe mujhe call karne se pehle itna sochne ki zarurat nahi hai..tum mujhe be-jhijhak kabhi bhi call kar sakti ho.. Second.. Jaan.. You can never disturb me.. Infact..tumhara so-called disturb karna makes me happy..

Geet: aww..chalo thik hai..to Maan Singh Khurana..ab forever disturb hone ke lie tayyar ho jao.. Hehehehhe...

Acha Maan..tumne itni raat ko kaise phone kiya??

Maan: wo mera bhi same haal hai.. Neend khuli to tumse baat karne ko jee chaha...

Geet: hmm... Ae lo.. Hum to pakke lovers ho gae hain.. Cupid has striked our heart.. Bolo.. Hamari raaton ki neend ud gai.. Hehehhe.. Ab jaise movies me hota hai.. Hum raat ko sone se pehle ek dusre ke bare me sochenge..karvaten badlenge..ek dusre ke bare me sochke muskuraenge..

Rimi: aur doston dwara pakde jaenge..

Haan to yahan chupke chupke phone pe romance ho raha hai...

Geet: Rimi.. Sachhi me yaar tu bhi kya kabab me haddi hai...

Rimi: hawww... Haan ji haan... Ab to dost hue paraye..

Geet: hehehhe.. Drame mat kar.. Tujhe bhi pata hai..tu mere lie kabhi parayi nahi ho sakti..

Maan: acha Geet suno..hum kal baat karte hain.. I don't want to disturb you guys.. Thik hai.. Goodnight Angel.. Sweet dreams of me.. love you..

Geet: hmm.. Thik hai.. Goodnight.. Sweet dreams.. Umm... Umm...

Rimi tu zara mu doosri side karna..

Rimi: kyu?

Geet: are karna yaar..



Rimi turned her face the other side..



Geet(whispered): love you too... Muuaaahhh...



And she cut the call...



Geet: ab tu idhar dekh sakti hai Rimi...

Rimi: ahaan.. Love you and all ho raha tha haan...

Geet: chup kar..

Rimi: haaee.. Geet tu sharmate hue kitni pyari lagti hai.. Lagta hi nahi jaise Geet hi hai..

Geet: hawww... What do you mean.. I don't lokk pretty.. Huh...

Rimi: hahahaha... Mazak kar rahi thi baba... Sach kahun Geet.. i'm really happy for you..

Geet: thanks Rimi.. Chal ab so jate hain..

Rimi: haan.. Goodnight..

Geet: goodnight..



Rimi left the room..

Geet took her phone again and texted Maan.. 'I LOVE YOU.. Goodnight Maan.. :) '



Maan was lying on hid bed thinking about Geet when his phone beeped..



Maan: itni raat ko kon message kar raha hai?



He opened the message and a huge smile adorned his lips.. He quickly replied replied back.. 'I LOVE YOU TOO MY ANGEL.. Goodnight... :)) '



Geet was looking at her phone waiting for his reply when her phone beeped..

She read the reply and smiled wide..

She wrote.. 'sone ki badi jaldi hai Mr. Maan Singh Khurana... :P'



Maan's phone beeped again.. He replied.. 'are kahan Miss Geet Handa..aapne hi to hamari neend cheen li hai..aap kahen to hum sari raat apni palke bhi na jhapkaen..'



Geet read the message and rolled on to the other side of the bed..

She wrote.. 'acha ji.. Chalie palken jhapka lijie.. Hum aapko ye saza nahi dena chahte.. Par ye bataiye .. Agar hum aapse kahen ki aap yahan hamare paas aa jaiye to..??'



She winked and sent the message..



Maan smiled reading the message..



Geet had her phone in her hands waiting for his reply..wo intezaar me karvaten badalti rahi..

Suddenly he felt a hand around her waist.. She turned to see Maan layin beside her..



Geet: Maan... Tum yahan?

Maan: ab hamari Angel ne ek khwahish zaahir ki thi.. To hum us khwahish ko adhoori kaise rehne dete...



Geet felt tears stinging her eyes.. She quickly wiped them off and kissed Maan's cheeks..



Geet: Maan..tum sach me bohot ache ho..maine to wo bas aise hi keh diya tha aur tum yahan chale aae..

Maan: meri Geet ke mu se nikli hui har baat Maan Singh Khurana ke lie bohot keemti hai..wo Geet ke kisi bhi lafz ko zaaya nahi hone de sakta..

Geet: Maan..



And she slammed her lips on his lips.. She was just trying to convey her love and happiness through that kiss..she was completely overwhelmed by Maan's actions and words..

Soon the kiss turned into a ferocious and firy one.. They were sucking and biting each other lips..they kept assaulting each others' lips till they had to move away to catch some breath..



Geet: I really love you Maan..

Maan: I love you too Geet..



Maan slowly made Geet sit on her bed facing towards the window and he himself sat behind her holding her waist and resting his head on her shoulder..



Maan: wo chand dekh rahi ho Geet.. Aaj kitna khoobsurat lag raha haina??

Geet: haan Maan.. Pata nahi.. Mai roz is chand ko dekhti hun par aj to iski khoobsurti to kuch alag si hi hai..

Maan: haan Geet.. Aur jaanti ho kyu aj ye chand hamesha se zada khoobsurat dikh raha hai.. Kyunki aj is chand ne hamare pyar ki kashish ko paas se dekha hai.. Aj is chand ne hum dono ko ek hote hue dekha hai.. Aj ye chand hamare pyar ki kashish se chamak raha hai Geet.. Ye chand hamare dil ki us roshni ko hu-bahu jhalka raha hai jo aj hamare ek hone se jal uthi hai.. Ye chand ki chamak hamare hi is pyar ki nishani hai Geet...



Geet rested herself more on Maan's shoulder.. She couldn't define how pure she felt inside because Maan was hers.. the purity that he harboured had made her pure.. She kept her hand on Maan's hand that was on her waist..



Both of them kept looking at the shining moon..

And shine of the moon kept intensifying with the intensification of their love..

THE NIGHT SHONE BECAUSE THE MOON SHONE.. AND THE MOON SHONE BECAUSE MAANEET SHONE...!!!

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prev - part 12
next - part 14

That's it for now... I hope you guys are going to love it...

PLZZZ DO LIKE AND COMMENT...

I REALLY WAIT FOR THEM N THEY MAKE ME FEEL MOTIVATED...

Thank you everyone...!!


Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 03 January 2012 at 10:53am

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