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kya baat h sweet se maan ka dream to super wild phase mein chala gaya...lol
sabar maan babu abhi aage bara lamba intezaar h...
maan's selftalk was really cute par maan aag ekdum barabar lgi h to no need to think this much call kar hi lo...dekha tumhari angel ne ek ring mein utha liya...
awww loved deir convo it was really really sweet n cute...n rimi ki entry was icing on d cake...i luved her sweet teasing...
d text convo was really sweet n reflected deir longing but wat i absolutely luved was maan coming at her simple actually just lyk dat request...
geet's reaction was beautifully laid down in words by you dear at maan's super sweet gesture...
d last moon wala part d whole dialogue about moon being witness of deir love n becoming one was awsome...m still in awe of ur incredibly beautiful lines yaar...sachchi dear d last lines r excellent n beautiful...
a beautifully written sweet cute n romance filled update...
luvya dear...
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