HAPPY DAYS Part 14 on Pg 50...on 25/1 - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME intro!
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats !!!!!!! 4 ur ff ...

interesting start ...

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Nice start pm me or plz update on daily basis
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice concept
Update soon
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                                          CHARACTER SKETCH


GEET:

18 yrs , beautiful, bold, naughty, sweet, cute, intelligent. in short beauty with brains.



Maan Singh Khurana:

19 yrs old, intelligent, handsome, all rounder. 




ADITYA:
Maan's best buddy.


PINKY:

Geet's best friend



TEJI:

Geet's rakhi brother. Studying in EXCEL College, final year student.



PARI:

Teji's girl friend. Studying in EXCEL College, final year student.







Edited by soniyasharma90 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful pic of Geet. maan shirt matches with geet dress😉. didnt u get adi's pic?? sad... Pari also looking good. continue dear 
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by harshdb


beautiful pic of Geet. maan shirt matches with geet dress😉. didnt u get adi's pic?? sad... Pari also looking good. continue dear 

i did. even pasted it, but its nt dere??😭


Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by soniyasharma90



i did. even pasted it, but its nt dere??😭




ha it is there dear sorry
Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
@harshdb
 i hav edited d post...
Edited by soniyasharma90 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
note character  sketch is on page 3.



                       
                  
                   PART 1


@ Khurana mansion 11:00 PM

Maan's room

Maan was sitting on his study table. He was making the list of all the stuffs he should carry to the hostel. He was engrosed in his work when savitri devi comes 2 his room.

maan bete..
upon hearing dadiji's voice he immediately stood up... "dadi ma aap kyu aaye?? mujhe bula liya hota??"
nhn bete aise koi baat nhn hai...hum apne room ja rahe the toh socha aapse milte jaye.

maan hum ye kehne aaye the ki aapne apne ajne ki tayari kar li hai na??..

haan dadima bas ho hi gayi hai bas kuch shopping rehta hai..woh kal ho jayega..
thk hai beta..hum chalte hai..
thk hai dadi ma aab aap aram kar lijiye. while sayind dis he took dadima to her room.


after droping dadima to her room, he gets back n again started doing his work..then suddenly
maans attension was caught by his phone which was ringing. he sees on the screen, he sees the caller name "isko abhi time mila phn karne ka"


 hello adi..
 hey dude wats up yaar??

nthg much.  just peparing list of the stuffs...we will need in hstl.

so u r cmng 2 mrow na??
yes offcourse yaar i m coming. hw can i miss my last chance 2 hang out wid my schools frnz.

k..buddy meet u 2mrow at the mall.

yup.
gudnght dude.

gudnght adi.

after dat he quickly finished d list n den went to bed to catch some sleep.

@ Handa Mansion 

geet as usual she was doing her favoraite work irritating evry1...she was teasing her younger brother titu who was studying...when she heard her mother calling her..
rano: "geet...geet bete",,,geet dint replied ... "kaha ho tum??".

haan ma...she said while running to the kitchen.
 
she was talking wid her mother when moninder came.

moninder: hwz my angel??
 
i m f9 paa. aapne itni der kaha laga  di...ajj bhi u knw na its vry spcl day... she said making angry face..
 "i was held in sm work doll dats y i m late"..he said ..making pleading face..

its k papa she siad while giving side hug to moninder...

"atleast knw u can hav ur dinner as ur father is here??" while pulling geet's cheek ...

yes ma...i dint wanted 2 miss my last chance 2 dine wid papa... she said giving a cute smile 2  rano. 

all three of them had their dinner after that geet left 2 her room. she was really excited about the hstl life. she was sitting on her bed...pillow in her lap she was thinking about college.
suddenly her phone rang. she picked the call, it was pinky.

 hi geet.

kya hi?? pure din main tujhe abhi tm mila phn karna ka??...she said in angry tone.

sorry baba, i was busy in packing. dat's y?...she tried 2 explain d reason...y she couldn't cll her.

faking anger..thk hain aab bhane mat bana.

 packing ho gayi?? kal jana hai na?? yaar mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai?? colg me seniors pata nhn kya haal karenge??

are tnsn mat le...kuch nhn hoga...tujhe toh adat hai kamkaha tnsn lene ki...kal ki sab tyari ho gayi bas ab kal ka intzar hai...aur waise bhi teji bhaiya hai na waha pe.

 haan yaar. kal hum apni life me 2nd phase ( college life) start krenge.chal kal milte hai??? gud nght dear.

gud nght.

both hang up. geet went 2 sleep while thkng abt their nw life. she doesnt even knw whn she slept while dreaming.









precap: College's First Day!!!!!




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Edited by soniyasharma90 - 12 years ago

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