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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 8)

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                           part 3


she was about to sit..
he - ek kaam karna apni purse me ye mera mob rakhna..gir gaya to..(he handed her his mobile)
she angrily kept it in her purse..
she - tum helmet use nahi karte...??
he - helmet.??..never..helmet to ladkiyan estemal karti..ladke nahi...(he said proudly)...
while she accpting defeat..
sat behind him..
holding him tightly...
he - thik se pakdana haan..
she - right..
he started d bike fastly..making her scare..
n both left...

both reached to coffee shop...
she got out of bike...
n saying THNX...started to get in...
he frowned...

SELFISH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she turned to meet his eyes..." sorry..?? "

he - mumbai ke pani me etni selfishness hai ye to mujhe pata hi nahi tha...

she backed to him n stood in front of him..

she - matlab...
he - apni ietni impo*nt cricket match chhodkar agar me ek ladki ki help karne ke liye etni dhoop me usse coffee shop chhodta hu...n she cnt even offer me water...??...isn't dat selfishness...
she removed her goggles n looked at him suspicisouly...
she - r u sure..
he - ofcorse..it is called selfishness...
she - no no no..not about dat...r u sure..u r not flirting wid me..??
he - r u serious..??..ek aisi ladki jo rasta kho gayi hai...usse mera jaisa ek gentle man agar rasta dhoond ke de raha ho...to...
she rolled her eyes...wen vil he speak litle less..she thought..
she - samajh gayi..samajh gayi..
he looked at her n smiled..
like he was happy dat he won..

...

inside coffee shop

he was sitting on chair wid cords playing sum song in ears...
while she made hers elf sit on front chair getting irritated...
she - shhtt...iss charging ko aaj hi khatam hona tha...she spat taking out cell's battery...
he - mobile ab madat nahi adat ban gayi hai..
she got more irritated - yah right...!! aur ye kisne kaha..
he - mene..he joked..
sge gave him disappointing look..rubbing d battery of cell on her thumb...
he - akhir tumhari prob kya hai..tum bataogi...??
she - me shadi ke liye ladka dekhne aayi hu...
he started to laugh...
she - isme hasne wali kya baat hai...?? sirf ladke ladkiyan dekh sakte hai..??...ladkiyan ladke nahi dekh sakti..??
he - aaj kal ki ladkiyan shadi chhodkar baki sab ke liye ladke dekhti hai..isliye...nwz...(he starightened on chair smiling)..ladka pasand aaya..??
she - kahan na ek baar nahi mila karke..
he - ohhk...
she - neighbours mile par wo bhi arrogant..
he rolled his eyes...
he - tension kya hai..??
she - us ladke ka numder mere cell me hai..aur cell ki battery down hai...she said sighing..
he - wattt...tumhe uska number muh jubani yaad nahi..?
she nodded in no casually - nahi..aur isliye..mujhe sham tak rukna hoga..usse milne ke liye..
he - NO kehna ke liye..
she looked at him now - tumhe kaise pata..
he - wo jab tum con box par baat kar rahi thi na..wo mene sun liya...he laughed..
she - wattt...
she got angry now...
she - tum chori chhupe meri bate sun rahe the..????
he - chori chhupe..???...chori chhupe sunne ke jarurat hi nahi padi...tum abhi bhi etne jor se bol rahi ho..ke mumbai ka koi insan bhi sun le...me kyu sunu chori chhupe...
she looked at him confused..wat to ans for dis now...
just den a lady disturbed dem...
lady - how can i help u..
he - haan...ek kaam kijiye..a cold coffee wid ice-cream and a club sandwitch wid burst cheeze..very well grilled ok...aur..(just den he looked at her)..umm tum kuchh logi..??

she rolled her eyes...

she sarcastically - thnxx...(she looked at lady)..1 latey for me..
lady went back..
he shouted - musturd sauce alag se dena...
lady smiled - ok sir..
he den looked back at her...only to find she taking her anger on her cell...
he - ab mob chal nahi raha hai..to isme etna gussa hone wali kya baat hai...
she - kya matlab..ek to uss chamat ki vajah se mera poora din waste hone wala hai..
he - to fir nikal do uska khayal apne dimag se..khamkha tension kyu leneka..
she was litle surprised wid his language..
she - lene ka..?...she repeated him..
he casually - haan..use NA hi kehna hai na..nahi mila to nahi mila..chali jao vapas..baad me ek sms bhej dena...
he again started...lolll
he - tum mumbai ki ladkiyan bhi kamal ho haan..2 mulakaton me ek ladke ke sath coffee shop me chali aati ho...aur jise ek baar dekha tak nahi..uska khayal dimag se nikal fek nahi sakte...
she was not gonna excpet defeat now..
she - oyye helloo...ye 2 mulakaten vagaira kya..ek baar mene tumse adress puchha aur dusri baar...umm..dusri baar...
he - aage..aagee...
she - tum mere pichhe chale aaye...
he - wattt..me tumhare pichhe aaya..
she - haan toh...
he - tum kehna chahti ho ke me tumhara pichha kar raha hun...
she - ho sakta hai...
he looked at her in disbelieve...
she - mene socha..chhodo na..es anjane sheher me..kis anjan insan se madat magne ke bajay...pichha pada insan kya bura hai..
she joked...
he - wahhh..achha logic hai...jane dona..tum jiti me hara..bass...
she - waqt aane par gadhe ko bhi apna baap banana padta hai..
he - wattt..wat did u just say...??
she - kuchh nahi..tumhe nahi..uss ladke ko bol rahi hu...
...
he so badly wanted to tease her...
he naughtily - hmm...to fir..shadi ki date fix huyi ya nahi...
she gave him a cheeky smile 
he smiled back wid same tease..
she - ha ha..joke..kuchh tey vagaira nahi huva hai..ok..

just den d lady cake wid deir orders..
she at lady - thnqq..
lady left..
she - ek toh..ye sab chize meri samajh me nahi aati..
he - shayad tum samjhna hi nahi chahti...
she - ho sakta hai...par ye..shadi..saas-sasur..rishte...i just dnt trust dis instrustions...
he - ab isme trust ki kya baat hai..ye hamara culture hai..
she - arre..hum kitne dino tak yahi ratne wale hai..ab yahi dekh lo.ab ye ladka..black or white hai ye tak mujhe pata nahi..meri ma ki frnd ne meri ma ko uska no diya..meri ma ne bina mujse puchhe mera photo tak use send kar diya..aur ye sample..meri photo dekh kar usne haan keh di...hauhhh...she made shocking expressions..
he while eating - u r right...aise kaise..i mean..photo dekh ke koi haan kahta hai kya..milna chahiye..baten karni chahiye..
she - exactly..usi point par wo mujhe pasand nahi aaya...
he suddenly stopped eating shocked..
he - heyy...tumne notice kiya..finally ek to topic aaya jahan humari soch milti ho...
she laughed agreeing..
she - aur uppar se ye jankar ke woh delihi se..me usse milna tak nahi chahti thi...
he stared at her in confusion..
he - kya..he thought he heard wrong..
she repeated casualy- he is from delhi na...
he - oyyee..ye tum delhi delhi kya kar rahi...explain karna jara...
she looked at him like wat happened to him...
she - i mean..m from mumbai...n he is from delhi...(she made litle weired face)..delhi..u know...

he - wait wait wait..ye shakale mat banao...tumne delhi ko samajh kya rakha hai...delhi ke ladke mumbai ke ladke ko se jyada smart hote hai...
geet laughed - aur aise delhi ke ladke hi tey karte hai...she joked
he - isme tey kya karna hai..truth is truth...delhi ke ladke mumbai me apna ek auda create karte hai
she - haan..kyunki..delhi me banne ke liye khaas kuchh hai hi nahi...so dey dnt hav option basically...
he - bilkul nahi..kyunki ab mumbai me talent kafi kam kam hai..
she put her elbow on table and resting her chin on her palm...waiting for him to finish his lines...
he - mumbai me briliance ki kami hai..dats d reason...
she shook her head knowing he is not gonna accept defeat...
he - maan li na haar...esi quality ke vajah se tumhari maa ne tumhare liye delhi ka ladka dhunda..he said proudly..
she - oyyee..maa 10 ladja dhundegi..par shadi kisse karni hai ye me decide karungi...
he - to wo tumhari prob hai..delhi ke ladkon ki nahi..
she - prob delhi ki life style me hai...tumhari language..left right left right...tum khud bhi samajhte ho...
he - well..for ur information..hum language mumbai ki language se to acchhee hi hai...edhar ko aake..udhar ko mudke..left ko side me jane ka...haannn..hum confused nahi hote...
she rolled her eyes...he can talk so much yaar...she thought..
she - really now..u people r not confused...mene abhi abhi ek door pe likha huve dekha..'adha litre'..arre kya adha litre..
he laughed - arre..woh delhi ke management ka issue hai..tum nahi samjhogi...
she repeated - management..??
he - haan management...man to man management..ab woh kya hai na..woh msg jiske liye hota hai..woh usse milta bhi hai..aur woh samjhta bhi hai...
he - hum jo delhi wale hai na...kam bolte hai..selcted bote hai..aur jo impo*nt hai wohi boltey hai..jiske paas dimag hota hai..wo barabar samajh jata hai...
she - really..
he - 1 min..mera abhi khatam nahi huva hai...ab tum net to use karti hi hogi...ofcorse karti hogi...
she finally cut him - how much u talk...dnt u get tired...
he nodded in NO..
he - made in delhi..he announced proudly...
she shook her head..
just den deir bill came..
she - thnqq
she payed for only her
she - tum delhi ke logon ki apni ek duniya hoti
he nodded smiling - chalo me chalta hu..meri batting baki hai..
she stopped him - me bas apni coffee ke liye pay karne wali hu...
he looked at her in shock... - kyuuun.
she - kyu matlab..she laughed shooking her head...
he got worried - kyu matlab kya..mere paas paise nahi hai...
she shouted litle loudly - wattt
he looked here n dere if anybody watching dem...
n making baby face sat again on chair...
she - how is dis possible...
he - y cnt it b possibl...me toh cricket khel raha tha...tum hi aa gayi mujhe adress puchhne...
she - toh...
he - toh kya..mujhe kya pata tha..ye sab aise ho jayega...mere paas paise nahi hai..
he started checking his pockets once again...
she showed him d money - ye meri cofffee ke paise..
he - plz mere paise paid kar do na..me tumhe deta hu na..baad me..
she - baad me kab..
he - baad me..matlab..abhi bahar jakar de dunga..
she - aur woh kaise...
he - kaise..umm...
he suddenly find atm card in his pocket...
he sighed in relief...
he - ye dekho..atm card hai mere paas...abhi bahar jakar tumhare paise de deta hu...
she - paise hai isme..
he - ofcrose..paise paise...kya paisa paisa..1 min...
he took out his wrist watch...
he - ye loh..mera kimati watch rakh log..agar trust na ho toh...
saying so he again started to wear d watch - mumbai ke log aur trust never...
she raised her hand - de rahe ho na...
he - kya..
she - ur watch...
he looked at her surprised... - kya...
she made baby smiling face - watch...

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