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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 62)

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 d apm n fab update

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Originally posted by nadira29nadira2

it was amazing story
Loved it

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Originally posted by Shalve

superb update...loved it... loved the ending part...

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Originally posted by seemamary

Waiting for an Epilogue sooon.Tongue

updating 


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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 10
last part
awesome one dear...

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Frndz dis is d last update of dis ff...plzz every1 read LIKE N COMMENT..so dat i vil atleast cum to know..how many people read my ff !!





EPILOGUE




wrapped in a beautifull and heavy red bridal attire...

she sat beside d most unknown stranger of her life..who bcuming most known now...
she blushingly looked up to meet his eyes...
only to find her maan staring at her without blinking...

maan looked at her like a statue...
he was so so very much lost in her beauty dat he forgot where dey were for a sec...
she signalled him by her eyes to cum back to reality...
her signal brought him back to his senses n 
den..
he winked at her...
wattt
he winked at her on deir wedding day...
she immediately looked down trying to hide dose pink cheecks of hers...
he is so impossible..she thought..
he was still staring at her drinking her bautifull aspects...

she didn't look up even once knowing he might just make her do sumthing stupid in front of all..
...
n finally d time came...
...
a beautiful black chain was placed on geet's neck by d seductive fingers of her maan...
she looked inpt his eyes wid love n trust as he placed d MANGAL-SUTRA over her neck..

wid his eyes promising her eyes to be hers forever...
he lovingly took SINDOOR in his fingers...n filled her mang wid d color of his love...

she closed her eyes as she felt his finger putting sindoor on her mang..
she so much loved dis moment..
never in her dream..
she expected to becum sum1s whom she hav thought as a stranger in d 1st place...
...
she slowly opened her eyes n found him still looking at her...
d pandit told dem to stand up for d PHERE...
maan took her hand into his in front of all...
geet was lost in his authority over her..
both stood up mutualy lost into each other...
...
as d started to take phere's around d fire...
both promised each other to be each other's for next 7 lives...
wid each phera..dey promised each other...
to face every problem together...
to accpet every pain dat vil try to touch each other...
to love n respect each other...
to give a beautifull lif to deir next generaton..
to understand each other instead of fighting...
to fullfill every desire..every hope..every dream of each other...
to be each other's forever n ever...
...
and wid dat...
dey were married...
dey were husband and wife...
dey were life-partners...

how d two people most unknow to each other...became life partner...
it was weired...but it was beautifull...
it was unexpected but it was written...
it was stupid..but it was special...

...

geet took d 1st step in relucantly..blushing...nervously...
she looke up to find d bedroom decorated beautifull wid roses candles..n blah blah..
n a double bed in d mid decorated beautifull..
d decoration made her more nervous..
she made herself sit in d mid waiting for her stranger mr.delhi aka maan singh khurana..
she giggled at her own thought...
..
but her giggled caught in her throat as she heard d door open n den close..
she didn't dare to look up knowing who it vil be...

as maan opened d door..
he heard her giggled..but she shut suddenly..
maan smirked to himself n walked in..
every footstep of just creating a havoc of hormones in dem..

maan slowly sat on bed beside her...
she still didn't look up..

dere was no-ghoonghat on her face..
so maan was free to admire her angelic face...
but maan liked his bakbak geet more wid whom he spent a whole day and dis was d 2nd meeting...
dey never meet aftr dat meeting..
n directly met on wedding day...
so many emotions..so many things were dere to unfold...
he cleared his throat..trying to break d silence..
she smirked at his effort..
ok smirked in mind..coz she was also as nervous as him...
...
maan - ms.mumbai ko chup rehna bhi aata hai...
dose word made her look up straight into his eyes...
dey were filled wid naughtyness...
she couldn't dare to stare in dem...
she looked here n dere...n den smiled at her own stupid behaviour..
geet - us baat ko lekar me abhi bhi naraz hun...
maan smiled - achha..
geet - haan..aur tumhe mera ehsaan manana chahiye ke mene maa ko is bare me nahi bataya...
maan - ohh...par tumhe maa ko bata dena chahiye tha...ke maan ne na mujhe ullu banaya..
d word ullu was said in a mocking tone..
she made o-shaped mouth...
geet - oyye hello..humare mumbai me na shadi ki raat biwi ki tarif karte hai..unhe ullu nahi kehte..
she said annoyed...
she was scared n he being idiot is teasing her..
maan smirked to himself n put his hand softly on her hand which wa resting on d bed..
d touch made her realize wat she just said..
her cheeks turned pink in embarrasement...
maan - humare delhi me..tearif vagaira karne me time waste nahi karte...aur..
her beat mised wid dat aur..
wat he gonna say next..
ouhh god..he knows how to irrirate me..cnt he just complete his sentense...
geet searched for his next set of word..
n wat he said just blew her heart..
he bend near her ear n whispered - pyar bhari bate karne achha to biwi ko pyar karna hai na..

she blushed like anything on his statement..n tried to push him..
but he caught her hand n pulled her to himself in a jerk..
making her almost fall on his toned body...
as she fell on his chest...
she looked up only to find him staring at her from just mere inches away..n his lips getting dry wid d urge to touc hers...
trying to hide her own emotions..she tried to get up...
but he didn't let her..
instead pulled her more on him..
so he was flat on bed n she was top of him looking here n dere wid her hand arrested in his hands...
geet gently - maan please..
maan - kya plz geet...
geet was so blushing...she was not at all liking him teasing her in dis way...
geet still looking down - maan...
maan still looking at her - geet...
geet naughtily - mr.delhi...aap mujhe aisehi pakade rakhenge...
maan - mrs.delhi..mene aapse kaha tha na..hum ek baar hath pakad le to chhodte nahi..
she smiled - achha...
maan - koi shak...
...
maan gently left her 1 hand n slided dat hand over her bare waist..pulling her closer...
geet shuddered in his embrace..
d proximity was so vulnerable..dat made her more nervous..
she was waiting for his next move..
but his next move just surprised her to d core...
...
in a jerk he rolled her n came on top of her wid his 1 hand tight ovr her wist and another hand holing her wrist...

she looked at him surprised...
he was just too fast...
while he was lost in her..completely..
he was in no mood to talk or tease her...
he was caught by his own desired..
d proximity wasn't teasing him even more..
she knew he was in no mood of talk now..
he breath started to bcum heavy..swallowing her breath..trying to bear his desirebale eyes..
his eyes were fixed on her lips..dat made her more blush...
he gently left her another hand...but his other hand was still holding her bare wasit..
he neared his fingers to her lips..n trace her lower lip wid his index finger...
she closed her eyes giving in to his desired...
his burning touch on her lip..made her more nervous...
soon his index finger was replaced by his thumb...
n dis time he carrased..rubbed her lips possessively n dominantly...
she opened her eyes slowly to meet his peircing eyes...
geet merely whispering - maan...
maan - shhh...
he looked at d loose strands which were not letting him see her face properly..even disturbing his view over her neck...
his finger moved over d trands n he traced his finger from her face..slowly moving down till her neck...making her creazy wid his seductive touc...n finally tucked all d starnds behind her ear...
geet let out a heavy breath..catching maan's attention again to her lips..
he was just drinking her wid his eyes...
his face lowered near her..
n he gently put his lips over forehead..pecking it...
geet closed her eyes in complete submission..
his lips traced a path from her forehead to her eyes..den to nose...biting it a bit..
geet opened her eyes suddenly..saw him looking at her smirking...
she frowned cutely..
but as his lips moved down to meet her lips..
she knew..dere was no backing now...
dere r moving towrds sumthing which vil make dem 1 forever..
n she gave in willingly...
maan lips touched her wid a light brush...
as he brushed his lips over hers..he parted to look up for her reaction..
her eyes were closed n cheeks were pink..
dats all he needed to see..
he again lowered over her...n pressed his lips on her...
as he lingered over her lips...she too responded trying to move closer to him..
but all she could do wa sliding her both hands over his shoulder..den to neck..n finally 1 hand in his hairs...
her soft touch on his body made him loose himself..
n her took her lower lips in his mouth..sucking it as much as possible..
she felt herself as an ice-cream n he was licking it..
her lip-stcik was fede long ago..
knowing he vil not stop..she took his upper lip in her mouth n started wid her fullfills...
saliva slipped her neck..both didn't mind..
dis new sensation was too much enjoyable n pleasurable for dem to think of anything else...
both sucked on each other's lips like hungry lions..
but he wanted more..
he wanted to be aggressive..he wanted to be more passionate..but she was not giving in...
she was lost in herself...
not finding anyother way..he bite her lower lips..her skin was caught in his teeth...
she moaned his name parting her lips..which gave him enough space to slide his tongue in her mouth...
she was breathless..
geet - stop stop stop...
maan stopped unwillingly..looking at her annoyingly...
maan - kya huva...
geet - tumne us din kuchh kaha tha..yaad hai tumhe...
...
maan not wanting to waste time...moved over her neck...
kissing her ever so gently...
maan - kiss din..(still lost in kissing)
maan pulled his hairs..taking him out of her hollow of neck..
geet - wo humari strange meeting...
maan - kya kahatha mene..aur hum subah baat nahi kar sakte is topic par..im busy now...
saying so he again moved in d hollow of her neck..dis time giving her wet kissed..licking of skin... 
geet was loosing she knew...
but so heartedly wante to teach him a lesson for playing dtrcik wid her dat day..
she controlled herself n tried to cum out of her desire..
dats wen she felt his lips carrasing d skin just below her ear...
she moaned adjusting him properly
okk..she vil teach him a lesson..but dis is irrestible..she cnt ignore it...
she dug her nails in d skin of his neck...
he gronaed n bite her ear lobe..followed by kisses..
his bite again make her think of her plan..
she tried again..
geet - maan me kuchh keh rahi thi...
maan  - hmm..
geet - maan..
maan too busy - hmm..
geet annoyingly cupped his face n took it out of her neck..
maan looked at her annoyed..
geet looked at him naughtily..
maan - achha batao..kya hai..
geet - tum ne us din kaha tha..ke ladka aur ladki shadi kebaad ek dusre ko dhire dhire samajhane lagte hai...right...
maan - right..par abhi tumhe kya kehna hai..
geet snaking her hands over his neck - to tumhe mujhse ek din me hi janana hai kya..aaj ke liye kafi jaan liye..ab baki kal right...
she asked so innocently...
maan looked at her baffled...
wattt
NOOO
NO WAYZZZ
maan shockingly - aur ye stupid baat tumhe abhi kyu sujhi...
geet - dis is not stupid..dis is wat u hav mentioned..
maan - mene aise kuchh bhi nahi kaha...
geet - kaha...
maan - nahi kaha..
geet - kaha 
maan - nahi kaha..
geet - kaha na kaha...
maan - kaha na nahi kaha...
geet - kaha baba
maan - nahi kaha baba...
...
geet - maan me...
her word caught in her throat as she felt maan hand behind her neck..opening d string of her blouse...
she looked at him shocked..
but in next second..she became crimson...
while maan smirked...
geet so wanted to punish him for deir weired meeting..but was no where letting her success in her plan...
geet gasped as maan opened d string completely in a jerk making her back arch in response...
maan - if u think dat ur stupid plan vil work..den get it clear...im going to eat u tonight...
his words made her giggle...
while he naughtily slipped in her neck..kissing..rubbing his face allover..almosr driving her creazy wid his touch...
geet was so so lost to protest him by anyway...
maan's condition was worse...
every passing second was her was making him more creazy..urging to hav her more...more n more...
his fingers carrased d sides on her shoulder in precess to slide d strips down...
geet shivered wid his move...
but d shiver turned into utter gasp wen she found her blouse being ripped in a shot...
she hugged him wid all her force..not able to hide her embarracement as she was half naked in d arms of her stranger aka her husband...
maan smiled..enjoying her awkwardness...n hugged her back tightly..carrasing her bare back...
maan - jab mujhe puchh rahi thi ke m i a virgin or not...tab to sharam nahi aa rahi thi..
she blushed into his embrace...
geet - tab mujhe thodi pata tha ke theory practical me convert ho jayegi..
maan smiled - ohh toh ab pata hai ke practical honewala hai...
geet - vil u stop it..
she asked annoyed..he never leaves any chance to tease her..
maan - ek shart par..
geet looked into his eyes suspiciously..
geet - kaisi shart..
maan - kiss me..
geet turned into dark pink shade..
geet - no...
maan - yess..
geet - maan..
maan - tum ne hi kaha tha..le ladko ka sare haqq jatane hote hai...to fir aaj mera pura haqq hai..so kiss me..
geet - tumhari yardasht achhee kyu hai..
maan - dnt change d topic..n kiss me..
geet rolled her eyes...n slammed her lips on his..taking maan by complete surprise...
...
n wid dat both lost control completely...mingling into each other...
kissing..sucking..biting and den licking every part to convert pain into pleasure...
dey lost d track of time...
admirring every special part...
n finally dey became 1...
...forvere...never to get apart...!!!!

dey didn't even cum to know wen  slip to over dem...
it was early morning...
d light rays of sum entered through d windown falling on deir faces...
eir bodies were snaked inot each other...
her legs twisted in his..
his 1 hand snaked her waist while other hand burried in her hairs..
her both hands snaked over his neck n face placed over his throat...
sun rays irritated maan ...nuzzling his nose on geet's cheek...maan hide his face in her neck..
maan's movements on bed awakened geet..as she slowly opened her eyes...
a smile curved over her lips wtching d handsome face of her husband who was sleeping peacefully hugging her tight...
she moved litle close n kissed his nose...
maan moaned in sleep...geet giggled..
she wanted to get up but d pain was not letting her...
geet - ek me hu...aur ek mera pati hai jo aaram se so raha hai...dd
maan - wat is dd...
geet looked at his surprised as he pulled her on top of him...
geet - mujhe laga tum so rahe ho...
maan - pni biwi ki suabh wali muskan kaun miss karega...
geet naughtily - achha
maan - but wat is dd...umm..let me guess...dd for...hmm..dhak dhak...
geet - no..dd for dusht danav..delhi ka dusht danav...
maan pulled her closer nuzzling his nose on her cheeks..
geet - maan..kya kar rahe ho..
maan - loving my mm..
geet -  wat is mm...???
maan kissed her cheek - maan's mishty..
geet loved dat..n rested her head in his chest..
maan - geet..
geet - hmm..
maan - it was a pleasure spending a day with U...
geet smiled...
hugging him tight...
maan carrasing her losse strands - i want to share A LIFE WITH U...<3 <3 <3
...
geet looked inot his eyes surprised...
maan looked at her emotionally for an answer..
geet moved closer to him..
n placed her lips over his...
dats all she could do as an anwer...
...
...a life with U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




D END !!


n with dis last update...

...im signing off to  A DAY WITH U...with a smile !!!!


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