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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 28)

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
waiting or 7th part mishty please update soon.

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Waiting for ur update 

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As usual ur too good angel simply superb as u know i am fan of u and ur FF especially when u use the pics mind blowing
continue...

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MISHTY is not getting good response...

 me crying now... 




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Pracap : 

Mere paas hai...
... <3 <3 <3 <3 <3...
...mere paas hai...

n wid dat...
both started walking mutually..to d way dey want...
dey were walking with each other...

d music...d rythm..started to fed slolwy slolwy...
lower..lower...
n finally...it vanished...

no1 was following d other 1...
for sum reason ...
dey liked dis walk...
but didn't aceept...
neither dey needed or wanted...
dey just walked...

n left for deir track...

                    Part 7 

...
both walking

she - omg...i mean..its was just wow...kya khubsurat gana gaya tum ne yaar..i just loved it...u r a rock star...
he - thnxxx
she - par mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aayi..tumhare gane me thi kaun..sunchi..ya fir wo pehli wali...
he laughed - dono..
she - hmm..cool..par kya wo sach me etni khubsurat hai..ke har chiz me tumhe wohi dikhayi deti hai...
he smile - bhari hai..
she - moti hai..??
he gave irritating look - i meant..bahot hi pyari hai..solid hai..
she - solid...?
she again started laughing at d word solid...
he made angry face - tum mera mazak bana rahi thi kab se..
she - nahi baba...seriously nahi..
dere was sum seriousness in her voice..
he smiled..
she - aur sach kahu..aaj kal aise ladke milte kaha hai..
he - aise matlab..
she - aisi matlab..aisihi..apni gf ke liye kavita likhane wale...wat really inspires dem..i really dnt know but its amazing..
he smiled..
he - me bhi kuchh kahu...
she - kaho na...
he - aaj kal..jisse dekh kar kavita ke bol ban jaye...aisi ladkiyan hai hi kahan ab..
she - hmm true..
he - aaj kal ki ladkiya..pehle salary puchhti hai..emotions attachments..ye sab to baad ki baat hai...
she - par esme galat kya hai..
he - matlab..
she - ab subah ka hi issue dekh lo..humne coffee pi..tum to the khali jeb..aur agar mere paas bhi paise na hot toh...
he looked at her annoyed...she just called him khali jeb..
she laughed - dono ka bartan banjhane padte...
he - tum baar baar mujhe wahin kya tant kar rahi hu...
she - arre..me bas example bata rahi hun..

he still not convinced...

she - aur waise bhi..sab ko security chahiye hi hoti hai...i mean..ye kavita vagaire karna achhee baat hai..shayad tumne sunchi ke liye songs tak likhe honge..par eska kya..
she said making her fingers go in her mouth...
he looked her confused...
she - khane ke liye kuchh nahi lagta...??
he twisted his lips giving idiotic smile..
she laughed - ab sunchi ne bhi tumhe puchha to hoga na..ke kitne padhe likhe ho..aage kya karna chahte ho..
he shook his head smiling...
she - it obvious yaar...
he - mujhe dekhkar tumhe kya lagta hai..
she looked at him confusingly...
he - kitna padha-likha hu me..

she still thought..
he - kaun hun me..kya lagta hai tumhe...
she - um...she started guessing...
he - no stop..
she - ab kya huva...
he - tum guess mat karo..pata nahi kya guess karogi..aur ek bahana mil jayega mujhpar hasne ka tumhe..
she laughed... 
she - achha fir tum hi bata do na..
he - M.Tech hu me...

she - job kahan karte ho..
he - mere khoon ne kabhi kisi ki goolami karna nahi sikha...
she - ohhh hoo..made in delhi..
both looked at each other n giggled...

he - me hamesha se sportsman banana chahta tha..
she - cricket ??
he - hmm..par meri dadi ne kaha pehle apni padhayi complete kar lo..fir business join kar loo...
she - fir..??
he - bagawat..mene kaha me cricket nahi chhod sakta..
she - fir kya...
he - fir kya..dadi ne gussa kiya aur mene business join kar liya..ab aksar daat chalti rehti hai..es mamle me delhi mumbai..same..
she smiled...
she - sunchi se shadi ho gayi..??

he stopped walking..so did she..
for sum reason.his smile faded away..
she looked at his serious face..
he shook his head in NO...smile n started walking again...
she felt sum kind of pain in dat no...
she followed him..
she - kyun..
he - bas nahi ho payi..
she - kyu re..
to ease d situation she joked - kahin woh bhi ajeeb nahi nikli na..
he smiled - aisa kuchh nahi hai ok..
she smiled - i know i know..

both started walking again...
she - par sunchi ke baas kisi aur ladki ki taraf tumne dekha tak nahi hoga...
he didn't look at her..
but his expresion told her dat she is right..
she - u r too loyal to ur emotions haan...
he - pata nahi kyu...
he looked at her now...

both looked at each other for a sec..
he - par waisi gudiya fir kabhi mili hi nahi..
she smiled - mili nahi..ya tumne dhundi nahi..??
he looked at her for dis questions...
he - aise cheeze dhundne se mil jati hai..??
she smiled...
n shook her head in NO...
he too smiled...
he - kitna ajeeb hai na..joote..kapde..gehne...sab humare maap ke hisab se mil jata hai..agar nahi ho to bana sakte hai...par aise cheeze nahi milti...

he said so sincerely..so genualy..
dat she smiled truly at him..
he was way to differet from inside...
though he bahaves kiddish..childish from outside..
but he is a real matured person fron inside...
he - hai na..
she - hmm...tumhe dekh lagta nahi ke tum etne emotional ho...
he raised his colloar..like made in delhi..
n both started laughing...

he - achha mujhe batao..ved kaisa hai..??
she - chale..der ho rahi ho...
saying she started walking..
while he stood dere confused at her avoiding his question..
he immediately followed her...
he - bhhag rahi ho..
she - nahi re..der ho jayegi na..esiliye..
he - abhi bhi NO decided hai ya..ab answer badal rahi ho...
she - answer badalne ki koi vajah ??

he - mujhe kya pata...tumhare kitna ajeeb hai na...jaan bujhkar ved ka topic avoid kar rahi ho..pehle kuchh aur bol rahi thi...aur ab kuchh aur..tumhara kya pata..agle 1 ghnate me jisse milne aayi ho..ussi se shadi karne ke liye haan kar dogi..
...
she - mujhse jyada tumhe hi fikar hai meri shadi ki...
he - kyu na ho..aur isme galat hi kya...agar tum jisse milne aayi ho..woh dil se achha ho..toh usse shadi karne me kya prob hai...
she looked at him...
he - aur waise bhi ussi se toh milne aayi thi tum..mumbai se...
he teased her...
she was serious now...
but he failed to realze dat n teased again...
he - tumhare ved ko pata hai kya...??..haan haan..

she angrily shout - vil u plz just shut up..
a silence spreaded between dem...
she angrily - har baat pe mazak banana jaruri hai kya...
saying so she started walking...
he didn't understand her at all..
he followed her...
he - ye achha hai..kab se tum mera mazak uda rahi thi..wo thik hai..aur mene thoda sa mazak kya bana liya...tum shuru ho gayi.." vil u shut up "..he mocked in her voice...
she looked at him more angrily..
he - ok fine fine..m sorry..ok..
she - no no..dnt b sorry..samne khade insan ki kya situation hai ye soche bina sirf bakbak karte rehna...nonsense..
saying so she started walking again...

he closed his eyes..
he was super angry now...
wat does she think of herself..
she can tease others but other should not tease her...

he shouted - stop...
she stopped n turned abck to face him..
he walked twords her stood in front of her...
he - tum khud ko samajhti kya ho haan..
she looked at him angrily...
he - jab tak tum mujhe nahi bataogi ke tumhari kya prob hai..mujhe kaise pata chalega...3 se 4 ghante huye hai..hume mile huye...kya expect karti ho tum mujhse..ke me tumhare dil ki har baat jaan lu..haan...
she angrily - no no no..etna expect karna to bahot jyada hai...tum sab ladke ek jaise hote ho..bilkul ek jaise...kuchh shanti mile esiliye yahan aayi thi..par yahan jyada hi dimag kharab kar liya mene khud ka...
blabbering in anger..she started to walk again..
he - im not done yet...
she stopped at her place trying to control her anger...
he - kab se dekh raha hun..jo man me aaye bake ja rahi ho...tum kehna kya chahti ho...whoever u r..no way u hav d right to insult me..get dat clear..

she looked at him...
her anger has turned into seriousness now...
she wasn't angry anymore..but was in deep thoughts...
he - tum mujhe keh rahi ho..tum khud kitna sochti ho samne wale insaan ke bare me..mazak..insult..tum karo to thik..par wohi koi aur tumhare sath kare..to tumhe mirchi lagti hai...us ved ko tum aise hi dominate karti hogi..im sure..me ...em khud milunga us ladke se...jisse tum dekhne aayi ho..aur use kahaunga..ke tum se shadi karega..to pachhatayega zindagi bhar..barbad ho jayega...
...

saying so he started to walk angrily...
leaving her alone wid tears..

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    DO HITLIKE BUTTON AND POST ACOMMENT

                                                 nxt pt -  part 8      

                                               Love
                                           MishTy  




Edited by Angelic_mishty - 21 December 2011 at 1:35am

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
I feel aise ladna chodke she should share her problem with him, after all usne apni saari kahani jo batadi hai..

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Excellent update...
waiting to know geet's side of story...
please continue soon...

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