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A...Day...with...U !!! MANEET FF epilogue - pg 75 (Page 13)

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he was num at her laughing face...
she was so lost laughing..
she didn't care of anything...
he has seen her just sum hrs ago..but she is not stopping surprise him...

her laughing face made him smile too...
his anger..his everything seemed like dissolving into it sumwhere...
he too started laughing watching her laugh...
both kept laughing unconditionally..

...

d sun started cuming on head...
place is quite surrounded wid trees giving cool winds...
both walking around d silent area near d dargah...wid BHEL in deir hands...

( i hope i dnt hav to explain wat is bhel now...lolll)

she was eating slowly taking her time where he was eating like if he vil not eat in time ..sum1 vil cum n snatch his bhel...lolll
...
she did notice it...
she - tum hamesha etni jaldi me hi rehte ho kya...
he was busy wid his bhel..
he - kyu...kya huva...
she - nahi...tum etne fastly khatam kar rahe hai ho..isliye puchha...
he - arre meri batting baki hai wahan...
she - hmm..right...
he - so kaisi lagi..humare delhi ke bhel...
she casually - thik hai...
he confused - thik matlab...
she - thik matlab..nothing great...
he excitedly - ye koi jawab huva..etni achhee bhel kha kar bhi aise shakal bana rahi ho...
she - arre..mujhe ye thik hi lagi..just bcoz bhel delhi ki hai..isliye wo achhee..is it neccessary...
he -are but achhee chiz ko achhee kehne me kaisi zizak...
she smiled - isme zizak ki baat hi nahi hai...chize jagahon par depend karti hai...
he confused still eating bhel - ab ye kya naya...
she - naya nahi..ab yahi dekho na..edli wada..uttapa...dosa..ye sari chize..south indian restaurant me hi achhee lagti hai...
he made face - ye sab tumhara mumbai me hota hoga..humare delhi me aisa koi rule nahi hai...
she raised her eye-brows - over-confidence...??
he - isme over-confidence ka sawal hi nahi hai...ab ye bhel hai..iska jagah se kya lena dena..bhel bhel hoti hai..kahin bhi khao...
she - delhi me etni lackness hogi ye mujhe pata nahi tha...
he made face - ohh ya...
she - ab isme tumhara bhi koi dosh nahi...DELHI ME BEACH NAHIN HAI NA...
she smirked n started to walk...
he stopped eating for a sec...
omGGG
she hit his weak point again...
however he was no ways gonna accept defeat...
he followed her hurriedly...
he - matlab...
she - lackness...
he - lackness...??????
she - ab kya hai na...pani puri..delhi ki language me GOL-GAPPE(SHE MOCKED)..shev puri...bhel..ye sab beach par khane me maza aata hai...par kya kare...delhi me sabkuchh hai..par beach hi nahi...
she said wid all power of her tease...
...
ohh ohh owooo
he had to answer...
he was no way accept dis...never...
he - wait wait wait...
she smirked n waited for his answer...
he was so hardly fidning for sumthing...
while she was waiting for it wid giggle...
he - umm...chandni chauk hai mumbai me...?????
she confused - wattt
he screamed in happines - yesss...
she gave him weired look...
he excitedly - dats it..i got 1...dats called lackness...
she - vil u explain...
she knew he musy talking sumthing stupid...

he - bhalehi tumhari mumbai me beach ho ...sea ho...automic research centres ho..but..but but...chandni chauk dekhne ke liye tumhe delhi hi aana hoga...
she - really...aur aisa kya hai..tumhare chandni chauk me..??
he - arre kya nahi hai..ye puchho...shayad ye bhi ho ke africa ka ke jungle me tiger na mile but delhi me chandni chauk aur uska crowd hamesha rahega...
he said proudly..while she rolled her eyes at his baseless talk...

she - wahhh...apne sheher ki kamjori ko chhupana tumhe kitne achhe se aata hai...
she smirked...
while he made gol gappa mouth...angrily...
he - kamjori...isme kamjori kaisi..
she gave idiotic smile...

he more baby angrily - arre...hum me jo speciality use batane me kaisi kamjori...ab tum hi batao...hum kab se sath me ghum rahe hai...ek baar bhi..ek baar bhi tumhe laga ke me tumhara fayada uthaunga..ya tumhare sath misbehave karunga...did u felt insecure at all...
he aske confidently knowing she vil say NO...
but to his badluck...lolll
she - aua agar aisa lage bhi..toh..do i hav option...
his mouth fell right open...
while she enjoyed her bhel...
he - matlab...
she - mere paas koi aur option nahi hai na...she smirked...
he looked at her in shock...
she - jo hai aisa hai..chalta hai...

he shouted - chuppp

she looked at him confused...
he - chup chup...bilkyl chup...bahot ho gaya...

she thought he was really angry now...
but den read his face for a second n understoo dat he was just timepass angry...lolll

he - bas bas bas...bahot ho gaya...not its hurting my ego...no way m gonna listen dis..m leaving right not...
he stated angrily thinking she vil b sorry now...
but to his shock...:P
she - arre haan..tumhari batting bhi baki hai na...jao tum..i vil manage...
saying so she started to walk on her way smirking...
he was mad at her now...
he shouted kiddingly - thik hai..thik hai..ja raha hu me...
he shouted litle loudly - suna na tumne ja raha hu me...
saying so he walked on opposite direction blabbering...

"..ye achha hai..insaaniyat ke nate kisi ki madat karo to coffee ka bhi hisab rakhte hai..wo to achha huva mere paas ATM card tha..warna..."
he walked a litle n turned back walking towrds her...
still blabbering angrily...

"...thnq kehna to door ki baat...par galati to meri hai..jahan kaha wahan le gaya...sari musibat yahi yahi hai...yahi hai biggest prob..."

he kept blabbering till he reached her...
she stopped and looked at him...
she - arre tum ja rahe the na...???
he - sanskar nahi hai mujh me...
she shocked - wattt...
he cleared - kisi ladki ko akele chhodkar jau aise sanskar nahi hai mujh me...
she - ohh..like dat...
he - yes...humne ek baar sath dedi to fir kabhi nahi chhodte...
she smiled...

" in dis few hrs she had cum to know how true person he is...
though he speak a lot...
but he is like a mirror...jo dil me wahi bahar...jo bhi hai bol deta hai..man me dabakar nahi rakhta...aur dil...aaj ke daur me ek anjane insaan ki etni help..iske bawjood ke wo aapse coffee ka bhi hissab rakhte..."

she smiled at her own thoughts...
he got more angry...
she is laughing on him...
he - tum has rahi ho...???
she - nahi has rahi me...
he - arre tumhe kya pata..delhi ke ladke kitna achhe aur sanskari hote hai..
she - pata hai mujhse..delhi ke ladke kitne sanskari hote hai mujhe pata hai.,...she said sincerely...
he - impossible...tum kya jano delhi ke ladko ke bare me...
but she cut him...
she - VED delhi se hi hai...
he was silent once again by her...
her 1 word makes him silent...
she never stops amusing him...
in dis past few hrs...she hav made him hald mad but still she keeps him surprised everytime...

saying so she smiled at him genualy...
he was mesmerized by her real pretty smile...
she indeed looked cute...
she - umm..yahan se chandni chauk jyada door nahi hoga na...
his silence was borken by her...
he came by to his senses shooking his head...

she smiled at him n started to walk...
he scratched his head for a sec n shook his head bringing himself back to reality completely...
n noticed..she has gone a bit...
he ran behind her...

WAITTT
...arre ruk na...

...
...

CHANDNI CHAUK

both reached chandni chauk...
walking fastly through d crowd...making deir ways sumhow...
talking to each other...
he kept talking n talking n talking...
she did talk in between but listened more...
crowd started to increase...
she slowly stopped near stop...thinking he vil stop noticing her stop...
but he without noticing her..kept walking n talking...
...
aftr sum time...
he turned only to find her nowhere...
he turned completely around but couldn't find her...
he searched for her madly...
walked back...
asked people about her...
but still couln't find her...

he himself dnt know y..but he fely protective of her...
he searched her everywhere but couln't find him...
he searched every single place he could...
he did searched her heartly...

he running here n dere...
reached at a litle less crowded place...
wen he passed thorugh dere...
she appeared behind him n smiled at him...
as he was running further..he didn't see her...
she saw d antic shop n went in...

her eyes fell on different different antic things n finally catched to a antic happy man...
it was so lovely...
she liked it too much...
sp - mam..dis is really amazing...hav rare collection...
she - true ya..dis is beautifull...iska kya cost hai...
sp - only 5 thousand mam...
she - 5 thousand...kuchh jyada nahi bata rahe hai aap...
sp - arre nahi mam..ekdum reasonable rate hote hai humare yahan...
she - ohh...sab yahi kehte hai..kuchh to kam kijiye...
sp - arre madam..me sach me bahot normal rate bata raha hu...
she - arre kya aap bhi...mujh bahot pasand aaya...esilye to puchh rahi hu...

...
he was searching for her here n dere n finally saw her in d antic shop...
he shook his head at how ignorant she is...
he ran dere...
he was literally panting highly...
he - puri duniya me dhund raha hu me tumhe..???
his voice broke her conversation wid d shopkeeper...
she looked at him...
he - tum yahan kya kar rahi ho...??
she (to sp) - its ok...thnx..
saying so she put d happy man back...
n moved to him...
she - kya sahi peice tha..i tell u...
he smiled proudly...
both started walking again...
she - tumhare delhi ke log paise kam nahi karte kya...
he proudly - kyu kam kare woh..uski mehnat ke paise woh kyu kam kare...
she - aye lo...to mere kya chori ke hai kya...
he looked at her...
she - me bhi apni mehnat ke hi paise bacha rahi hu...
he smiled at her...
she looked at him confused...
he - humare desh ki economical capital kaunsi hai...
she more confused like wat is it with him...
he smiled - mumba..right...
she - haan...
he - arre to fir tum mumbai ki hokar thode se paiso ke liye kyu apna dimag kharab kar rahi ho...
she - me economical city me rehti hu...economical city mere ghar me nahi hai...
...
he - ab ente se paiso ke liye bichare ki jaan logi kya...
she - jaan lene ka sawal hi nahi hai..paisa paisa hota hai...sab ko apna paisa pyara hota hai...
he angrily - aur ye paise paise ke chakkar me kahin kho jati toh...dekha na tumne kitna crowded hota hai humara chandni chauk...
she smirked - crowd...???
he looked at her confused...
she - tum ek mumbai ki ladki se crowd ki bate kar rahe ho...
he - tum kabhi kisi doctor se consult kiya hai...crowd crowd hota hai..ab isme bhi mumbai aur delhi kahan se aa gaya...
she - arre me koi chhoti si bachhee hu kya crowd me kho jane ke liye...
he sumwhere had no answer...but he had his words...
he - tum etni ajeeb kyu ho..2 min pehle us sp se zagad rahi thi aur ab mujhse...
she - isme zagade ki baat hi nahi hai..tum kabhi convince kyu nahi hote...
he was totally amused of her stubborn nature
she - tu maan lo..ke paise paisa hota hai..aur usse bachana hi chahiye...
he - maan liya meri maa...maan liya...
she rolled her eyes...
he teased her - shadi ke baad apne pati ke achhe khase paise bachane wali ho tum haan...
but once again..her answer was unexpected...lolll

she - oyye hello...uske paise wo bachayega...me apne paise bachaungi...
his smile deded away wid her answer...
is she normal..is she human...got im so confused...
every time he makes a vie about her..n she proves him wrong everytime...
he was amused at her thinking...
she was indeed different n unique as well...

he kept staring her...
she looked at him confused...
she - aise kya dekh rahe ho..??
he still kept staring her...
she - tum mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho...???

he - tumhe pyar ho sakta hai...is baar par m kabhi believe nahi kar sakta...

she rolled her eyes...
he - im sure about it...he laughed...
she - arre..pyar ka paise bachane kya sambandh...
he - mene kab kaha ke sambandh hai...par tumhare jaise spicy n sweetless ladki kisi se payr kaise kar sakti hai...yaho soch raha hu me...he laughed...
she smiled at him...
she - pyar se pet nahi bharata...aur ye spicy...sweetless..ye philosophycal words sunne me achhe lagte hai...par agar hum kisi se bahot jyada pyar kare to kya hume bhook nahi lagti..hum khana band kar dete hai...nahi na...
he again looked at her confused...
den shook his head...
understanding her is quite impossible for him...
he smiled...
she - mujhe bhook lagi hai...
he - kyaaa...
she - mujhe bhook lagi..wo etni se bhel se mera pet nahi bhara...
he - tumhe bhook lagi hai..yahan par ek mast sand-witch shop hai...
she - sandwitch...??
she made weired face...
he - aisi shakal mat banao...just taste it...sab kuchh bhool jaogi..im pretty sure...
she rolled her eyes...
he - agar tumhe nahi khana to mat khao..me to khaunga...
saying so hemade his way to shop...
while she sighed n followed him...

near d shop..dere was coin-box..
he went in while she moved for making a call.
she dilled sum numbers..

she - haan maa...me bol rahi hu...haan me thik se pohoch gayi..us adress par bhi gayi thi..par ghar band hai(pause)...abhi kya..delhi ghoom rahi hu..(pause)..maa..number mere cell me hai..cell ki battery down hai..(pause)..maa meri excuses nahi bana rahi hu(angrily)..ab cell nahi chal raha hai..isme meri kya galati hai(angrily)...(pause)...maa...agar mere man nahi hota..to me yahan tak aati hu kyu...aur me sham ko jane wali hu naa kehne ke liye...(pause)..maa maa maa..naa means..etni jaldi na kare..ye kahungi...ek dusre ko jane ke baad..(pause)..dnt u trust me maa...(pause)..ok ok..mujhe no do..me usse phone pe baat kar lungi...aur maa tum plz pareshan mat ho wahan pe...(pause)..haan tell me...98$#$#$#$#..haan...me baat..haan maa...yaah..bye bye...yaah..

saying so she hanged...
she paysed for d call n came out..
just den he reached to her...
he - garam garam club sandwitches..lo...
she - i dnt want it...
he - arre tum kha kar to dekho..muh me pani aa jayega...
she angrily - kaha na mujhe nahi chahiye...
he - kya huva..2 balls me 1 run bana na ho..aur ball wrong out de tab jaise gussa aata hai na...waisi shakal lag rahi hai tumhari...he joked...
she sighed trying to control her anger..
he - kisse baat kar rahi thi..ved se...
she lost now - vil u plz just shut up...
he was shut her real anger...
she - plz stop dis non-sense..plz...mujhe thodi si shanti chahiye...
saying so she walked out...
...

while he stood dere all alone...
wid his serious face...
watching her left..
...
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 04 December 2011 at 2:59pm

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feel nice to be first
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itni bakwas karte hai
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hw sum1 cud talk ds too much..
wo bhi msk..??

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msk nai hai kuch aur hi hai...kitna bolta hai

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awesome dear love to read it again

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That was a lovely update. But ye ladki kitni moody he. Bechare pe apna saara gussa utar diya.

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