Y is life so UNFAIR??!! Thrd 2 (link thrd 3 pg 1) - Page 43

me again first
but third in hitting the "like"
will comment soon

i love the whole scene whereEdited by anshra - 12 years ago

Ok the first thing that comes into my mind is

Awesome jazz😊

👏👏👏👏👏👏

 

And now my suggestion.. plz don't force urself to change ur character until it is really required..

bcs ur story is going at perfect pace and timings.. its so much fun to read..😉

Just go with flow and with what u think is right as a writer

Let me tell u.. u r doing fab job

Luv u n ur FFs😳

Edited by anshra - 12 years ago

Awesome... looks like he will do something really bad to her... continue soon...😊

Awesme part.waitng for next update

awesome part
continue soon.

Very intresting update, loved d way it still holds a sence of mystery abt wat will b maan's nxt step n geet's answer to it, plzzz dont let geet to break infront of him,, i love her courage to stand against d monster singh khurana

Nice update
Contonue soon

awesome upadte loved it

wonderful...