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MG/Arhi FF-Suffocation Part 22 UPDT! pg31/ DEC 27 (Page 3)

Honkytonk Goldie

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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Hey, just wanted to say i loved ur last 2 chapters...story is getting interesting...can't wait for the guys to meet the girls!!!
Many thanks

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Shopau Senior Member

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged

Part 7

Arnav got ready and rushed downstairs to the Hall. He grabbed a sandwich and went to see Daadi.

Arnav: Kya Daadi aap bhi naa? Aapne Kal mujhe yaad kyun nahi dilaya ki aaj raat itna important kaam hone waala hai?

Daadi couldn't believe her eyesShocked. After a long time she saw him so happy. She had tears in her eyes.

Daadi: Chhote? Hume yakeen nahi ho raha' Aap ke chehre par Khushi? (hee hee only if daadi knew about "Khushi")LOL

Arnav: Bas daadi aaj ke baad aap kabhi dukhi nahi hongi. Ab toh iss ghar mein bas khushiyon ke hi geet sunenge. Bhai ki zindagi badalne wali hai daadi' 

Daadi: haan chhote, aapke bhai ki zindagi badalne wali hai, she said in a deep thought.
aur aapki bhi, she added smiling at her grandson.

Arnav couldn't understand the double meaning in her tone out of excitementConfused.

Arnav: Accha Daadi, Bhai ko hamare iss plan ke bare mein kucch bataya toh nahi hai na aapne?

Daadi: Bilkul nahi.. Aur usse pata chalna bhi nahi chahiye. Nahi toh woh wahan jaayega hi nahi. Samjha tu?

Arnav: Ofcourse Daadi' Aap apne itne handsome pote ke hote huye pareshaan kaise ho sakte ho? And you don't worry mein time par ghar wapas aajayunga'

Daadi: Arre tu phir jar aha hai..

Arnav: oh ho daadi!! planning karni hai, samjha karo  ,
He gave his cheeky smile.Big smile

Savitri Devi was the happiest person in the world today. Talks about Maan's wedding to a girl from one of the richest families in Delhi had been going on for a while and today was the day when she would get a chance to see her. God knows how many lies they had to tell Maan so that he would come with them. But nothing worked. Finally the bride's family had consented that they would invite Maan without telling him the real reason so that both the families could meet personally. Savitri Devi knew in her heart that this was the right girl for her family. She had already brought a lot of happiness and excitement without even being in the Khurana mansion.


Location: Handa Family at IGI Delhi airport;

The Handas were waiting for Khushi in the arrivals lounge when Rano's phone rang. It was Geet.
Rano: Geet ab kya hai Puttar? Iss baar kisse baat karni hai tujhe, daarji se, apne papaji se se ya tayiji se? Puttar tu picchle aadhe ghante mein 5 baar phone kar chuki hai. Khushi kea ate hi use tere paas bhejdenge.

Geet bit her tongue. She thought of an excuse. Geet: ah! Maa mujhe toh Brij veerji se baat karni hai. Unhone wapas phone bhi nahi kiya?

Rano: Kaise karega who Maan ko invite karne jo gaya hai?
It slipped off her tongue because of irritation. RP gave Rano a look.

Geet: Kya? Kahan Kya karne gaye hain?

Rano: Woh hamare important clients ko sham ki party ke liye invite karne gaya hai. She tried to cover up
Rano: Accha geet hum tujhe Khushi ke aane ke baad phone karte hai. Bye. She hung up the phone.

Geet (self thought): Yeh aaj sab ko ho kya gaya hai?

At the airport Khushi came out of the arrivals Hall all excited to meet her family members after so long.

Khushi: Maasiii !!!!! Khushi ran upto Rano as she fondly called her so.

Rano hugged Khushi about her journey. She met the other family members with love and then went to Daarji.

Khushi: Yo DJ! LOLHow are you young man?

Daarji burst out laughing. Daarji: arre puttar yeh sab khel tu abni Behen ke saath khelna. Meri samajh mein tum bacho ke khel nahi aate.

Khushi: arre haan! Di kahan hain?

RP: teri Di office gayi hain. Abhi abhi phone aaya tha. Yeh le usse baat karle.

Khushi: Ji Tayiji.

Khushi called Geet. Geet on seeing that it was RP calling got really excited.

Geet: Hello?

Khushi: Diii !!!! Oh my god! Aap kahan ho? I really want to meet you. Like right NOWClap

Geet: Mai office mein  hi hoon tu abhi aaja. But then something struck her. Actually Khushi, meri ek meeting hai, tu sabke saath ghar ja mein 2 hrs mein aati hoon.

Khushi: U sure?

Geet: Positive.Smile jab tak tu freshen up hogi mai ghar aa jaungi.

Khushi Okey Dokey! Bye.Smile

Geet: Bye sweety.

Next: old Precap... Arnav meets...Wink
new precap... Maan meets BrijSmile
Plz Plz Plz press the like button and comment. I know every one is waiting for the boyz and girls to meet. It will be very special and exciting momemt. Keep your fingers crossed. The moment is not far.Smile

Edited by Shopau - 02 October 2011 at 1:52am

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pri12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
lovely &  cool updte

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Honkytonk Goldie

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Really nice update...can't wait for the BIG meeting between the couples!!!
Many thanks

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maaneetsangel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
part 7 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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aakriti120 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 6:26am | IP Logged
wow...interesting concept. ...n good going...

continue soon...

thanks for the pm...:)

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aakriti120 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
oops...double post...sorry...

Edited by aakriti120 - 03 October 2011 at 2:47am

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Shopau Senior Member

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Posted: 04 October 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged

Part 8

Location: Khurana Constructions;

Pinky Manchanda the receptionist seated Brij in the Maan's personal lounge/cabin, where he met with guests for other than business purposes. It was more like giving Brij a token of respect. Pinky asked him to wait there as her boss would be there any minute. Brij assumed that Maan would take some time and therefore started looking around the room. Everything in the room spoke of his taste for unique and intricate art forms and creativity. Each piece emitted the status and class of Maan Singh Khurana.  

Maan: Hello Mr. Handa! He greeted him with his same famous stern expression and a slight smile on his lips (barely visible).

Brij did not expect Maan to be there so soon. He was impressed by his punctuality. Clap
Brij: Hello Mr. Khurana. I hope this sudden appointment didn't really trouble your schedule for the day in any manner?

Maan smiled.
Maan: Call me Maan. We are meeting personally so we should be greeting each other in the same way too. And the schedule is not a problem Mr. Handa.

Brij: It's Brij.
He extended his hand for a handshake.

Maan: Please have a seat. Batayiye kaise aana hua?

Brij: Maan... pehle toh I am really sorry ki H&G wale project par…

Maan: don't worry about it. Smile[He said smilingly]. Main business aur personal relations mix nahi karta.

Brij: Thank you, actually aaj se Navratre shuru ho rahe hain aur humare yahan yeh 9 din bohot dhum dham se manaye jaate hain. Main bus issiliye, aaj sham ki puja ke liye aapko invite karne aaya tha.

Maan: Thanks a lot Brij ki aapne itna accha gesture diya. Mein aane ki puri koshish karunga.

Brij: Sirf aap hi nahi apni family ko bhi zaroor saath layiga.

Maan's face expressions changed. Unhappy
Maan: Main zaroor aaunga. [He emphasized on Main]

Brij: Alright so see you in the evening. He got up to leave.

Maan: Arre aapne toh kucch liya bhi nahi.

Brij: Nahi thank you. Actually aur bhi guests ko invite karna hai, Phir kabhi.

Maan went to see off Brij


Location: XYZ Shopping Mall;

Arnav ran into a jewelry shop to look for something special as a gift. He looked rings, earrings, neck pieces but didn't like anything. Finally he saw a diamond bracelet which had an extremely beautiful design. It had a pink Safire in the middle with diamonds around it and the band was made up of white gold. It was a special piece which was the only one available in the world. He asked the sales woman to pack it up for him.  

Sales girl(SG): Sorry Sir, Yeh piece already sell ho chukka hai.

Arnav: What? Par mujhe yehi bracelet chahiye. Please mere liye bohot zaroori hai, aap arrange karwah dijiye… ah mai zaada paise dene ke liye tayyar hoon.

SG: I m sorry sir. It's against our policies. Aap chahen toh unn madam se baat kar sakte hain jinhone yeh bracelet karida hai. Who wahan kadhin hain.
She pointed towards the far end of the shop.

Arnav spotted a young woman trying on rings in her hand.

Next: Guess who did Arnav see?
Please do guess and comment. Also plz plz plz press the like button. There are alot of silent readers. I would appreciate if you could atleast press the like button.
Lots of loveHeart

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