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MG/Arhi FF-Suffocation Part 22 UPDT! pg31/ DEC 27 (Page 24)

glamdoll12 Goldie

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:01pm | IP Logged

Awesume as usual

Pls continue the nxt part asap

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_mahi_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged

Hey hun!! Hug

i am so sorry for not replying earlier.Cry. i was bit too busy with random stuff lolLOL
first of allBig smile.. the promos were adorableClap.. especially the MaanEet's one..Embarrassed
beautiful and splendid choice dearClapClap
n the updateTongue.. okey.. who else is there at KM?Confused ghost?Wacko dont scare me now haha..LOL
i hope its not a churail or somethingErmm... im sure u will reveal the dark side of KM soon lolWinkLOL
hahaROFL.. this ArHi wont stop fighting and arguing like tom and jerry lolLOL
i just love this coupleEmbarrassed.. full of wonder and randomness haha..WinkLOL
n ulluShocked.. lol.. geet calling maan an owlROFL... lol...
n im excited about how khushi will convince her DJ with Arnav lolBig smileBig smileBig smile
please give us, especially meTongue, some arhilicious moments..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanks for the pmz darlin..Hug
i again apologize for being so careless but i was a lil inactiveConfused
do update soon hunBig smile.. m craving for more..Wink

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 November 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
luvd it a lot..
just read in one go..pls pm me..

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mishtimia Senior Member

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Just finish reading all part...its awesome...

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Shopau Senior Member

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged

Part 21

Location: Handa Haveli;

Arnav and Khushi came in the main Hall and stood next to the sofas where everyone else had gathered.

Rano: Arre tum dono itni der se the kahan? Kitchen mein hi dinner karne ka irada tha kya?

Arnav nudged Khushi and Khushi gave a silly smile. Darji: Puttar kucch bol bhi?

Arnav: Woh Daarji hum shaadi ki tayyiyariyon ke bare mein hi baat kar rahe the.

Daarji: Accha! Toh bhai humme bhi batao.
Everyone looked at Khushi and Arnav.

Arnav : Haan haan, Khushi sabko apna plan batao.
Khushi looked at Arnav with the same silly smile plastered on her face.
Khushi: M..mera plan?

Arnav: Haan Khushi… wahi plan jo tumne mujhe kitchen mein bataya tha. Batao sabko.
Everyone looked at Khushi with curiosity in their eyes.

Khushi: Main kya rahi thi…. Ki na? Woh DJ…..

Daarji: Puttar! Tu kab se humme kucch kehne mein ghabraane lagi? Bol bhi, ki baat hai?

Saavitri Devi: Haan Beta, bina dare bolo, Kya plan hai tumhara?

Khushi: DJ main jaanti hoon ki aap Geet Di ke liye accha hi sochenge. Par aap toh jaante hi hain ki Di aur Maan jiju pehle toh kabhi mile nahi. Humme unhe kucch time dena chhiye na shaadi se pehle?

Suddenly everyone became serious.
Brij: Khushi, hum jaante hain ki tu Geet se kitna close hai par beta, shaadi ka mahurat nikal chukka hai. Hum shaadi toh postpone nahi kar sakte na?

Khushi: Nahi nahi veerji! Main woh nahi keh rahi thi. Main toh bas soch rahi thi kyun na hum sab shaadi se pehle kahin ghumne chale? Isse dono families ko ek saath bitaane ka waqt bhi mil jaayega.

Brij: Arre wah! Daarji yeh toh patte ki baat kahi hai Khushi ne! good one chutki!

Arnav sighed hearing Brij like the idea.
Khushi: He he!LOL She was too releaved and didn't know what expression to give.

Mohinder: Par Daarji… Itni saari tayiyaariyan karni hain 15 din mein shaadi hai. Hum Aise kaise jaa sakte hain.

Arnav: Uncle Please!!!

SD: Handa sahab!  Agar aapko aitraaz na ho toh mere paas ek raasta hai.

Daarji: Kahiye behenji.

SD: Chandigarh se kariban 1 ghante door hamara ek farmhouse hain. Kyun na hum shaadi wahi se kar lein.  Dono pariwar wahan chalte hain aur shaadi ke din hum Delhi se Farmhouse tak baraat bhi leyange. Sab saath honge toh Mohinder ki tayyiyariyon ko lekar pareshaani bhi nahi rahegi.

Arnav and Khushi exchanged a look with smile on their faces.
Arnav murmuring: even better!

Daarji: Haanji yeh aacha rahega. Kyun bhai tum logon ka kya kehna hai?

Mohinder and Rajender smiled and nodded.

Daarji: Bas ek baar Maan aur Geet aajayen toh unse bhi pucch lete hain. Aakhir shaadi toh unhi ki hai!


Location: Back to the car;

Geet switched on the radio.

ooh la la ooh la la! Ooh la la , ooh la la.
tu hai meri fantasy.

Maan and Geet exchanged a look and Geet immediately changed the channel.

Ehh… ehh ehh
Come here rude boy boy
Can you get it up?
Come here rude boy boy
Is it big enough?

Maan: Geet channel change karo.

Geet: Oh please! Don't tell me aap abhi bhi wahi purane Baba Adam ke zamaane ke gaane sunte ho?

Maan: Geet, I said change the channel right NOW!

Geet: Accha Baba, par hum koi purana gaana nahi sunenge.
Saying this she changed the channel.

Please play the song now to get a real feel:

Their heart beats rose tremendously. Geet's fingers froze and fresh tears formed in her eyes. Maan moved to change the channel when Geet stopped him.

Geet: Mujhe yahi gaana sunna hai.

tu tu hai vohi dil ne jise apna kaha ...
tu hai jahaan main hoon vahaan

ab to jeena tere bin hain saza
ho mil jaaye is tarah ...
do leharen jis tarah ...  
phir ho na juda
haan ye vaada raha

Note: Plz pause the song now and play it back when you read the next note.

Maan and Geet were led back to the day 7 years back when they both first met.

Flashback: Location: University College London; 7 years back; Fall semester;

Maan stood in the arrivals hall with UCL board and some students who had already arrived sitting and interacting with each other at a little distance from him.

Camelia: Hey Maan! Has everyone on your list arrived?
Maan: Nope, One left. Geet… Ah! Geet Handa.

Camelia: Oh okay. Actually I and Mac are leaving.  I just wanted to inform you.
Maan: Sure, carry on.

Camelia: See you at uni then.

Maan turned around after seeing Camelia fade away in the crowd when his eyes fell on a trolley with two large suitcases kept one upon other, a black cabin suitcase upon the bigger ones and a big pink hand bag on top of it. The owner of the luggage wasn't visible to his eyes as the person was hidden behind so much of luggage.

Maan (self thought): phew! Is the luggage for the whole family or what? Guess that is the maximum a person was allowed to carry. People are too difficult to understand these days.

He smiled and shook his head in amazement. He turned around on the other side to see if there was any young girl standing looking like a university student. May be Geet hadn't seen the UCL board in his hand yet! That's when he heard a loud noise as if something really heavy fell down. He turned around to see that the trolley was just an inche away from his leg and all the luggage had fallen off. Maan for once didn't know how to react. Was he supposed to be all surprised and irritated by this stupid girl carrying so much of luggage and ready to hit him with her trolley or laugh at the poor soul. Until he saw her…


Next: Coming upWink

Plz hit the like button and comment
Sorry was too busy with internship + uni stuff... will update more regularly nowBig smile

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
wow!plan 1 toh kaamyab hogaya..
nw maneet ko convince krna..phew..
thanx for the pm yaar..

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shristi1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Nice. Want to see more of past and some masti moments between maneet.
Waiting for next update.

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mysteriousmilli IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Nice part...
please continue soon...

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