MG/Arhi FF-Suffocation Part 22 UPDT! pg31/ DEC 27 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: glamdoll12

Thnks for the Pm

 
Superb update
 
need an update asap now
 
I really hope that we will get to see more Maaneet

Hey glamdoll12
Thanks for commenting and liking the update 😊
Will soon get more of maaneet😃
I am just trying to juggle b/w the two jodis keeping the pace of the FF 😆
will update real soon
lots of love
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: -divya-

nice update dear...i just don't get to understand maan in their first meeting i thought maan really loved geet but seeing him now i'm not sure...maybe something behind it...please continue soon!

Thanx for liking it Divya😊
Well Maan does love her, but as u said there is something behind his behavior😉 which will be soon revealed! Keep reading and liking!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: _mahi_

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Hey darlin 🤗
wohoo another update
well well😳.. it was yet another a brilliant update hunnie👏👏.. loved the pace you are putting the story through😃.. its just beautiful..😛
and to be honest😊.. dont like Maan smoking😡.. eww🤢.. lol😆
i cant even imagine him smoking😕.. but i know geet will eventually reform him..😳😳
n loved how Daadi understood Geet's behavior so well!!😃😃
this is indeed needed between a MIL and DIL👏
i am sure Geet and Daadi will have sucha sweet😛 and strong bonding between um😳
n the scene in the room was just heart-touching hunnie😳😳😳
but hated maan's words there😡.. he told Geet to shut up?? 😲😲😲
well maan. just wait till you admit your feelings for her.. 😉😉
please make Geet make him suffer a lil😆.. dont like his behavior at all..😡😆
i know he is refraining to let anyone be close to him but its Geet you know😳😳
anywyz... coming to lovely ArHi😛... aww their lil nok-jhok hehe😆
n im excited about the vacation too..😃😃
it seems like only both the couples are going for it..😉😉
lets see what you have in store for us darlin😳
waiting for more so eagerly😃
thanks for the pm hunnie.. 😃
love yah 🤗
 

Love u love u love u SO MUCH [ As thanx is not allowed😆]
Well darling I know Maan really needs to knw that smoking is injurious to health but he will change😳
About Maan's suffering? Don't u worry he still doesn't knw what a big mistake he is commiting😆
On a serious note, I guess he's the one who is suffering the most right now which the readers will understand a little later😭
Coming to ArHi...😳 Aww they are just too cute... well the vacation is on its way and it would be a surprise for sure😉
u r always welcome hunnie😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

why is maan being a jerk ... i seriously wanna know ...

Hey maneetangel😊
well let me first thankyou for all ur support and encouragement for me to continue with this FF😃. U were the amongst the first few who read this FF and appreciated my work. So A BIG BIG BIG THANX😃
Coming to maan being a jerk? well u'll have to wait for some time but u'll get a fair idea abt his behavior real soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Zeee

awww! loved the arhi moment. too cute!

xxx

Thanks for liking and commenting Zee
I really appreciate 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ritzy09

great update...maaneet moments were really hot and awesome

 
But emotionally i still felt Maan was very arrogant and still felt bad for Geet. It doesn't matter he loves her but please make him apologise. She has been hurt for years and not even a sorry. Arrogannce at her love that she will just accept him. Taken for granted is how I felt. Almost like used.
 
Maybe I am coming very strong on Man but Geet has not done anything to brunt the pain of his familt and their attitude. It just makes the wholse scenario sad

Hey ritzy09!
well thankyou FINALLY somebody found it HOT! though i knw I still need to improve on the intimate scenes😆. And yeah! I knw maan still seemed detached emotionally... But I would just say that If the readers are hating Maan right now than I am probably writing the FF well keeping the suspense.😊 I know the situation is really sad one specially for Geet, but believe she's a strong girl👏 and their relationship is goin to be a really strong one. They would grow as a couple understanding each others pain and helplessness😊. plz just keep at it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aakriti120

hey..

loved maan geet and arnav khushi scenes...looking forward for the  vacation...

thanks for the pm...continue soon..:)

Hey Aakriti!
thankyou so much for commenting😊
would continue real soon and would make the vacation a memorable one😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: bhavnah

nice one...continue soon 😃

Thankyou Bhavnah!
will do so😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: poongs123

Awesome update dear

Thanx a lot dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Promo :
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njoy😃 will update soon😊 
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