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Posted: 12 years ago
1ST OF ALL GUYS I AM VERY SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE

ACTUALLY MY BROTHER IS BLESSED WITH A BABY GIRL...SO WAS BUSY OUT THERE


BT FINALLY TODATE I AM WITH A UPDATE


PART -4


ALL IN COLLEGE


K= guys...guess wot

R= wot??

K= bahar mid terms ki date sheet lag gy

ALL= wot??????😲😲

K= ha
and 3 din baad hamara 1st exam hai

S= silent...

K= kya hua swayam?

S= nothing yr...πŸ₯±

K= are ese kaise nothing,...kuch to bat hai

S= nhi yar vo xams ki vajah se...

K= le...xams ki vajah se to hum sab tensed hai
bt kuch aur hi bat lag rh hai mujhe

S= yr actually tum to janti ho ki mai late admission hu
to mai xams mai...

K=le isme kya
mere notes le lena,...aur kabhi help ki zaroorat padi to i am there 4 u πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
πŸ˜ƒ
S= thats so sweet of kRIYA...

R= ye kya...tum to mujhe har bar ki tarah padaogi na to ise kaise😑😑

K= are RAY mai manage kr lungi
SWAYAM bhi to hamara friend hai na

R= ha bt,,,,

S= hey RAY KRIYA agar tum logon ko koi problem hai to rehne do

R= nh main to isliye keh rha tha ki KRIYA stressed na ho jaye
agar  ise koi problem nhi to mujhe kya πŸ˜•πŸ€’

AND RAY GOES AWAY

KRIYA ALSO JOINS HIM AFTER SOMETIME


K= oye...kya hua...

R= kuch nhi...mujhe kya hona

K=to ese muh fula ke kio baitha hai

R= vaise hi...

K= ohh yr...dekh...SWAYAM bhi to hamara friend hai
aur vo late admission bhi hai
to being a friend we should help him out
ab NEHA to VICKY ko padhane main busy hogi
aur tu to khud mujhse padhega
to maine bol diya

R= par tu thak jaegi yar

K= hehe,,,,nh thakungi,,,,tu hoga na jo mujhe chill out wali coffee
pilane ke liye😳😳😳

R= han coffee ke liye mai ata hu na
ab keh na apne new admission wale SWAYAM ko...πŸ˜†

K= oye order vahi jamaya jata hai jahan haqq zayada hoπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

R= han han pata tera haqq
chal ab cafe chalte hai...cofee ka nam sunke hi bhukh lag gy


IN THE NIGHT
KRIYA CALLS RAY


R= kriya main thodi der mai call back krta hun,...sheron ka call hai

K= ohk

IN THE MID TIME SWAYAM CALLS KRIYA

K= hey...

S=hii...free ho na

K= han han...so start kre sudies

S= yea yea sure...


K.
RIYA AND SWAYAM STUDIED ON PHONE FOR AROUND 2 HOURS.

K= ajj ke liye itna kafi hai...

S= han mai bhi ab bas aur nhi pad skta
vaise kriya u r a very good teacher

K= ahhh thankew...hehehe


S= tabhi mai kahu RAY is class tk kaise pahunch gya

K= swayam tum bhi na

S= hehe...just kidding...chalo rat bot ho gy hai...gud night...

K= gud night...bye

K(to herself)= ye RAY ka call kio nh aya
ek bar try kar leti hu

are abhi ak busy ja raha hai

nhi padna hota to kamse kam ek message to kar skta hai na...

and she gets angry and throw the phone

NEXT MORNING IN THE COLLEGE

K= HII ...neha ... hii vicky...kaise ho...kab aye tum DELHI se...

N=jab tumhara rat ko message aya ki exams 3 din bad hai

v= han yr kya hai ye...abhi exams kio aye yr...

K= hey swayam...

R= hii kriya

K= hi

K= SWAYAM kal sab kuch samajh aa gya tha na

S= han kriya,,...sab aa gya tha...ab mujhe atleast apni padhai
ki koi tension nh
tum jo ho

K= han vo to hai...

R= vo kriya kal rat ko

K= ummm kisiko sandwich khana hai ,..mai lene ja rhi hu,,,

R= mujhe khana...

K= mai leke ayi

R= mai bhi kuch pine ke liye leke ata hu

R= oye ...tu mujhse aise kio behave kr rh hai

K-...

R= kriya mai tujhse bat kr rha hu...

K=...

R= kriya kuch to bol...

K=...

R= kriya...

K= apne cell mai missed calls aur messages check krlo...shayad kuch yad aa jae

R= kriya mai janta hu kal rat ko mai batana bhul gya lekin...

K= batana bhool gya...

RAy agar tu soya hota to shayad mujhe samjah at
 ki tune message kio nh kiya
lekin rat ke 3 baje tak tu busy tha phone pe to is bat ka to koi sawal
nhi uthta ki tu so rha tha 😑😑😑
😑
R= yr vo sheron se baat

K= mujhe koi matlab nhi ki sheron se bat kae rh tha tu ya kisi aur se
mai pagal hu jo tere liye itni rat ko jagti rhi
aur tune tune call to kya ek message tak nhi kiya...

R= yr vo nind aa gyi thi...

K= ha tujhe nind aa gy thi...aur mai nmera kya...

R= tu bhi to swayam ko...

K= mai swayam ko isliye smjha rhi thi ki kisi bhane mai jagti rhu
nind na kru taki tujhe padha sku
bt u r impossible ray
IMPOSSIBLE...



KRIYA GOES TO THE GROUND

AND TEN RAY COMES

RAY=

Tu Hai To Tedhi Medhi Rahein
Ulti Pulti Baatein, Seedhi Lagti Hai
Tu Hai To Jhoothe Muthe Vaadein
Dushman Ke Iraade, Sacche Lagtein Hain..
Jo Dil Mein Taare Vaare De Jaga, Woh Tu Hi Hai, Tu Hi Hai
Jo Roote Roote De Hasa, Tu Hi Hai Wohi..
(Jaane Kyun Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai.., Tu Hai To, I' ll Be All Right
I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be All Right

Saari Duniya Ek Taraf Hai, Ek Taraf Hai Hum
Har Khushi To Door Bhage, Mil Rahein Hai Gum
But When U Smile For Me, World Seems All Right
Yeh Meri Zindagi, Pal Mein Khil Jaaye, Jaane Kyun..
(Jaane Kyun.., Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai.., Tu Hai To, I' ll Be All Right
I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be All Right)

(Yeah Yeah Yeah, I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be All Right
Yeah Yeah Yeah, I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be.. All.. Right..) - 2
Oh Oo.., Chote Chote Kuch Palon Ka, Dostana Yeah
Jaane Kyun Abb Lag Raha  Hai, Jaana Maana Yeah
Cos When Smile For Me, World Seems All Right
Yeah Saare Pal Yehi, Yuhi Tham Se Jaaye, Jaane Kyun, Jaane Kyun
(Jaane Kyun.., Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai.., Tu Hai To, I' ll Be All Right
I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be All Right)


Tu Hai To Tedhi Medhi Rahein
Ulti Pulti Baatein, Seedhi Lagti Hai
Tu Hai To Jhoothe Muthe Vaadein
Dushman Ke Iraade, Sacche Lagtein Hain
Jo Dil Mein Taare Vaare De Jaga, Woh Tu Hi Hai,Tu Hi Hai
Jo Roote Roote De Hasa, Tu Hi Hai Wohi..
(Jaane Kyun.., Jaane Kyun Dil Jaanta Hai.., Tu Hai To, I' ll Be All Right
I' ll Be All Right, I' ll Be All Right)


AND BOTH HUGGED...




PRECAP:-

1ST EXAM DAY...

KRIYA BEHOSH HO JATI HAI AFTER EXAM...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•



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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update..I wish thoda aur long hota..but anyway update soon.. I loved it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOOHOOO LOVED THE UPDATE YAAR i was like waiting," are yaar yeh ff abhi tak update kyun nahi hooya?" but CONGRATS ON YOUR NEW NEICE :) hahah i loved how you put the song in the end cuz i listened to it and imagined the two dancing together it was awesome!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey congrats yaar!! Hehe loved the update!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey first of all congo for ur new niece !!!
 
and i just luvd ur update
this is so awsum πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
the dialogues are also too gud
luv kria and reys friendship and reys thodi thodi jealousy 😳
teh song fitted teh scene perfectly
waiting for ur next update
pm me pls
 
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
woohoohoo...awsome yaar,,,,,,loved hoe J rey is of swayam...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update n plz pm me next time update or just plz send ur ff links to https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1912697 wenever u update it keeps normal viewers to be informed. u can send all ur ff links (till now) to this link plz its a request 
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiyya! congrats on the latest edition to ur family! πŸ€—
awesome ff! how come i never came across it before??? πŸ˜•
anyway...i just luvvv to see rey n kriya jealous! πŸ˜›
keep it up, girlfriend! πŸ˜›
Edited by misslaugheasily - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
congo on bcmg bua!!!!πŸ€—
Edited by Tania92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooohooo awsum mindblowing updateπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n congrats yrr😊