NEW FF : DIL SE DOSTI UPDATED PART :5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: rechus

Superb... Kriya and rey r best friends.. Sooo sweet... Its soo short.. Pls update soon..

thnxxx...will update it soon

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

awesome

Originally posted by: sweetapple2995

dude that was awesome i loved it its an interesting concept how sharon is rey's gf that was really a good twist and how rey and kria are friends hope rey remembers kria's bday!!! (fingers crossed!!!) 😊

thnkeww...

its good...like the twist sumwat like jane tu ya jane na...

OH! God! When I read that line 'Sharon meri GF hai" ..I was like WHAT?? YEH!! kaisa Twist hai?? LOlz..but, I like it specially the bond between Rey and Kria...and Kriya's Jelousy..wah me liking it...Please update soon and plz PM me..GOOD JOB👍🏼

👏👏PART 2:

its 11:55 and RAY calls KRIYA
K= hey!!! mujhe pata tha tum sabse pehle phn kroge..😃😃😃

R= kya?? means tum auron ke bhi assignments bnati ho😛😛😛

K= assignments???😕😕

R= han to...bnai nh tumne

K= han bna li

R= acha suno mujhe uske important points bol do
nhi to kal vo teacher mera band baja degi

K= tumhara band to bajana bhi chaiye😡😡😡

R= kya?

K= kuch ni...
likho importt points

R= kriya yr tumhari awaz nh aa rh
bahar aaogi thoda

K= ray mai is tym bahar kaise aau

R= o han...
ek kam karo tum upar terrace pe chali jao
maybe vaha signals mil jae

K= ray mujhe to awaz aa rh hai

R= tumm sidha kio nh khti ki tum assignment krwana nhi chahti🤢🤢

K= bakwas mat maro...
ruko jati hu...

R= ok...

K= ek minute main yahan ki lights on krlu

R= mat krna

K= kio

R= candles jali hui hai😛😛
😛
K= kya??????

RAY,NEHA,VICKY= HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!

K= OMG!!!!
RAY ye sab kya hai😃😃

R= phle phn kato bill aa rha hai...😆😆😆

K= rayyy

R= SURPRISE...SURPRISE...

tumhe kya laga mai pagal hun jo tumhara bday bhulunga
zinda nhi rehna kya mujhe

K= nhi mujhe laga ki tum SHERON

R= girlfriend apni jagah hai
best friend apni jagah
👏👏👏
👏👏nd tum meri life main usse phle ho

i LOVE her
bt tumhari FRIENDSHIP mere liye bhut precious hai

K= smiled

V= yar ab cake kat lo...
maine dinner bhi nhi kiya

N= kya tumne kahan nhi khaya

V= nh yr ye RAY DUMBO ne sara tym ek cake dhundne me laga diya
thank god ise mil gya
sala bhut choosy hai...

N= awww...mai kuch leke aau

R= oye ye sala bhukhad bakwas mar raha hai
jahan bhi hum cake lene gye hai
maine cake dekha aur isne kahana khaya hai
pata nhi tujhe NEHA kaise mil gy
tujhe to ek COOK chaiye thi

N= i have a plan
cake katne ke bad hum sab bahr chalte hai
okiii

V= sure...
par ab cake kat lo yr...

KRIYA cuts the cake

AND THEY ALL GO FOR AN OUTING

IN TE RESTRAURANT

ALL WERE NJOING

N= hey see...
vo SHERON hai na
apne RAY vali...

K= RAY wali kya...isne kharid thodi rakhi hai
na iska trademark hai uspe


R= SHERON yahan kya kr rh hai

V= kio tujhe nhi pata kya

R= nhi yar

V= call kr use aur puch kahan hai

R= han ek minute

RAY CALLS SHERON

R= hii baby kahan ho tum

S= mai ghar par thi ...kio

R= nhi vo vaise hi puch raha tha..

chalo take care
rat ho gy hai so jao
okii bye

S= bye sweetie

V= kya hua

R= kuch ni...she said vo ghar pe hai

N= SHERON restraurant main kabse rehne lagi

R= usne mujhse jhooth kio bola

K= wot else you can expect from her...

R= (silent)...

V= its KRIYA's bday RAY
plzzz enjoy

R= are of course...
ye waiter kio nhi aya ab tak

K= RAY mood thik nhi to chate hai vapis

R= ohh plzz yr kriya
ye 2-2 minute bad EMOTIONAL ATYACHAR mat kia kar
its ur bday babzzz
chill mar...


AND THEY ALL ENJOYED

NEXT DAY IN THE COLLEGE

V= so kriya...ajj party kahan hai

K= SCORE club main

V= ooo...CLUb

N= DANCE...

V= yeah...DANCE to hai hi
akhir hamare group ka second name DANCE hi to hai
vohi to hamari life hai

K= oye RAY tu kio ese chup chap chehre pe 12 bajae baitha hai
venue nhi pasand to bol
change krdu

R= nhi nhi thik hai

K= to fir kya hua

R= kuch nhi..

K= ray dekh ...kal rat jo hua forget it
i mean kya pata uski koi privacy ho jo vo abhi tujhse share na karna chah rhi ho
use thoda tym de
nd m sure sab misunderstandings clear ho jaegi
bs give her some space

R= i think u r right kriya...
mujhe itna tension nh lena chaiye

K= hmmm i knw...

R= acha suno mujhe thoda kam hai mai abhi aya

N= kriya...vo SHERON kaisi hai
we ol knw...
to tune use kuch bola kio nh

V= han kriya...i mean kal rat ke bad

K= see guys ...RAY loves her
hum ese uska dil nh tod sakte
use hurt hoga
hum aram se use samjha sakte hai
and vo uske sath 2 yrs se relation main hai
to itni jaldi kaise

N= han keh to tum sahi rhi ho

V= chalo guys no more SENTY TALKS plz...jst get ready for d party

 

IN THE PARTY(cLUB)

KRIYA IN THE DRESS GIVEN TO HER BY RAY
ye  vohi dress thi jo ray ne sheron ka nam keh kar select krwai thi...



R= u looking awesome...

K= tnkewww...

K= and han tum bhi thik thak lag rh ho...



R= ahhh...


V= and where's ma angel

N= mai yahan hu...


V= OMG...u looking fab neha

N= u 2...



V= thnkeww...

R= ab chalein,...agar tum logon ka ho gya ho to...



PRECAP

ENTRY OF KRIYA'S CHILDHOOD FRIEND

AND

RAY FIGHTS WITH SOME BOYS...FOR KRIYA...

Awww...All of them are so cute...and Rey bought that dress for Kria...How sweet!! abhi yeh..Sharon ka suspense kya hai?? Jaldi batao...LOlz...

WohhhoW ! It was super awesome,I really love all the D3 FF yaar,you ppl are really awesome @ it..
Anyway coming to this part,Im so in love with Ray & Kriya & their bond,It comes across as just friendship but still it reflects more than friendship.
I liked all the dialouges,The way Kriya made him feel ok about Sharon thing & Rey's birthday surprise for Kriya.
There understanding level,Keeping BFF & GF seperate,Its really cool.
Precap sounds really interesting <3Update soon & write longer parts lol..

PS- It was better that you left that forum,the forum was nothing but a battle field,after sometime I left the place as well.. & aww actually they didn't close it intentionally its just after 100days any topic which is inactive automatically get closed :)

TC.

Wow awesome concept pl add me on your pm list

awww that was so sweet i LOVED IT  im going to break this down cuz i have so much to say... Edited by sweetapple2995 - 12 years ago