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Mera Phela Phela Pyaar MG ff On Hold (Page 7)

..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel_smily

congratsss on new ff
interesting prologue
thankss for the pm
continue soon

Originally posted by geetsweet

congrats for nw ff...
concept seems intersting...
add me to ur pm list...

Originally posted by disha_Maan.GC

good luck 4 the new ff
love the concept sooo much...
start sooonnn...

Originally posted by namita25

superb prologue...
loved it.

Originally posted by todayzstar

Intrstng cncpt...
cntnue soon..
add me in ur pm listt

Thank u sooo much
will update soon

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 20 September 2011 at 9:18am

..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

nice start yaar...continue soon and do pm me ..

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

waiting for your update

Originally posted by pickachu

Congrats on the new ff!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Originally posted by lil.mizz.smexii

Awesome prologueee
i lovee it already!
plz plz plz
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by sldeeps

congrats on ur new ff buddy

Thank u sooo much
will update soon
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki4life

Cool concept
Continue soon

Originally posted by honeygrape

inetersting prologue...continue soon

Originally posted by ruhakhan

Hey dats nice waiting do update soon

Originally posted by Krishnaluv94

Nice prologue! Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by Ramhari

Congratulations on the new one
Interesting story
Continue soon.

Thank u sooo much
will update soon
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11906

Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaSh-Maneet-Fan

congrats on da new ff
interesting start
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by nahtani88

congrats on the new ff
lovely start 
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

congratulation for new ff
 awesome start
continue soon

Originally posted by sukklover

 4 pm me dear...Big smile..
 dear..ur updates...
really  dear..
just  ..TongueBig smile
   4 ur
tons of  4 u dear...Embarrassed
once again  dear..Big smile
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
Note: sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...ConfusedOuch
i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry

Originally posted by maaneetsangel

congrats !!!!!!! 4 d new ff ...

interesting ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Thank u sooo much
will update soon
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909

congratz on new ff
nice concept 
continue soon

Originally posted by azee11

nice concept do continue soon

Originally posted by Abhakaran

Awesome prolouge 
Continue soon hinal 
And plz update ur other FFs too 
I am waiting read on them 
And do continue this one soon too

Luv Jyoti

Originally posted by khwaishfan

Hi the intro nw. Sound interesting! Update soon n do add me to ur pm list! 

Originally posted by ananya95

congos on new ff
pls cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

Thank u sooo much
will update soon
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni4eva

congratulations 4 ur new ff
luvly start awsome
fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x

Originally posted by shah10

continue plz.

Originally posted by star_777

Nice continue soon

Originally posted by wajiha-1

do cont soon 

Originally posted by khushboo22

nice concept

continue soon


Thank u sooo much
will update soon
..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arthi_pm

loved it yaar...sorry to msg from ma pm list just logged in here so thot of doing the comment and like also


Originally posted by SakshiGarg

nice concept... do continue... but plzzz update ur other FFs alsoTongue

Originally posted by blackb28

Congrats On New FF..


Do Cont..

Originally posted by jyoti_l

CONGRATS on the new FF...Party

lovely prologue...

waiting for it to start...

thnx for PM...

Originally posted by Maaneet4eve

LOved it... thanks for the pm.

Thank u sooo much
will update soon

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged


19th July,Evening 5:30

A girl of about 20 years was riding a scooty. She was blabbering to herself "Babaji aaj toh late hone wali hu daat padne se bacha lena" n then started her scooty as the traffic light turned green.

Soon she reached the place n was praying that she doesnt get caught n as she entered a women of about 45 years stood there at the door with an angry face.

Girl "Mar gaye aaj toh pitayi zaroor hogi" n she entered the house n went near the lady n said "Beeji woh..." but before she could complete the lady raised her hand signalling her to stop.

She then said "Puttar tujhe kitni bar kaha hai ke iss din toh jaldi ajaya kar. Tujhe pata hai na ke aaj humare liye kitna khaas din hai

Girl "Beeji maaf kardo woh na main Meera ko uske project mein help kar rahi thi toh waqt ka pata hi nahi chala"

Beeji "Chal koi baat nahi. Aacha ab ja aur jaldi se taiyar ho ja mandir jana hai"

As the girl was going a girl of about 18 years came running n shouted "GEET DIDIII" n hugged her.

Geet "Pari shant bachcha main kahi bhaagi nahi ja rahi hu" n hugged her.

Shalini Chandran

Pari "Didi aap bhi na. Acha batao aapka project kaisa gaya???"

Geet "Acha tha. Baaki baate baad mein abhi chal taiyar hona hai madir jana hai na"

Beeji had tears in her eyes seeing Geet n Pari's interaction. She then took a photo frame from the near table n cried n said " Dekha didi aapki Geet bilkul aapki tarah hi hai."


After sometime Geet,Pari n Beeji left for the mandir.

Today was Geet's maa - bauji's death anniversary. They had died in a car accident when Geet was only 8 years n from then on she lived with her maasi whom she called Beeji n Pari her beeji's daughter.

At the mandir they did the pooja n then they left for home. 

At the same time,

A handsome guy pulled the girl closer to him n then started his bike at full speed.

45mph... 60mph...75mph...90mph...105mph...120mph...

n finally he won the race.

He then pulled the girl to the front n gave her a passionate kiss.

N all were cheering him "Maan...Maan"

Gurmeet Choudhary on the sets of Geet

After the race he went to the club house n started practicing basket ball as he had the final match tmrw.

Later in the night he went to his home... no no not home ya a house as there was no one who to make it a home from a house. He got ready n then left for the disco.

At the disco,

Maan drank continuously 10 tequila shots n then started dancing with anyone. Suddenly a girl in black dress came n started dancing with him n he also dancing closely with her.

After dancing for sometime he pulled her to a corner of the disco n pushed her against the wall n started kissing her wildly.

The next morning,

Maan woke up n saw that he was naked n lying next to him was a girl he didn't even remember. He freshened up n then took a aspirin for his headache n went to his home.

Geet woke up early n even woke pari n told her to study. She then went to help beeji in preparing breakfast. After getting ready n finishing breakfast both Geet n Pari left for the college.

20th July, St.Xavier's college, 8:45 am

Geet reached college n parked her scooty n she stood at the entrance waiting.

At the same time Maan entered the campus n he waved at her.

Geet waved back.


Basketball match

Geet n Maan fighting  Shocked

So here is Part 1

hope u all like it *fingers crossed* 

Plz hit the LIKE button n Do Comment



~ Next ~ Part 2

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 20 January 2013 at 1:42am

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