okey , i know i m very very late...bus i was too caught up.!
now coming to the story , it was beautifully ended. β€οΈ last 3-4 updates r really awesome ! the emotions came out really well. you portrayed nupur's char in whole story beautifully. i must say such an awesome job and u should keep writing more..!!
in the last updates , nupur narrated her all sad events of her life as story. and at night she again think about her life all again..! i loved this ..i just love both of these points. it was needed...! yeah , indeed needed.
the story of a couple with them time played a game. of course bad one and separated them. they r united but there were so many questions to be answered. and u know wht sister , u have answered all the questions in utterly unique way! β€οΈ the nupur's whole POV was indeed great ..! simply great !β€οΈ
thank u so much for giving its a thought ! and ur story is most unique ever..!!! β€οΈ
it was such a great job and it was ur best story so far. pls dont stop writing. would really love to read so many many mayur ff/ss/os from u. :)
i would be really grateful if u come up with the patch up of MN's first fight after nupur's come back. ofcourse with ur unique pov. i would really love to read it frm u.
once again , such a great story . beautifully written. β€οΈ tack care.