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Miley Jab Hum Tum
Miley Jab Hum Tum

mjht revisited 3. last part /page 69 (Page 54)

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great part dear Tongue

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Posted: 29 October 2011 at 8:18am | IP Logged
awesome part
continue soon

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PART 26 

Excel college- empty classroom

 nupur s sitting lost in thoughts. Rohan  enters.

 "hello! Mrs Sharma . Aap ko kahaan kahaan nahi  dhoonda humne!" rohan

"achha tum, mujhe laga samrat hain! Wahin mujhe Mrs...maatlab aisa bhulatha hain."

rohan noting her avoiding using Mrs Sharma smiled and said," waise nupur , aapki shaadi hoke kitne saal hogaye?"


"aap abhi bhi koi Mrs Sharma bhulatha hain tho blush karthi ho. Wo tho jab nayi nayi shaad hui hoti hain tab blush karthe haina?"

nupur blushed and didnt answer. Rohan sat next to her comfortably and continued," tho kya chal rahaan hain? Aap sir ko miss kar rahin thi?"

"haan. Mayank delhi gaya haina. Jab se waapas aayi hoon tab se aadat padgayi hain usko din mein sau baar dekhke isiliye. Aur yeh dekho..." she showed him her mobile," mere saare messages ke ek hi jawaab aaya ' main busy hoon , will call later." she made a face. Rohan peeped at the mobile and asked," no i love you ya i miss you ya aisa kuch!"

 "mayank aur  wo sab! Waise aaj kal better hain pehle se par jab kaam ki baat aathi hain tab ..." she sighed," tab tho mujhe bhi bhooljaayega"

 "aapko gussa nahin aatha"

"jhoot moot ka atha hain par sach mein nahin. "

 " nupur par aap itne strict insaan se pyaar mein padi kaise? "

 "jab pyaar hona hotha hain, tab bas hojaatha hain. Dil se sach much koi question nahin karsakthe.   Jitna mayank aur meri beech jagda hota tha na...jab hum  kisise pyaar karthe haina uski choti choti baatein ko bhi bohot maayne dene lagthe hain. har ek cheez jo use judi hoti hain wo sab important lagne lagtha hain.  aur mayank bhi aisa hi hain,mujhe uski har achhi buri aadat se pyaar hain bas... ."and on seeing that rohan was still looking at her disbelievingly, she asked him," ab tum yeh batao tumne pehli baar ashwini ko kab dekha"

 " ash ko? club mein..." and after a second added," nashe mein.  Drunk."

 "aur phir?"

 "jab wo samrat sir ke peechen bhaag rahin thi tab" he remembered.

 " tumhe na ek minute bi nahin laga rohan sab yaad karne mein. Kyun? " she said smilingly," pyaar aisa hi hota hain"

 "par nupur ash ki circumsatnces aisa kuch thi. Wo ab tho normal hi haina? Par mayank sir tho ..."

 "mayank alag hi hain . Uska pyaar dikhaane ka tareeka hi alag hain , par  pyar kartha tho hain. Jab mujhe uski zaroorat hoti hain tab wo wahaaan rehta hain, main usse batao, ya bhulao ya nahin." rohan looked at her attentively, "jabse main usko jaanthi hoon tab se wo aisa hi hain, thoda badalgaya hain par  uska gussa ! Uska perfect hona! Uska sab ke upar chillana! Har ek choti si kaam ko bhi seriously complete karna! Uska ..."she went on dreamily.

 " tumse pyaar karna!"samrat said from behind and sat on the other side his eyebrows going up naughtily. Rohan grinned and nupur made a happy face but  not meeting samrats eyes.

 "tho, rohan ko class lerahin thi? pyaar ke dus funde!"  samrat nudged her.rohan continued grinning.

 "mere itni majaal ki main pyaar ke classes shuru karoo? Wo tho samrat tumhaara kaam hain, haina?"

"tum log yahaan ho?!" gunjan and ash were at the door.

 "kya kar rahe the? Di tumlogon ka test ka results dekh ke na mujhe itni khushi hui"

 "mujhe bhi" ash . Rohan and nupur did a hi fi smilingly.

 "yeh lo, tumhaareliye" and gave nupur a few books neatly packed in a bag.

 "yeh kya hain?"

 'tumhaare liye kuch aur books hain di. Kaam aayenge" all of them grinned.

  " tumse kisine poochan tha gunjan?!" nupur mumbled

samrat grinned at her," aur tum kya itna khush ho rahe ho samrat! Main tho phir bhi BA mein chootrahin hoon. Maine tho suna ki tum MBA karne waale the!!" that brought out  laughs from Rohan and ash while samrat made a sad face . Gunjan looked at him very proudly and happily.

 "haan di. Main iskeliye bhi bohot khush hoon! waise jiju kal aarahahe na?" nupur  nodded but thought  - in dono ka kya hoga ! hey bhagwaan bachaale"


MN house- late night

 Mayank walked in opening the door witha spare key  to find the living room perfectly silent. He looked around and saw no sign of nupur except...the dinner table was neatly laid out.

 He smiled ," shayad wait kar rahi thi! Yeh flight itna late hogaya aaj. Room mein hogi."  And walked to the room in quick steps .

Opening the door quietly he bent and ...stopped .the lights were off in the room  but in the light from the balcony kept the room visible.

 Nupur had cleaned up , changed the  curtains, colour matched everything  and placed candlestands at all corners with a few candles  still burning. The air had fresh smell to it.  He felt a thrill  and with an expectant  smile  on his face  looked  around  for  her .

 "Nupur..." he  called out  walking inside with his travel bag still in his hand.

 He felt  himself hugged from behind, two slender  arms from either side of his waist. And felt  a warm k iss placed on his back. With the smile becoming  wider, , dropping his bag  on the  floor  he turned around still her arms around his waist  and  stared... nupur  was in  a  dark green salwar , the small glass  beads on her dupata and the top reflecting the light from the candles , her hair held on the back by brooch , the  light gloss on her lips making them look inviting  but it was the feeling in her eyes which held him. The naturally  wide eyes appearing wider  due to the kajal  she had applied carefully , telling him things that her words couldn't do justice to.

 his hands on her waist, he pulled her closer and  kissed her , touching her lips with his own with all the force of his passion for her.  Her hands went up round his neck  as she hugged him and responded with  equal if not more  fervour. She bent back a little with the force of his kiss. One hand still on her waist,  he kept her face closer  with his hand behind her neck ,his breaths more rapid,  removed  the brooch that held her hair , grasping her hair in his hand   as it fell over face and shoulders. He felt her clinging to him as he moved his lips to her neck  , stopping a second as he felt something wet touch the side of his forehead.  He moved back and caught her eyes. There were a few tears that she shook off as he continued to look at her, his thumb moving across her cheeks gently.

 " bas teen din tha  nupur" he said softly         . She nodded and  disengaging herself from his grip on her waist, she wiped her eyes and turned her face up with  adoring eyes. He smiled and she returned his smile with a kiss again on the cheeks , her one  hand cupping his other cheek .

 Mayank pulled her  nearer  and kissed her , first cupping her face on the lips and then through the hair on her shoulder, moving the chains, on her neck .his kisses becoming more pressing and insistent. she held her hand  tightly in a fist  as he moved his hands along her arms  and simultaneously she felt herself trembling  involuntarily as he reached her earlobe and turned her head to the other side . he kissed behind the ear and entwined his fingers with hers. she returned the pressure of his fingers  they moved  together  to the bed , nupur tripped falling first  on the bed, with mayank over her.


 Later in the  night

 Nupurs sleeping on mayanks chest, holding his vest in her fist. Mayanks staring at her  with a lot of  tenderness in his eyes, stroking her  hair  lovingly, tracing her  lips with his fingers slowly. She shivered a little and opened her eyes . smiling at him, she moved closer and lifted her face up, kissing his finger tracing her lips.

 "soye nahin abhi tak?" no answer.

 " tumne khaana nahin khaaya hoga na!" and got up instantly, hit her  forehead with her hand ," main bhi na mayank, aathe hi..." and started tieing her hair.

 He pulled her towards  him and said," aathe  hi kya?"  She blushed." Yeh tumhaara first blush hain aaj ka. Ab tak tho kuch alag sa, special sa scene chal rahaan tha." he teased her," meri neend bhook sab mit gaye aathe hi. Kya hua nupur?"wondering if it was just that she missed him or it was something else  as well.

 "I love you mayank." Nupur placed a hand on his cheek and  kissed him," bas aur kuch nahin." His face cleared and  he enfolded her in the safety and comfort of his arms.


hi! this is the pretty much the last part of nupurs recovery . the next one will be the last part in the ff.

thanks a lot for the encouragement

Edited by np18 - 29 October 2011 at 12:17pm

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Posted: 29 October 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Day Dreaming
Are you going to finish?Shocked Cry
Will miss it but I can understand, dragging the story further might make the ff loose its charm anyway loved reading it dear thank you so much for coming up with such continuation Hug 

Edited by aysha1989 - 29 October 2011 at 12:32pm

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Posted: 29 October 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
awesome update...
loved it...
thanks for d pm...
love ya..

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Posted: 29 October 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
amazing part yaar loved it

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Posted: 29 October 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
awww this was soo cute!!!...i know this had to end at some point but im so used to reading this every day that its going to suck when you end this...i hope the last chapter it filled with LOTS ofmayur moments Smile...please make it a long update haha...btw i hope you plan to make another mjht revisited because your alternate versions are fantastic Big smile

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