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mjht revisited 3. last part /page 69 (Page 47)

np18 Goldie

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Annu_Arti_Mayur

Ahhh...after the previous update i had a hope dat mayank will take over the situation...but...Ouch
chaloo chadooo...ab tu story agaye bhi bhar gayii...LOL
is nupur really back...??  well i kind of guess that there is smthing more to it...Ermm
as u said that this part wasn't anything much wrt to the i m eagerly waiting 4 the story to proceed...Tongue

btw i agree with
  pearl10  Embarrassed
u r a gr8 writer...n i would luv to read further Mayur 's story app ki zubani...EmbarrassedLOL
the way u write...Approve
so plz...continue this story after this track...or make a new MJHT revisited 4...Embarrassed wot say...Tongue
i knw i m demanding alottt...LOL
but seriously i would luv to read it...n especially written by u...Embarrassed
late updates bhi chalye plz continue zaror karna...Embarrassed


 the parts in bold--i think so too

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np18 Goldie

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
PART 22 

MN house- Shilpa, Nupur and mayank., few days later.

 All three of them  in living room in front of tv. Shilpa and Nupur laughing at something. Mayank reading  some magazine.

 "yeh tum dono ki aadat nahin gayi na...mujhpar hasne ka."

"hum tumpe kahaan has rahe the?haan main tho  shukla sir ko yaad karke ..."

"tum saare teachers ke bare mein baat kararhin thi. Maa aapne itni jaldi party badal diya?"

"arre wah maine kab party badli? "

"haan , maa tho hamesha se mere hi party mein thi" and did a hi fi with her.

They stopped as he glared at her. Shilpa pretended  to control her laugh.

"haso,bina kuch baat hasnewaalon ko pata hain kya kehthe hain? Nupur ki baare mein tho mujhe pata hi tha par maa tum bhi?!"

"kya karoon beta akhir tumhaari hi tho maa hoon!" she said pretending to be serious.

" main tum dono ko..." both looked at him waiting to hear their punishment ," tum dono baath karke apna time waste nahin karna chahtha."and walked out  huffily while both of them burst out laughing .

"maa, aapko jaana kyun hain?" nupur suddenly asked shilpa. Her laugh  reducing.

"kaam hain nupur."

"par aapko abhi kaam karne ki zaroorat kya hain?"

"zaroorat ki baat nahin hain, nupur. Aadat ki baat hain. mujhe achha lagtha hain."Smilingly.

Nupur  returned the smile half heartedly.she had gotten used to shilpa aunty in the past few days , gotten used to the comfort of  seeing  her smiling face daily, of being pampered and taken care of by her.of laughing about mayank with her.there had been a comfortable routine which had made her feel so secure.  She would definitely miss her. she  hugged her and shilpa held her back.

"itna kyun upset horahin ho beta!  Tum abhi abhi waapas aaye ho tho tumhe , tum dono ko saath mein kuch aur time bitaana chahiye. tumhe khush hona chahiye kit um dono akele reh paaoge.  Aur tum mayank ki baat sunkar apna saara time padne mein hi mat guzaardena.  Kahin baahar jao, ghoomne phirne. Thoda change hojaayega.  " and observing her still  looking low added,  " okay main is time Mumbai mein hi kuch karnee liye try karongi. Promise."

"nupur," mayank screamed from inside the kitchen making them look at each other and grin again. nupur hurriedly got up while shilpa waved her hand indicating her to go and face him. She herself got up to get her bag from inside.


Doorbell rang.

 "main dekhthi hoon" nupur said and went to open the door   to find Uday.  She was enveloped in a huge bear hug even before she could call  his name. His eyes moist, nupurs again filling up.

 Dia came in from behind him," dodo andher tho chalo. " followed by samrat and gunjan smiling happily.

 uday stood her back and looked at nupur from top to bottom. Mayank came from inside the kitchen.

 "tum to aaj bhi uthna hi sweet ho nupur! " he walked in one hand on her shoulder and another through dia s.

 "uday bhaiyya ! Main?" gunjan pouted

 "aajao aajao. " and hugged her as well.

 Mayank and samrat glanced at each other and rolled their eyes.. Uday left his sisters and looking at samrat , hugged him .

 "tumne mujhe airport pe hi hug kia"

  he hugged mayank next, mayank was forced to soften his look and hug him back.

 "mayank tum kaafi young dikhne lage ho!"

 All of them  said hello to shilpa as she came out and after hugging nupur and mayank, shilpa left while the others went into the living room.


  Living room to dining table

  "uday tum hamesha correct time pe kaise aathe ho?" mayank

 "correct time? wo main nahin flight correct time pe tha."

 mayank pointed to the dinner table.

 "haan mayank bhookh lagi hain. Dinner tumne banaya hain? Ya nupur ne?" and proceeded to the table.

 All  of them followed him with nupur saying, " haan uday bhaiyya. Aapko tho bhookh lagi hogi. Aajao. flight mein kitna ganda haana miltha hain."  and went on to serve everythiing. To him.

 "Aise koi cheating kartha hain kya?" uday asked nupur as she served him .


  " nupur, mujhe yakin nahin hota ki tum sach mein ho! Matlab tum bhoot tho nahin ho na?"

 " nahin uday bhaiyya, dekhiye mere pair zameen par hi hain." and showed her legs and feet.


 "uday bhaiyya bhooton ke pair nahin hote." gunjan explained patiently.

 Dia rolled her eyes at samrat and mayank.

 "haan. Par itna shock! Jab dids ne mujhe bataya...wo tha kaun nupur? Tum tho  sab se ladthi thi na. Tho is ...bhooth se kyun nahin? Tum tho..."

 "jhansi ki rani " mayank said, looking at her with a longing in his eyes.

 "haan jhansi ki rani  ho. " uday repeated. Nupur didn't answer, she avoided looking directly at uday but involuntarily had turned to mayank as she heard him say  jhansi ki rani- his voice and his eyes were telling her how much he missed  her.all others looked to see if how she would behave.


 "kyunki uday bhaiyya aap nahin the na mujhe haosla dene keliye. Aap hothe tho ..." nupur  tried to speak lightly.

 "main hotha tho uski chutti kardetha." he interrupted angrily

 nupur eyes filled up and she hugged him again.he patted her on the back.

 "waise paat hain ki tumhaare waapas aane se sabse zyaada faayda kya hua hain?"


 "hum sab saath hain, warna mayank aur gunjan samrat se baath nahin karrahe the. Aur sam humse. " he said it matter of factly.

 "aisa kyun keh raha hain uday" samrat who had been quiet till then asked

 "haan sam. Tum tho itna upset the na ki gunjan ke baare mein tho tum hum teeno ko tho jaise bhool hi gaye the. " gunjan bent her head, hurt

 "of course not!  Matlab haan, main kuch zyaada hi upset tha par tum logon ko bhool..."

 "dodo teek hi keh raha hain sammy. " dia interrupted, "Kya tumne benji ko kabhi bhi phone kiya hain? Ya mujhe? Kya tumhe pata hain ki benji ab kahaan hain?" sam turned to look at her. She met his eyes , hurt clearly visible.  Gunjan had her head bent still, nupur looked at her, exchanged  glances with mayank and mayank  stared at samrat. Uday looked from one to the other.

 "yeh mayank tumne hi banaya hain. Itna achha paneer dish koi aur nahin bana saktha" uday suddenly saaid loudly.

"uday bhaiyya yeh maine banaya hain." nupur replied.

 "arre waah nupur tum itni achhi si cook bangayi ho?" and continued to eat. All the others were quiet ,each in their own thoughts,  thinking how much things  had changed.


hi sorry for the late update---thanks a lot for all the encouragement.

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-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged

Woow i was thinking wther u'll update r not

just checked n fond
i was reading when i got ur pmTongue
awesome as usual
loved the gang moments scply mayu n udey LOL
thn 4 d pm cont soon

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-Anila- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
i loved it lodsss...
awesome update dear...
thanks for d pm...
love ya...Hug

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princess84 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
lovely part and thanks for the pm...continue soon i hope gunjan is ok and dodo is always fun to watch ehehe

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Lovely pdate
wao DoDo is back ab maza ay ga
thanks for pm

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sumonetolub IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
aww sweet sharma trio moments...and the jhansi ki rani part was nice...was interesting how you brought in the last part with the way all their lives changed because of nupur's one decision...hoping for some happy times with the gang and mayur

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 5:56pm | IP Logged
tht was soo awesome love it

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