Originally posted by a little faith
MJHT revisited 3
mere dimaakh mein shayad wo hamara pehla waala samrat ka outhouse hi tha. Achanak se yahaan aake thoda ajeeb laga
As though it wasn't only the viewers that travelled through the time leap. Excellent introduction.
us ehsaas ko bhulgaya tha ' jab bhi tum mere saath hoti thi ,,tab aisa lagtha tha ki main zinda hoon. Beautifully written. I have always loved the sentiment and it reminded me of these lines of lyrics,
Kahun kya bhala, Tumhi ko to mein chahta hoon Suno
Tumhein jo mila, Mene jana main bhi zinda hoon
"par samrat in teen saal mein, tum
sab se zyaada changed hogayeho."nupur teased him as he looked at
her questioningly, " tumhaare chashmein lag gaye."Although said half in jest, I loved the truth of this statement. As though he was trying to replace the irreplaceable through imitation.
nupur who had read
every expression of his and perhaps even the ones which weren't on
his face. That understanding that even years of age can not remove.
I loved that slow development of their physical intimacy, that slight
struggle that as you say we didn't get in the original, for it seems
more natural this way. I too re wrote this chapter of MN too, as did many
BUT mine seems very melo dramatic whilst also diluted when compared to yours for you have managed to
capture that true to life quality that is beautiful as it is haunting.
Well written.
With love, Sabah
thanks for reading and replying.
what you say as true to life can border on boring at times!!! though its nice to hear you calling it beautiful !😊
