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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged

Part 9-

She slowly captured his lips and allowed his sobs to melt in her mouth

She felt him slowly mellowing down and soon it turned passionate

For him his love was answering and for her she was experiencing her love

He carried her to the bed and both were lost in their kiss

He kissed her in each and every part where her skin was visible

She was lost in him and his love

Love whos bond was strong

He knew that he can never find himself again

He knew he was loosing it

He knew that he was taken

His love had won

And he planted his last kiss on her forehead and whispered

Maan-geet zindagi ki is safar me

Maine jab tumhe hai paya

Meri zindagi ko ek naya anjaam mila

Aaj shayad tumne hai mujhe ye jataya

Ki tumhe bhi hai ik kadar mera naam yaad aya

Jaan I don't expect anything else…………………just remmember me

Ek baar bas mera naam kehna

She hugged him and slept the most peacefull sleep but he laid wide awake holding his life in his arms

Dev was worried about maans condition and senced that something was amiss

Dev-Naintara its morning now get up

Naintara-dev whats wrong abhi to …………….its 5 in morning

Dev whats the matter

Dev-maan bro was………………..yesterday……………..i mean a person like him stumbling back like that

Naintara-I think we shoulod go and meet him once……………he is in need of emotional support

Dev-hmmm…….chalo

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Part 10-

As dev-tara opened the door they were shocked to find geet peacefully sleeping on maans bed and then they found maan staring into oblivion

Dev went and patted maan

Maan still remained in that position and said-dev you are not my cousin but like my real bro

In each and every step of life you were with me and you have supported me

After dad passing away you have in some way or other always never allwed me to feel the void

Bhabhi

Naintara-maan veerji aap bhabhi

Maan-hamara rishta bhabhi-bhai ka hai

Aap meri dost ki tarah ho…………….mughe samaghti ho

Aap dono bahut lucky ho jo aap dono ko ek doosre ka pyar aur saath mila

Maine to pyaar me sirf tabahi hi ki hai

Dev-bro aisa nahi hai

Just then geet stirred

Geet-maan

Maan went to her and she smiled

Geet- goodmorn……..

Maan-geet (and he cupped her face)

He sat beside her

Jaan mere study table ke right drawr me ek key hai

Usse study ke saath jo attached room hai uski door khulta hai

Geet-maan ap mujhe ye kyun bol……………..

Maan-shh geet………jaan that is your birthday gift…….from my side for this and all the coming years

Geet widened her eyes

Maan-yesterday night I kissed you to ab to ,mummyji ka dosh bhi le sakta hoon

Gunhegaar hoon tumhara,tumhe uu….sss….eee use kkiiya hhaiii

Geet nodded her head in denial cupped his face

Maan-geet I have loved you forever and ever

Jaan ho tum meri bas mujhe yaad rakhna

And a drop of tear rolled down from his eyes and fell on her cheek

And he collapsed on her lap

Dev-bbbrrrooo

Geet mmmaaannn

Mmmannn uthiye mman get up

Dev bro do something maan please

No maan you cant

Naintara hurriedly called the ambulance

In the hospital----------------

As the doctor came out

Dev-hoowwsss brooo

Doc-he had a heart attack 9hrs back and a brain stroke hr back that made him finally collapse

Geet remmembered his tumbling back at night in the hall and holding the chair for support

Doc-there are 1% chance of his survival because both the attacks are serious

He is totally on artificial system

We will keep him on observationfor next two hours AND THEN SHIFT HIM TO VENTILATION

Ventilation is just observatory but patients don't return from their so I request those of the family members want o see him can fill a form and enter his room but mind you he should not be disturbed a bit you cannot touch him for infection can occur just see him

Geet-doc. I want to see him please

Doc-you are mrs no miss how are you related to him ????……………….please fill the form and the nurse will guide you for change of clothes

Geet stood their shocked and numb and gave a blank look to dev who closed his eyes in pain

Geet-im his nothing……………im not even legally related to him…………dev bro mere maan ko bolo na ki wo mughse naaraz na ho……………maan mujhse itne naaraz hai ki he is not even allowing me his last glance his last touch

She held devs leg

Geet-bro I beg bring my maan back to him

I do I do I do love him love him a lot

He cannot leave me

Do something

Naintara went and picked her up

She was numb not even moving

Dev-geet ko ghar le jao tara

Geet in still position-mat bhejo mujhe maan se door

Naintara forsefully took her

And dev wept silently-bro please I beg don't leave me…………..i need ur support bro please

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Beautiful yaar d emotions u create were wonderful. Clap

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Part11-

At KM-

as both the ladies entered the mansion naintara remmembered and said-geet storeroom

geet rushed like athena upstairs and opened the door in maans study

she stood rooted at the place

naintara followed her and she gasped

it was a small room filled with geet

pictures of geet were stuck on the wall order wise

from her childhood till yesterday night geets sleeping form

geet was shocked

naintara-he came here yesterday too

then she found a cupboard there

naintara opened it and a bunch of packets fell on her

as both of them opened it they found some used clothes and toys

naintara-geet these are yours na???

geet noded for a yes

geet stood up followed by tara

it was then tara found that somepapers were placed on the table

geet-maans diary

it was a six set diary dated from the day when he first met geet

there were another set of papers  in a packet labelled letter to geet on her birthday

as geet opened the packet she realised that on each birthday he used to write her a letter

she sobbed

then both the ladies together touched the last set of papers

naintara-it's a document paper

geet-oh my god

naintara-he transffered all his shares in your name

(she noticed the date)a year after he brought you here

All these years he was maintaining a company that was not even his

Geet looked at her and broke down

Geet-bhabhi please mere maan ko laado

Give me my maan please

I beg of you

I will die without him

I cant take this guilt

 

Geet got up with a jerk suddenly-bhabhi im going to him

Tara-geet geet ruko

She rushed out of home and tara ran after her

Both sat in the car and instructed the driver to fly the car to hospital

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged

Part 12-

In the car she was going through the diaries

A page dated 5 years back-

She was cribbing for brownie today

Even I love brownie we both enjoyed it together

Another page-

She came 2nd in the class,she was very happy

Last page-

She kissed me back today ……………..today I feel her love..

Im contended……………I feel complete today

Remmember me jaan

In the car the song was playing

Abhi na jao chodkar ki dil abhi bhara nahi

Abhi abhi jo aye ho

Bahar banke chaye ho

Yeh dil zara mehak to le

Khushi ke ghut pi to le

She was remmebering all the good times they had spent together

Her sitting on his lap

Smearing raw  egg on his face

Swimming together

she closed her eyes and saw maan holding her hand and walking in a beautifull garden and then he asked her "jaan do you love me?" and she kept quietand then he smiled and walked further and climbed some stairs and vanished and the place sorrounding her turned pitch black slowly engulfing her into darkness

 

the car halted with a screech and she broke out of her reverie

she rushed out of the car and barged into the hospital room to hear the doctor say

doc.-sorry we have shifted him in ventilator system

dev-no

doc.-im sorry sir

she rushed to maan and wept on him and said you leave me and I walk away with you

you die so I die with you

come back maan come back

his body was cold and she layed herself on him

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
awesome, nice part
 loved it

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
chandu tujhe to main chodungi nahin. tu humesha mujhe tadpane k liye aise twist par chodti hai na.  Angry
waise chaado i guessed right. maan mairred geet. yupiieeeClap
ye kya hua yaar maan ko heartattck . wo hosp mein. plz dnt let him die plzz plzz
arghhh i hate this rano ,. Angry . koi uske muh mein fevicol dalo. humesha ke liye band hojaeg.
finaaly geeet accepeted that she love maan too. but pls dnt give us sad ending. i want happy happy ending... plsss


aur ye warning hai chandu tere liye Angry next upt jaldi dena n dare u leave it again in hanger.





Edited by tinu.jindal - 24 September 2011 at 10:17am

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i ll kill you if u kill maan yaar .. 

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