Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

maaneet ss:Shringaar (Page 12)

chandreyeeroy Groupbie

Joined: 02 March 2011
Posts: 179

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged

Part 5-

Geet-maa'''''papa vo vo

Rano-beta kuch nahi hoga

Btw. Hiccups

Geet-aap log chale jao yaha se


Geet-ill be happy with them maa aap log chale jao'''''..yeh log dil ke bure nahi hai

Rano-geet I know he is forcing you but he cant do so''''..we will call the police

Geet-maa please aap samajhne ki koshish karo

Papa-maaannn how can you do this with her I suppose you loved her

Maan-papaji I still love her and will love her all my life and im saying that to you with assurance but calling a police will be a mockery''''''..and then what will you complain about any serious charges

Rano-you kidnapped her and then smeared some red powder on her forehead and made her wear a so called mangalsutra'''''''''.maan isnt that enough

Geet-maan please there is no use

Maan-oh really about the kidnapping charge''''''..i can dodge it in a second

And about marriage though that was forcefull but that was true ''''''..and she is  18 too by her birth certificate,though actually she is seventeen''''''.challenges mummyji'''''.i do everything with a point

Geet wept and everybody remained silent

Papaji-maan what is it you love her or you are doing all these for her physical self''''''playing with a girls life like this tumhe sharam nahi ati

Maan-sharam'.hayan sab kuch mugh me hai magar agar ye sab mughe mere manzil ko pane se rokte hai to'''''.mai yeh sab bhulane ko raazi hoon

Dev-aaj geet mil gayi bro aisa bhi to ho sakta hai na ki kal koi aur par dil aa jaeye aapka'''''yeh kya kar rahe hai aap

Maan-mai sirf geet ka hoon aur agar uska na ho paya to kisika hone layak nahi rahunga

Naintara-veerji yeh koi mazak nahi hai

Maan-geet chahe mere paas hokar mujhse nafrat kare magar mughse door chali jae ye gam mughe raazi nahi

Edited by chandreyeeroy - 24 September 2011 at 9:29am

The following 50 member(s) liked the above post:

aprajitamadraNihsonTinaSwissmeet555bhakbhartifanthendral_111sakadafimamatha.CrystalSayaesheenasanam1234uangel_mew97531sheetalvasapreetymaaneetnats0101misty_drastifankiran99007jindalCrazyMaaneetFanaakritisri1111mrk-1-Veritaserum-meettuawesomepoojaNiharika.Nairsweet cherryPreethi-Premialicia212_wallflower_TeamMcSwarekLittle_Mermaid.Mehek25HansaNmitzi11rsroopaliShalvepreethiaRageOfAnAngelmaaneetsangel6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6arpitaji--Ratna--zaara2212tabby999tamanna1391todayzstarDownhillJanakivallavDonnaa

TeamMcSwarek IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 July 2011
Posts: 9139

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
i'm gonna cry
that was so amazing
cont soon
thanks for the pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Little_Mermaid. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 April 2011
Posts: 10026

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
sorry dear muje nahi pata tha aap isse aise end kar do ge im not happy this not ss aap ne to os bana diya Cry story ko thoda aur bdana t ha

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


97531 Goldie

Joined: 05 May 2011
Posts: 1560

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Awesome update dr
loved it, but u ended this so early
thanx for pm.

Edited by 97531 - 24 September 2011 at 8:20am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


kiran99 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 December 2007
Posts: 2580

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
awsome thanks for pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


vjhawar Newbie

Joined: 25 April 2011
Posts: 17

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
oh my god so many parts togetherClapi just love it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


chandreyeeroy Groupbie

Joined: 02 March 2011
Posts: 179

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged


In the last ten years of her life a lot had changed

She was a free independent women with no bounds but proper values intact

She was brought up well……………good manners were inculcated in her

Her looks were such that fairies would be left behind

Yes she now had a choice to leave all this and find her man……………her life

But she was living a life of blisss

She knew that he loved her

But did she ever understand the depth

Maan-geet shona in todays party I want to give you a gift but what im going to give you has to be taken care of and………I have and will continue to be your support

Unknown to her she had loved him…………adored him……….

He then saw a little boy pulling his pants


Maan-yes mera beta

Rishi-im papas beta………………I want to play with you

Maan-chalo ill teach you how to play football then

Naintara-veerji use padhne baithna hai Monday exam hai and he wants to play from morning

Maan-science hai na naintara……………….dont worry ill teach him

Rishi-but rishi wants to play

Maan-baby we will play but lets revise first

Geet giggled and the three of them later played football


As she decended down the stairs in a beautifull seagreen gown he lost his breath

She greeted her bhaiya-bhabhi and rishi(dev-tara)and as soon as she saw her parents entering the venue she jumped on them

Maan had always encouraged her parents to come and stay,meet talk and do anything with her other than taking her away

Geet was a private persona so the party was only for the family members

As soon as mr and mrs handa arrived maan felt deserted as all rushed towards them

Again another year with him wishing mishti the first and being reciprocated the last

Again another year where he wouldn't have the cake from her hand

Again another year where she wouldn't open his gift like others

Years after years the same thing happenned but he was happy that his shona used to talk to him atleast used to hug him when he used to say that he luved her

She had loved him he knew that and waited for the day when she would know that

And finally his prayers were answered but………………..

The following 33 member(s) liked the above post:

paromannsarah_zaishameet555Nihsonmamatha.bhakbhartifanthendral_111CrystalSayasupernasahupreetymaaneet_wallflower_NeejuNiharika.Nairhoneygrape-Veritaserum--Prithi-sweet cherrymitzi11rsroopali--Ratna--HansaN6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6arpitajiShalvepreethiazaara2212RageOfAnAngelmaaneetsangeltodayzstartabby999DownhillJanakivallavDonnaa

chandreyeeroy Groupbie

Joined: 02 March 2011
Posts: 179

Posted: 24 September 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged

Part 8-

Rano-arre what did mr.khurana gift you(taunt)

Geet-must be something I don't know ill see later

Rano-are open na lets see what has he ever given you other than sadness

            And what can he ever give you he has always taken everything from you

            Cheap person……………..woman user…………….he has caged you and simply used you

            I know very well he has only physical urges

Geet-maa please


Rano-don't…………………don't you call me that

You have played with my daughters life

Spoilt it

Used her……………….your thirsty body

You never loved her only loathed her

Papaji-rano bas

Geet head was bowed down but it suddenly lifted up when she heard dev shout


Maan stumbled back and tried to hold the chair for support but failed

Geet went and both dev and geet helped him on his feet

Maan separated himself from her hands

Maan-mummyji………………..i promise you geet ki khushi me hi meri khushi hai aur agar vo kisi aur ko……………mai use nahi rokunga

He took loose steps back

Geet felt a sudden void

Dev-aunty uncle aap log please guest room me aaj rat ke liye ruk jaiye

As every body retired for te bed at night-------------------

Geet went to maans room with food

Geet-maan I noticed you didn't have food

As he looked towards her she looked away

She couldn't bear the sight in front of her

He was weeping badly holding the bed for support

Maan-ggeett iii ……..

She rushed towards him

Geet-maan get up…………….yeh apna kya haal bana ke rakha hai tumne

He hugged him and he cried in her embrace

Maan-geet tum meri jaan ho


Maan smiled

She saw the angelic smile

After years she had seen him smile

Geet-maa was wron………..

Maan-mummyji can never be wrong ,I am your gunhehaar……………saza do mughe geet magar mughse door mat jao nawear I loved you

I didn't use you

I promise love I will always be with you……….

He was shivering and shaking howling and crying telling his  only love the only words he knew

She was feeling helpless for not being able to stop him and she then found the only option

The following 32 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
NEW Maaneet FF~ LOVE-KNOT~ UPDTPart20page 97 09/24

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 110 111

Author: hapinezz13   Replies: 880   Views: 291590

hapinezz13 880 291590 05 October 2018 at 11:06am by khwaishfan
Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1..

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 134 135

Author: swthrtdevisha   Replies: 1079   Views: 379534

swthrtdevisha 1079 379534 04 September 2013 at 9:04pm by priyal12
My first Maaneet FF-An Unusual Grihapravesh

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 30 31

Author: IndigoBlues   Replies: 242   Views: 120992

IndigoBlues 242 120992 13 December 2012 at 2:05am by amandadsouza95
FIRE and ICE - Maaneet FF *updated;Ch-6.Pg-15*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 25 26

Author: SanaH05   Replies: 203   Views: 74411

SanaH05 203 74411 08 October 2012 at 5:32am by anky_s
Maaneet SS: Coffee Shop Rendez-Vous:Pt.6 Pg.40

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 38 39

Author: ..Naina..   Replies: 309   Views: 61529

..Naina.. 309 61529 24 March 2012 at 1:27pm by anky_s

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index