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FF: Iss Desh Mai Hai Mera Dil Chapter 24 Pg 49 (Page 33)

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zigzagway_sadi

The part was truely brilliant..

i m so hating this gay3... but atleast she said everything infront of prem and play any game from the back without them knowing...

But why prem is not showing any reaction??? its wasn't heer's mistake that she was told to leave the house..Cry

preet is sweetheart.. without our preet prem and heer story is incomplete..

yes yes atlast prem said something..i so so love him.. he did the right thing.. serves right to that gay3..

Ahhh.. the story is getting much more interesting..

U rock girl..

Thanks for the pm..

continue soon!!

thank u for the comments...really appreciate it

prem was actuuallly confuse to what to do, he loves awl of them n can't break anybody's heart...u knowwwWink!!!

but now everythin i is clear.

i'l be updating!

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran_28

nice update yaar
prem ne et ka jawab pathar se diya. yeepppiii
eagerly waiting 4 next part
thanx 4 PM
thank u for the comments...really apppreciate it

ohh yesh...after awl its ouur premmm!!!

will be updating now
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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by annokhi

amazing update yusra diClap! u r a rockstar.

thanks for pm.

thank u for the comments...really appreciate it

i'l be updating in a while
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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by premiti

wonderful update...cant wait for the next...

try updating soon...
pm me wen u update...

thank u for the comments...really appreciate it

and u're added to my pm list!!

i'l be updating in a while
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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
in a while..i m dying here
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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrushika

in a while..i m dying here

don't die...then who will give me long long commentsLOL!!!

u know the sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...tu sabarrrWink

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by repunzell

Originally posted by vrushika

in a while..i m dying here

don't die...then who will give me long long commentsLOL!!!

u know the sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...tu sabarrrWink
Cryi kniw bt cant... update soon
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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
chapter 20:

after that when kuldi, prem n heer walked a for a while quietly on the road. none of them talking to each other, only reminding what happen inside. then kuldi said, "tum dunno yaha rukho mai kiran aur bachoo ko bola kar la ti hoo".heer, " jee di."
kulraaj went from there n prem n heer were standing there for a while. then prem went n sit on the bench nearby. heer followed him n sat beside him.
prem: heer, ab kiya hoga? hum kaha jaiye gay
heer: prem tum gabrio mat, sab kuch sahi hojaiye ga.
prem: mai nay tum say kitnay waaday kiyai thay, tumharay yeh karo woh karo. buhat ghumioe ga magar abb n prem starts tearing up n looks down.
heer knelts infront of prem n hold his cheeks wih her hands n remove her tears.
heer: prem, mujhay sirf tumhara sath jaiye, mujhay iss duniya say kio matlab nahi hai. agar tum meray sath ho tu yeh meray liyai sab say bari khushi hai aur agar tum nahi tu yeh duniya bhi nahi.
prem looks in heer's eyes who was about to throw tears n then both puts their forehead wid each other and crys silently.

there kulraaj told everything to kiran tht what happened in the house. kiran was shocked to hear n consoled her. 
kulraaj: chalo prem aur heer hamara intezaar kar rahay hogay.
kiran: haa n then he removes kulraaj tears n kiss on her forehead.
whn they came n saw prem n heer kneeling down n crying silently, they both smiled to each other.
kiran: zindagi mai jitni bhi problems ajaiye magar agar yeh dunno aisay he ek doosray ka sath day tu har pareeshan door bhag jaiye gi un sau.
kulraaj: sach kaha app nay, jab waha heer meray sath arahi thi aur prem kuch nhi keh raha tha tu mai tu dar gaye thi magar mujhay itna tu yaqeen tha keh prem zaroor kuch karay ga.
kiran: aur kiya...hamara prem awai thora heer ka deewana hai
kulraaj smiles.
taanu: papa prem mamu aur heer mami aisay kyu bethay hai?
kiran: app ja kar poocho
taanu runs towards them
taanu: mamu, mami app ko kiya howa? app loog zameen par kyu bethay hai?
prem n heer pulls apart n remove tears.
heer: kuch nahi taanu bas aisay heee.
taanu: nahi mujhay pata hai, mamu apko piyaar kar rahay thay na
prem n heer both gets shy.
kiran n kulraaj cumes there.
prem hugs kiran n crys for a bit coz he has always considered kiran as his elder brother
kiran: bas prem, ab kitna roye gaaa... bas bhi kar.
prem: magar jeju mama nay aisay kyu bola hamay?
kiran: maa abhi samaj nhi pa rahi hai magar unko zaroor kuch dinno samaj mai aye ga.
heer n kuldi culdn't hold back their tears n also start crying hugging each other.
taanu couldn't understand why was everyone crying
taanu: app sab kyu roo rahay hai? kio game hai kiya? mai bhi khelo
everyone smiled hearing it.
taanu: chalo ghar chalo waha sab keh sath khelay gay.
preet mam aur dadi keh sath.
everybody was shocked as how to answer taanu
kulraaj: taanu hum iss ghar nhi ja rahay hai aur ab kabhi nhi jaiye gay.
taanu: magar mama kyu...woh tu itna acha ghar hai, meray saray toys bhi waha hai
kulraaj (angrily): mai nay kaha nahi tu nahi!!!
prem, kiran n heer shocked to hear kulraaj voice.
taanu: app mujhay dandt kyu rahi hai n she starts crying
kiran: kulraaj, woh bachi hai.
heer goes n kneels down to taanu
heer: dekho taanu app first agaye iss game mai.
taanu was confuse.
heer: last mai jo roye ga woh first aye ga aur app first a gaye.
taanu was happy n calms down.
taanu: maagr mami, mujhay ghar jana hai aur mama mana kar rahi hai
heer: taanu, hum new ghar jaiye gay aur waha apr new toys bhi hogay.
taanu: pakaaa
heer: pakaaa
taanu smiles.
rest of them were so pleased to see how heer handle the situation.
kiran: tu chalay?
prem: kaha chayai gay hum?
kiran:jab yeh sab kuch ho raha tha, mujhay lag raha tha keh aisa kuch hoga, tu mai nay ek ghar apnay paisoo par rent lay liya tha.
prem: ohhh
kulraaj: aur tu aut heer bhi hamaray sath ja rahay hai
prem: magar hum dii
kuldi: haaa
prem: nahi di, app aur jeej apni family keh sath araam say rahay. mai aur heer kuch aur bandobast kar laygay.
kuldi: aur tu family hai samjayyy
prem: nahi dee, mujhay pata hai app mujh say piyaar karti hai magar mai yeh nhi kar sakta. kiran jeju nay apnay paisoo say woh ghar khareeda hai magar aisay khud gharz nahi ho sakta, n prem moves back.
kiran n kulraaj were shocked n sad to hear thiz.
kuldi (a bit angryly) : acha tujhay nahi ana tu mat aa magar mai heer ko apnay sath lay kar jio gi.woh meri bhabhi hai aur mai apni bhabhi ko road par ghoomtay huye nahi dekh sakti.
heer looked at awl of them
heer: nahi dee, jaha prem jaiye ga, mai iss keh sath jio gii...sorry dee magar mai prem ko akelay nhi choor sakti.
kiran: aray bhai tum dunno kyu behaz kar rahay ho.
prem: magar jeju.
kiran: mai nay woh ghat khareeda nahi hai magar rent par liya hai. iss mahina ka rent mai nay day diya tu aglay mahinay ka day dayna. okay?
prem: okay
kiran: ab chalay.
but kulraaj was still upset for what prem said. prem went to her n hug him
prem: sorry dee
kuldi: tu nay aisay sooch bhi kaisay liyaa, tu janta hai shor say tu mera sab kuch tu pher.
prem consoling n rubbing her back.
prem: sorryyy
kiran n heer smiles seeing thiz.

after a while they went to a house. it was in a colony bt a good colony wid normal n happy goin people.
they entered their home. it was a small home wid two small bedrooms n a kitchen. and small lounge wid a small sofa set.
kiran: mai itnay time mai itna he kuch kar saka.
prem: nahi jeeu itna bhi buhat zada hai, aur ghar say kiya laina hai. hamara piyaar iss sab ko bhaar dayga.
kulraaj went to make taanu lie down as she was sleeping. 
heer took a round of the house n fond it simple n nice. prem also followed her.
heer: tum araam karlo mai ghar ki safaiye karti ho. tum thak gaye hogay.
prem: tum bhi tu thak gaye ho? subah say itni tension thi.
heer: kio baat nahi...tum laytay mai ati ho. give him a peck on his cheeks n went.

later that day, they had dinner, kiran had already got sume vegetables n kitchen things so heer n kuldi made it. they didn't talk much, they were still in that phase. but most of awl prem was sad of awl that happen. he culdn't believe that maa could do thiz. heer was tensed for prem that how will he cope up.

after that they went to their respective room. prem lio down n wait for heer to cume. after cleaning the dishes heer alos came n lay down on her pillow.
prem: aj tum apnay favourite pillow par nahi laytay gi. tum bhi mujh say naraz hoo.
heer quickly went towards prem n put her hand on his chest.
heer: nahi prem, mai tum say kabhi bhi naraz nahi ho sakti.
prem: tu pher tum meray pass kyu nahi aye.
heer: woh tum subah say itnay pareshan thay tu mai tum ko araam say sonay do.
prem: aur mera araam tumharay sath hai, agar tum meray pass nhi hogi tu mujhay needh kaisay aye gi.
heer then lie her head on his chest n prem put his hand on her chest.
prem: heer mai tum say buhat buhat piyaar karta ho. tum meri sab kuch ho aur mujhay yeh nhi pata chal raha hai keh maa nay aisay kaisay tumko mujh say lag karnay ki khooshish ki.
heer: prem, maa nay kuch socha hoga. tum ab bhool jio un sab batoo ko. ab hum ek sath haina.
prem quiet for a while
prem: acha ek baat batio
heer: haa
prem: agar mai tumharay sath nhi ata tum kiya kartii
heer: tumhara intezaar
prem: kuya matlab? 
heer: tumharay pass jo heart haina woh mera hai so tum kab tak mujh say door rehtayy
prem: achaaa
heer: jeee
prem: smiles n laughs a bit. heer was happy that atlast prem laughed a bit in all day.
heer: mujhay tum say kio shikayat nahi hoti, kyu keh mujhay pata tha keh tum kabhi mera bura nhi soojo gay, tu mai tumahar intezaar karti.
prem: issi wajah say kehat ho mai tumko U'RE MY LIFE...u're everything for me aur agar tum meray sath ho tu mai sab kuch bardasht kar sakta hoo.
heer: aur mai tumharay sath hamesha hooo...hameshaaa
prem kisses heer on her forhead.
prem: love u
heer: love u tooo
and then they both sleep after awl day tiredness.


precap: sumeone gets to knwo the truth...who is it?
             problems n love are part n parcel of life.


so how is it...plz do comment n hit the like button...tried my best to give a bit long update...

see yaaa




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