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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i'm really sorry for being such a bad writer who doesn't update n disappoint her readers :(!!!

but i promise u guys, paka promise i'l be updating on Sunday paka promise!!!

please bear for few more days :P!!!

thankooo...love u awl!!!
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SURPRISEEE😃!!!

I'm updating tonyte atlast 😆!!! i can't eply to awl the comments now bt i'm really THANKFUL to awl of u for the amazing commentsss🤗!!!

thanks a ton!!!

n now here is the updateee...writing after a while so sorry for any mistakess😛

CHAPTER 22:

After heer n prem consoled each other.
heer: prem tumko apnay apko sambhalna hoga, aisay karo gay tu hum sab ka kiya hogaa
prem: haa, tum sahi keh rahi ho, ab mai sahi hoo
they both went outside.

in juneja house:

preet was goin to his bauji's room as he had called him.
when he was on their doorstep, he heard bauji's voice from downstair but then he also heard soem one laughing in bauji's room. he thought that was weird coz after PB n heer bhabhi went, everybody was quiet. he decided to check it out n went n stood closer to the door.
and he saw n heard due to which he was shocked n angry.
veera was whole heartedly laughing n gayatri was showing her wicked smile.
veera: mom, u're the best, kiya sixer lagaya hai...prem bhaiya aur kuldi ko ghar say nikaal kar...becharay loog ab pata nhi kaha rahay gayy!!!
gayatri was also smiling!!!
veera: but maa mujhay ek baat nhi samaj ayee?
gayatri: kiya?
veera: apnay heer bhabhi ko kyu nikala?
gayatri (smiling) : mujhay pata tha agar heer is ghar mai rehti tu woh kulraaj ko iss ghar mai wapis lanay i khooshish karti aur prem ko bhi iss ghar say nikalnay ka kio raasta nahi tha siwaiye heer kyu keh mujhay pata tha prem heer say buhat piyaar karta hai, woh kulraaj say bhi karta hai magar iss keh sath nhi jata agar heer naahi jati issi wajah say heer ko nikalna paraaa
veera: ohhh...niceee!!!!
veera: aur iss meher ko kyu rakhaaa apnay, isko bhi nikal daytiii!!!
gayatri: agar iss ko nikalti tu ghar ka kaam kaun kartaaa
both gayatri aur veera started laughing loudly.
gayatri: ab tum tension mat lo. iss ghar ki property sirf tum mai, preet mai ur harman mai divide hogi, un sautailoo mai nahiii
veera was smiling

preet after hearing was shockeddd n culdn't believe that what he heard n saw was true.
instead of goin to meet bauji he went to his room n thought about what he heard few minutes back.
preet: maa aur veera ki yeh chaal thi, mujhay laga maa kuldi say naraz hai issi wajah say yeh kiya magar maa ka tu kio aur he plannn!!! he was angry that his mom was thinking so low abt his PB, he just wanted to leave this house noww.

he dressed up n went downstairs.
he was rushing towards the door when his bauji called him.
bauji: preettt
preet stopped
preet: jeee
bauji: kaha ja raha hai
preet: pr...(thinking: agar mai nay bauji ko bataya tu maa ko pata chal jiaye aur pher aur kio musibat ajiaiye gi
preet: woh thoray kaam say 
bauji: mujhay pata hai tu naraz hai mujh say.
preet: silence.
bauji: tu he bata mai kiya karta, gayatri nay jo bataya mujhay kulraaj ko aisa nhi karna chayai tha, aur prem nay bhi kulraaj ka yaqeen kar liyaaa???
preet: aur apnay maa ka yaqeen karliyaaa??? apnay ek dafa kuldi aur PB say poochnay ki khooshish ki keh un nay aisay kyu kiyaaa!!! n he went from thereee!!!!
bauji was shocked to hear thisss!!!

in colony:
kulraaj and kiran went outside wid taanu coz she was getting bored.
prem n heer were sitting in the lounge.
prem: heer, 
heer: haaa
prem: ab mujhay kio naukari thodni pari gi.
heer: shocked. she haven't imagine prem working under sumeone. it was THE PREM JUNEJA that people used to work under him
heer: magar
prem: ha heer, warna ghar ak aur tumhara kharcha mai kaisay uthio ga, kiran jiju sab kuch akelay tu nhi kar saktay naa.
heer: quiet
prem: mai nay tumko kiya kiya samnay dekhayai thay, keh hum yeh karay, mai tumharay liyai yeh karo, tumko kio musibat nhi doo ga, tum ek rani ki tarha raho gi!! saray sapnay toot gaya aur tumharay promises bhi toore diyaaa
heer quickly went near prem n knelt infront of him
heer: nahi prem aisi kio baat nahi hai.
prem: aisay he hai.
heer: nahi prem, duniya ka sab say bara sapna, waada aur sach meray liyai yeh hai keh tum meray sath ho aur meray pass ho, agar tum meray sath nhi hotay tu yeh rani wali zindagi mujhay bilkul manzoor nahi hota.
prem stare at him
prem: tum itni achi kyu ho?
heer: kyu keh tum achi ho.
both smile at each other.
and hug each other.

at that tyme sumeone knocked the door.
prem: kuldi aye hogi, mai kholta hoo
prem went n open teh door n was shocked to see Preet
prem: preet tu
heer hearing his name, came near the door.
without saying anything, preet hugged prem tightly n both cried.
heer also had tears after seeing teh scene infront of her. prem n preet were hugging each other as if they met after long tyme

after like good 10 mins, preet n prem came out of their hug.
prem removed preet tears n puled him inside the house.
both the brothers went n sat on the sofa n didn't speak anything.
heer went n bought water for preet.
prem took the glass n made preet the water.
he smield n remembered his old days whn his PB used to make him eat or drink whnever he was angry wid anybody!


PRECAP: truth revealed infront of prem n kulraaj!!!

i hope u guys like it, sorry for any mistakes, do comment n hit teh liek button!!!!


see yaaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
yooo...me firsttt
lovely update...⭐️
premeer scene r lovely and emotional one...😃.😭
and g3...😡i didn't expected this much...
.pls i don't want her as a full negative character...😔
and veera...🤢
thank god that preet heard everything and soon premeer and kulraj will come to know the truth ...👏
bt i don't want premeer to back to home soon...😳i want prem to establish his own frame with heers support...😍then go back to home...just a suggestion only...😳
update next part soon...😃
thnx for pm...😃

Edited by priyahmt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
THE UPDATE IS VERY NICE...
NOW PREM WILL KNOW WHAT IS GAYATRI AND VEERA HAD DONE TO KULRAJ DIII...