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FF: Iss Desh Mai Hai Mera Dil Chapter 24 Pg 49 (Page 27)

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
nice update
eagerly waiting 4 next chap
thanx 4 PM

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
very cute update dear ...
really loved it ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
 

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
thank u for the comments and as promised here is the update but i guess a bit shorttt!!!!

chapter 18:

next morning prem woke up n saw heer was not on her side.
prem: heer kaha gaye?
he stood up n look here n there.
prem: heeerrr!!!
heer (Shouting from the bathroom): mai bathroom mai ho premm...atii hooo
prem: ohkkaayy n laid back on the bed!!

after few minutes heer came out drying her hair.
heer: kya howa? kyu chila rahay thay?
prem: woh mai nay tumko kamray mai nhi dekha na issi wajahhh
heer: prem tum bhi naaa...
prem came n hugged from back.
prem: heerrr...
heer: kiya howaaa
prem: mujhay aj office nahi janaaa
heer: nahi jana kiya matlab...chalay bathroom chayai aur fresh ho kar  ayeee.
heer pushess prem towards the washromm..
prem: heeerrr but it was too lateee.

after few minutes heer n prem both were ready n was standing infront of the mirror n hugging each other.
prem: meri heer aj bhat romantic hogaye hai..
heer: haa bas app par piyaar agayaa haiii
prem acha hai, yeh piyaar kabhi kabhi ata haiii
heer hit him on his chest n huggs him again.
while they were hugging each other they hear a loud sound of gayatrii: kulraaajjj!!!!!!
they both got shocked n looked at each other ran downstairs.
whn they were on the stairs they saw gayatri pushed kulraaj n she was abt to fall bt prem hurried downstairs n catched her before she fall.
prem: maaa...yeh kya kar rahi hai app.
gayatri: prem isko meri nazaro keh samnay say layjaaa.
kulraaj: ja rahi ho, mujhay bhi shok nahi hai aisa ghar mai rehna ka jaha sachaye ka sath na hoo.
gayatri: tum jhooth bool rahi hoo
kulraaj: mai jhooth nahi bool rahi, apki beti veera bool rahi hai.
they both were arguing wid each other n prem n heer were not understanding a word.
prem took kulraaj face n moved her infront of him.
prem: kuldi kiya howaa?
kuldi: prem...snobbing...wohhh...again cryingg!!!
prem: app yaha bethooo...
prem: heer pani lioyeee
heer hurried in the kitchen n got water.
prem: acha ab app chup hojioo aur pani pee loo.
kuldi: mujhay yaha ka pani pee loo.
heer knelt infront of her. n took the glass from prem 
heer: hamaray liyai pee loo di plzz!!
kulraaj looked at heer n then prem who shook his head to drink. then kulraaj took sume sips of water.
gayatri: kio zaroorat nhi hai iski dekh bhal karnay ki prem.
prem (stood up n went to gayatri): app aisay kyu keh rahi hai maaa...aisa kiya kar diya di nayy!!!
gayatri: aisa kiyaa tu pooch raha hai...yeh keh rahi hai keh veera ki dosti iss rishap ramphal keh sath sahi nahi. aray rishab ramphal mai kuch galat nhi hai, woh acha insaan hai, galat yeh hai aur kiran...dunno pata nhi kyu meeri bachi keh pechay paray huye haiii...
and their veera was having crocodile fake tears n crying on her mother's shoulder.
veera: ha bhaiyaaa, kuldi pata nhi kyu meray peechay pari huye haiii.
kulraaj came to prem.
kulraaj: prem, yeh sab galat hai, mai nay sirf maa say yeh bolaa tha keh rishap acha larka nahi aur yeh tu bhi janta hai. mai nay sirf maa ko bola tha keh veera ko mana karay magar maa meri baat nhi maani aur mujhay galat salat bool rahi hai.

preet n heer were standing there wid tears in their eyes, they knew kulraaj won't liee and there is suemthing else to the story.

gayatri: prem tu iss ki baat par mat aaa...mai janti hoo yeh sab kuch aisay kyu bool rahi hai,
prem (tears in his eyes also): kyu maa, kuldi kyu jhooth bolay gi.
gayatri: kyu keh yeh SAUTAYLI haina iss wajah, veera keh property aur paisoo par haq jamana chati haii.
everybody were shocked to hear that esp kulraaajjj n preemmm!!!
kulraaj: mai yeh ghar choor kar ja rahi ho abhi, kiran bacho ko bahir lay kar gaye thay, mai abhi unkeh pass ja rahi hooo.
gayatri: haa jio jio rukha kis nay.
prem was shattered hearing thiz, he didn't know when kulraaj went away from his arms. he was upset n crying after hearing from what his maa said. he didn't know what to do n how to do. he knew kuldi was right bt he cannot also go against her maa's wishes.
heer saw prem n knew what was goin through his mind. she knew he was shattered after hearing thiz n now she hav to do suemthing. she ran to gayatri maa.
heer: ma plz kuldi ko rukh lay, hum araam say bhi solja saktay hai plz maaa
bt gayatri wasn't listening.
heer ran to kuldi.
heer: kuldi, plz rukh jaiye, plzz prem keh liyai he rukh jaiyeee...plz dddiii.
kulraaj looked at prem who was upset n cryingg n then she looked at heer n caressed her cheek. but move forward towards the door.
heer: plz dee rukh jaiyeee plzzz

gayatri: (shouted) aur jo isko ruukhnay ki khooshish kar raha hai woh bhi yaha say ja saktaaa haiinnn.

prem n heer were hell shocked to hear thiz!!!!

precap: suspenseee!!!!!

itna tu haq banta hainaa to keep suspenseeLOL!!! actually haven't decided the further story as wht will happen so stay tuned to knowwwWink

plz leave ur comments n sorry for any silly mistakes which i know will be there...hehehheh

see yaaa


Edited by repunzell - 25 October 2011 at 1:44pm

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
nice update yaar...Clap
poor prem and kulraj ...Cry
and this gaytri and veera...Angry
hope prem will do something soon...WinkBig smile

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
The cute little morning scene... it was so so cute!!!

OMG gayatri and kulraaj fighting... i didn't of something like that will happen!!!

Always this veera is the one who becomes the main cause of the problems and the fight... OMG this gay3 how could she say something like that...

Arggg.. i just hope that this veera only make that gay3 cry...

Thanks for the pm..

Continue soon!!

TC..

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
poor kulraj nd prem
aur is veera ki bachi ko mae chorungi naiAngry
aur yeh gaytri bhi kuch kam nai hai, agar iski wajeh se prem aur heer
alag ho gayena to mae usse shoot kardungiAngry

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 1:03am | IP Logged
awesome update ...Clap

Edited by pihu07 - 26 October 2011 at 1:03am

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
very nice update ...
loved premeer scenes ...
waiting for the next part ...
please update soon ...

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