thankooo very much for the response guys...loved it!!!
bt i'm really sorry i'll be giving a short updaate today coz my internet is very irratating today so before sumething goes wrong here is the update:
chapter 12:
the party was about to end, heer saw that prem was busy wid his business frnds so didn't think to disturb him so she bid good bye to the family n went to their room coz she was very tired. not feeling like to change she went n stood near the window n was thinking abt today's event.
prem after bidding to his frnds at the door, he looked back n culdn't find any family memebers not heer also. there were only waiters cleaning it up. he was like "aj keh din bhi mai businnes ki baatay karta raha aur heer chali gaye upar...ufff"
prem went to their room n saw his lady love standing to their favourite place n was lookin at the moon. he removed his coat n put it on bed n went to her. heer elt sumeone around her n was about to look back whn prem hold her waist from the back n put his head on her shoulder. heer smiled.
prem: sorry
heer: kis liyai
prem: woh mai neechay baatay karta raha aur tum upar agaye
heer: its okay, mujhay pata hai business tumharay liyai buhat imp hai aur hum kal ja rahay hai tu kaam batanay hogay.
prem: haa imp tu hai magar tum say important kio cheez nahi hai meri jaan. he snuggled his head on her neck. heer smiled.
heer: prem, ek baat bolo
prem: bolo
heer: wohh...
prem saw heer feeling a bit wired.
prem: kya howa heer/
heer: woh mujhay rishabh acha larka nhi laga, mujhay pata hai woh veera ka dost hai mujhay aisay nhi bolna jaiye magar pata nhi woh sahi admi nahi laga.
prem: iss nay kuch bola tumko (a bit serious n angry).
heer (knew prem was angry now, so she put her hand on his cheek) ; nahi prem mujhay kuch nhi bolaa, but jaisay woh dekh raha tha woh mujhay acha nhi laga.
prem: mujhay pata hai keh rishabh acha larka nhi hai, magar mujhay kuldi nay mana kiya tha bolnay ko warna sab keh samnay tamasha ban jata.
heer: ohhkk
prem: aur tum tension mat lo, jab tak mai tumharay sath ho, tum ko kyu kuch nhi kar sakta.
heer: mujhay pata hai, n she smiled.
prem: mujhay acha laga tum nay meray sath yeh baat share ki.
heerL prem mai tum say kuch nhi chuppio gi, jo bhi hoga hum sath mil ka karay ga. jahay woh khushi ho ya ghum...haina??
prem turns her back n kisses her forehead : haa
heer put her face on prem chest and prem his hands around her back, smiling and looking at teh moon.
after a while,
prem: chalo heer, raat buhat ho gaye hai, soo jatay hai akl subah packing bhi karni hai.
heer: okay n kisses prem cheeks n went to change.
prem left standing there n looking at the moon "thank u very much bagwan, mujhay heer daynay keh liyai aur mai issko har waqt khush raho ga, iss nay duniya mai buhat kuch dekha hai...ab kissi ka bhi saya nahi anay doga iss keh passs. n he smiling n staring on the moon, thinking of their moments.
heer cumin out of the washroom, "prem jio change kar lo, mai nay kapray rakh diya hai.
prem goes to change n heer went to set the bed n he lies down, waiting for prem to cume. when prem cumes n lay down on the bed so heer cumes near him n keeps her nead on his chest n hands around his stomach, snuggling herself. and prem also keeps his hands aronds her waist.
prem: mujhay laga tum soo gaye.
heer: mai tumharay begair soo sakti ho kya??
prem: nahi (smiling)
heer: tu...
prem: good nyte
heer: good nyte
in the morning, v see heer packing her n prem stuff n kuldi helping her. n preet as usual nuthing except teasing.
preet: bhabhi, ap aur PB ja kaha kaha rahay hai?
heer: mujay nahi pata preet.
preet: woh kyu?
heer(shyly): woh prem nay kaha hai surprise hai
preet: ohhh
kuldi: ky pareshaan kar raha hai isko
preet: woh bas aisay he...pher yeh loog chalay jaiye...
kuldi: aur tu pher kisko tease karay ga.
preet: ohh yeshhh!!!!
meher: aur tum kar bhi kya saktay hoo
preet: none of ur business
meher: shut up
preet; u shut up
meher: dee dekhoo na
preet: bhabhi dekho naaa
kuldi: tum dunoo chup hojio!!1
kuldi: waisay heer , prem gaya kaha hai?
heer: woh dee unko office mai kio kaam tha aur keh rahay thay kuch laina haii
kuldi: woh aur iska office.
preet: ohooo "unkooo"
heer smiles n gets shyed upp
prem: kya ho raha hai?
preet: apka intezaar
prem cumes n puuts sume shoppers in the bags quietly. heer notices it bt didn't say anything.
prem: kyu ho raha hai mera intezaar.
preet: apko nahi jana kiya tu mai chala jiooo
everybody laughs
prem: no thank u n stares at him.
kuldi: chalo ab tum loog jaldi taiyaar hojioo...flight doo ghantay mai hai.
everybody goes out n prem n heer quickly gets ready.
heer: prem tum un bags mai kya laye hoo?
prem: tumhaary liyai kuch cheezay...magar tum jab he pehenoo gi agar tum comfortable hogi otherwise noo okay?
heer understood prem bought sume western dresses for her.
heer (smiles): okay.
now they are understanding on the door n waving everybody bye.
lalit: iska kayal rakhna prem.
prem: jee bauji
gayatri: khushi khushi jio aur araam say mazay karo, yaha ki tension mat laina.
prem n heer: jee
thn they meet kuldi n kiran , hugs thm n they say to enjoy n hav fun
preet also hugs his bhabhi n PB;
prem: apna aur ghar ka khayal rakhna.
preet: yes boss!!
prem: aur agar ho sakay tu bauji keh sath office chalay jana.
prem: no boss!!!
everybody laughs hearing thiz n thm prem hugs preet n says take care.
heer saw meher standing a bit far n was quiet. heer goes to her.
heer: apni behen say galay nhi lago gi.
meher (crying): deee n hugs her.
heer: apna khayal aur ghar waloo ko zada pareeshan mat karna...theek hai?
meher: ha dee
prem sees thiz n goes to them.
prem: saali jee agar app kahi apko bhi lay chalay?
heer n meher cumes out of their hugs.
meher: nahi jiju app chayai aur meri behen ka khayal rakhay ga.
prem: jo humkum apka
everybody laughs hearing thiz n then meher hugs prem n prem smiles at heer hugging her n heer remove her tears seeing the most important people of her life.
lalit: chalo ab tum loogo ko nikalna hoga dair ho rahi hai
and so preet drives thm to the airport for their *honeymoon*
precap: do i really need to say wht it is...*honeymoon n honeyyymoonnn😳*
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