Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
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everybody start walking towards the house. gayatri n kuldi went early to get ready of awl other things.
when prem n heer stood infront of the door, gayatri did their arti n blessed thm wid happiness n love. heer throw the small kettle (sorry don't know what is it called) n thn put her feet in the red color thali n thn walk in the house. they awl sat in the lounge whn kuldi came wid a big bowl full of milk n dropped the ring in it n asked premeer to search for it. preet n kiran were hooting for prem n kuldi n meher for heer. they were smiling n searching for it. whn suddenly both took their hands out wid each holding rings from one corner. gayatri n lalit was happy to see thiz n told that "it means both will be together in awl circumstances. premeer were happy n smiled loooking at each other. and thn their were more rasam n after that kuldi took heer to "their room".
kuldi made heer sat on the bed comfortably. and took heer's hand n said:
kuldi: tu khush haina...
heer: ha dii buhat.
kuldi: tu mujh say ek vaada lay gay.
kuldi: tu hamesha prem ko khush rakhna...woh pagal kabhi kissi ko apna dukh nhi batata tu hamesha iss ka sath zada aur woh zaroor tjhay bataye ga.
heer: mai hamesha prem ka sath do gii di...kabhi isko akela nhi choro gi.
kuldi: mujhay buhat acha laga yeh sun kar.
heer amiles. kuldi careess her cheek n give her kiss n leaves the room.
outside prem's room it was a chaos, prem was in the middle n oreet, kiran n veera were surronding them.
kuldi: yeh kiya ho raha hai?
prem: dekhiya na dee
preet: app dekhay PB ...apni saali ko tu itna acha toofa diya, hamari baari aye tu bhaag rahay hai
they awl start luaghing
prem: acha dayta hoo.
to veera he gave a blank cheque n a new cell phone which she wanted. she was soo happy n she hugged prem by saying thank u n off she went. to kuldi n kiran he gave ticket to disneyland in the next summmer holidays wid their kids. kuldi was happy to see thiz n had tears.
preet: yeh dekho yeh rona shoro kardiya
kuldi: tu sab ka itna acha dehaan rakhta hai.
preet: sab ka kaha rakha dee...mai tuu baqi ho...n he amkes a pout
prem: teri nautanki nahi chayai gi naaa
n they laughs
prem: yeh lay tera tofa.
and prem gifts preet also ablank cheque plus a new sport car which preet was willing to take it since they came back from canada. preet was very happy to see thiz.
preet: PBBB...u're great, u're a rockstarrr, i loveee youuu!!!!
prem : acha bas bas...ab tu mujhya janay doo
preet: apko rukhaa kab...
they ran away before prem catches him. n prem went to his room.
heer heard everything which was being said outside n was happy to hear tht everyone was happy. and thn she heard the door opening, door closing n the door locking voice n her ehart beat start increasing. prem was happy to see the room. it was decorated wid red n white flowers n candles awl over the room. and his angel sitting in the middle of the room. first, he went to his cupboard n took sumething out n went near him, he sat beside heer, pull off his duppataa.
prem: heer mjhay dekho.
heer looked at him n prem was again memerized to see her beauty.
prem: tum aj ek dum pari lag rahi hoo...meri pari. heer blushed hearing his comments.
prem took her hands n put her gift.
prem: yeh tumharay liyai
prem: har pati apni patni ko shaddi ki raat ko toofa dayta hai tu mai kyu peechay raho. heer, mujhay woh sab kuch karna hai tu hota hai, mujhay har rishta, har khushi har dukh har cheez dekhnay aur karni hai, mera sath dogi?
heer: hamesha dogi prem.
prem smiled hhearing thiz n asked heer to open the gift.
heer opened it n there were two pretty diamond earing n gold bangles.
prem: kaisay lagay?
heer: bhat achay hai prem buhat
prem took the bangles n put in heer hands n asked her to wear the earings tomorow to which she nodded.
and thn there was a silence n thn prem slowly went closer to heer n put his hands on her cheeks to which heer closes her eyes.
prem: do u trust me heer?
heer: yes prem.
prem starts taking off his earings n locket. prem kissed her ears , heer put her hands on prem's back n moaned. prem culdn't control n start kissing on her neck. heer moaned.prem untie heer doori on the back and heer shrek as if it was an electric shock. prem pulled down her bluse from one shoulder n kissed n did the same wid the next. heer was enjoying it n has closed her eyes coz hse was in the moment. prem made heer lie down on the bed n start kissing heron awl over the face. heer was also kissing prem's neck n was masaaging his back. prem thn kissed her stomach n heer tightly hold his hair. prem came back up n looked at her face when heer opened her eyes, he she saw that prem was looking at her lips n she knew what he wanted n she was ready to give it. whn heer pulled prem towards her, he got the positive signal n so for the first tyme prem kissed heer lips. first it was slowly and after few minutedit went passionately. both were kissing each other very apssionately. prem asked his entrance in heer mouth n so heer happily opened her mouth n both were thn out of the sensesn started kissing hungerly n passinatelyy. both were rolling on the bed and kissing each other. after few mintes both were naked n culdn't resist each other. and were kissing each other and prem n heer becume premeer in awl senses. they became one. and teh candles were blown offf.
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