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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for the lovely comments ...really enjoyed it๐Ÿ˜ƒ!!!!

really is the update...!!!

chapter 17:

prem n heer reached juneja house wid a big smile on their face. they didn't inform anybody abt their return so they wanted to give them surprise.they knocked the door.
preet: arahaa hoo pata nhi kaun subah subah ajatayy haii...
as soon as preet open the dorr.
premeer: surpriseee!!!!!
preet: pbbb, bhabhiii
he was very excited n hugged them bothhh
preet: maa, bauji...dekho kaun ayaaa haiii
they awl go in the lounge.
prem n heer took ashirwaad from lalit n gayatri.
they awl sit in the loungeee n start talking abt their trip.
preet (in his mind): ab pb agaye haina tu sab sahi hojiaye gaaa!!!!
heer: aray preet, kuldi aur veera kaha hai dekhaye nahi day rahi?
preet: wohhh
prem: kiya woh bata naaa
gayatri: aray beta kuch nahi, veera upar soo rahi hai aur kulraaj yahi hogay.
then after few minutes kulraj cumess lookin a bit tired n eyes swollen.
heer n prem got up n went to meet her. heer hugged her.
heer: kaisi hai dee? kuldi: achi hoo
prem hugged her n then looked at her eyes.
prem: kiya howa dee, app kuch theek nahi lag rahi?
kuldi (tried to acr normal) : nahi kuch nahi, bas tum loog ko dekha na tu buhat acha laga!!!

but prem wasn't satisfied bt he thought its not the right tyme to ask. he will ask.
heer: chalo kuldi, app bhi betho...maza ayee ga.
kuldi looked at gayatri: nahi tum loog bethi, mujhay tannu ko dekhna hai!!! and she went from there. heer n prem were confused from her behaviour.

later they awl sitting n were talking, prem n heer showed them what they bought for the family memebers. veera was also very happy for her gifts. while prem was taking out things for them preet saw a red color gown in their bag.
preet (wispered) PB, yeh kiya hai?
prem: kiyaa?
preet: yeh jo bag mai red color ka kapra para howa hai.
prem saw n it n quickly hide it.: kuch nahi hai.
preet (smired) : batio naaa
prem: kuch nahi hai aur chal hat mujhay sab ko un keh toofay daynay doo.
preet: waisay heer bhabhi iss mai buhat sex...
prem: looked at her wid angerrr...
preet: mera matlab hai buhat achi lagi ho gi naaa
prem: (smiled) acha ab jaaa.

after a while prem n heer came in their home.
heer: its soo good to be back home.
prem: haaa
heer: tumko kuch alag nhi lag raha hai.
prem: kiya matlab?
heer: mera matlab hai, zaroor kuch hai keh yeh sab loog hum say kuch chuppa rahay hai esp kuldi woh kuch ghup sum lag rahi thi aur kiran jeeju bhi kahi nahi dekh rahay thay.
prem: ha magar tum pareeshan nahi ho, mai dekhta hoo howa kiya hai.
heer smiled.
prem: chalo ab thora araam kar laytay haiii!!!!
they both went to take a nap.

the rest of the two passed like thiz, prem busy in business n heer in household. bt they both noticed the quietness in the atmosphere. whenever heer asked kuldi n gayatri if there was suem tension they both ignored it nn told sume reasonnn
heer was more tensed coz she noticed that lalit n preet ahd also stopped their nook chook. heer asked meher she also didn't tell her.
whn prem came back from office, he came late. n he also called heer early to sleep 
prem opened his room door n saw heer sitting near the window.
prem: yeh larki bhi naa...
prem took off his coat n tie n put on the bed wid his bag n went near her.
prem hgged her from back.
prem: tum soye nahi?
heer: (looked back): tum agayeee
prem: mai nay kaha tha na soo jana...
heer: tumharay begair kabhi soye ho mai, jo aj sotii.
prem: tu agar mai nahi ata tu tum nahi sotii.
heer looked back n quickly put her hand on her mouth: aisa kabhi nahi kehnaa, tum ho tu mai hooo.
prem: aray mai tu mazak kar rahi thaaa, chalo ab smile karoo
heer: eee
prem smiled n prinked her nose n hugged her. they both hugged each other.
heer: tum fresh ho jio jab tak mai khana lati hoo
prem went to freshen up n heer went to heat up the food.
prem came out wearing white kurta n pajama n heer bought food.
they both had foos teasing each other n talking.
heer went back to the kitchen to cam ethe tray while prem set the bed n laid down 
heer came n switched off the lights n liad on prem's chest.
heer: my pilloww
prem (smiled) :alwaysss!! n put his hand around her waist
heer smiled.
heer: prem wk baat bolo,
prem: tumko poochnay ki zaroorat nhai hai.
heer: mujhay jana hai yaha hamari absence mai kiya howa, mujhay sab buhat ajeeb lag rahay hai. aisa lag raha hai they are hiding sumething from us.
prem: mujhay bhi yehi lag raha hai, office mai bhi dad buhat chup hotay hai aur kiran jiju yaha pher apnay cabin mai zada rehtay hai ya pher bahir.
prem noticed heer's body being stiffed due to tension.
prem: magar tum tension na loo, mai kal he sab say poochta hoo!!!
heer: okay.
and they both cuddled in each other n slept/

precap: truth out!!!!

do read n comments plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...
 im first...
lovely update...
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee part lovely waitinggg for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..nice part yaar.. Loved premeer scenes bt what happnd to kulraj? Is there any prob with kiran? Hope everything will be ok soon. Thnx for pm waiting for the next part..u told that today we will get 2 chaptrs na? So waitng...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The chapter was simply nice!!!


So finally prem and heer are back home... but what happened there when they were absent??? I think something has happened related to kulraaj..

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!

thanks for the pm!!

continue soon!!

tc..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
eagerly waiting 4 next chap
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
very cute update dear ...
really loved it ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for the comments and as promised here is the update but i guess a bit shorttt!!!!

chapter 18:

next morning prem woke up n saw heer was not on her side.
prem: heer kaha gaye?
he stood up n look here n there.
prem: heeerrr!!!
heer (Shouting from the bathroom): mai bathroom mai ho premm...atii hooo
prem: ohkkaayy n laid back on the bed!!

after few minutes heer came out drying her hair.
heer: kya howa? kyu chila rahay thay?
prem: woh mai nay tumko kamray mai nhi dekha na issi wajahhh
heer: prem tum bhi naaa...
prem came n hugged from back.
prem: heerrr...
heer: kiya howaaa
prem: mujhay aj office nahi janaaa
heer: nahi jana kiya matlab...chalay bathroom chayai aur fresh ho kar  ayeee.
heer pushess prem towards the washromm..
prem: heeerrr but it was too lateee.

after few minutes heer n prem both were ready n was standing infront of the mirror n hugging each other.
prem: meri heer aj bhat romantic hogaye hai..
heer: haa bas app par piyaar agayaa haiii
prem acha hai, yeh piyaar kabhi kabhi ata haiii
heer hit him on his chest n huggs him again.
while they were hugging each other they hear a loud sound of gayatrii: kulraaajjj!!!!!!
they both got shocked n looked at each other ran downstairs.
whn they were on the stairs they saw gayatri pushed kulraaj n she was abt to fall bt prem hurried downstairs n catched her before she fall.
prem: maaa...yeh kya kar rahi hai app.
gayatri: prem isko meri nazaro keh samnay say layjaaa.
kulraaj: ja rahi ho, mujhay bhi shok nahi hai aisa ghar mai rehna ka jaha sachaye ka sath na hoo.
gayatri: tum jhooth bool rahi hoo
kulraaj: mai jhooth nahi bool rahi, apki beti veera bool rahi hai.
they both were arguing wid each other n prem n heer were not understanding a word.
prem took kulraaj face n moved her infront of him.
prem: kuldi kiya howaa?
kuldi: prem...snobbing...wohhh...again cryingg!!!
prem: app yaha bethooo...
prem: heer pani lioyeee
heer hurried in the kitchen n got water.
prem: acha ab app chup hojioo aur pani pee loo.
kuldi: mujhay yaha ka pani pee loo.
heer knelt infront of her. n took the glass from prem 
heer: hamaray liyai pee loo di plzz!!
kulraaj looked at heer n then prem who shook his head to drink. then kulraaj took sume sips of water.
gayatri: kio zaroorat nhi hai iski dekh bhal karnay ki prem.
prem (stood up n went to gayatri): app aisay kyu keh rahi hai maaa...aisa kiya kar diya di nayy!!!
gayatri: aisa kiyaa tu pooch raha hai...yeh keh rahi hai keh veera ki dosti iss rishap ramphal keh sath sahi nahi. aray rishab ramphal mai kuch galat nhi hai, woh acha insaan hai, galat yeh hai aur kiran...dunno pata nhi kyu meeri bachi keh pechay paray huye haiii...
and their veera was having crocodile fake tears n crying on her mother's shoulder.
veera: ha bhaiyaaa, kuldi pata nhi kyu meray peechay pari huye haiii.
kulraaj came to prem.
kulraaj: prem, yeh sab galat hai, mai nay sirf maa say yeh bolaa tha keh rishap acha larka nahi aur yeh tu bhi janta hai. mai nay sirf maa ko bola tha keh veera ko mana karay magar maa meri baat nhi maani aur mujhay galat salat bool rahi hai.

preet n heer were standing there wid tears in their eyes, they knew kulraaj won't liee and there is suemthing else to the story.

gayatri: prem tu iss ki baat par mat aaa...mai janti hoo yeh sab kuch aisay kyu bool rahi hai,
prem (tears in his eyes also): kyu maa, kuldi kyu jhooth bolay gi.
gayatri: kyu keh yeh SAUTAYLI haina iss wajah, veera keh property aur paisoo par haq jamana chati haii.
everybody were shocked to hear that esp kulraaajjj n preemmm!!!
kulraaj: mai yeh ghar choor kar ja rahi ho abhi, kiran bacho ko bahir lay kar gaye thay, mai abhi unkeh pass ja rahi hooo.
gayatri: haa jio jio rukha kis nay.
prem was shattered hearing thiz, he didn't know when kulraaj went away from his arms. he was upset n crying after hearing from what his maa said. he didn't know what to do n how to do. he knew kuldi was right bt he cannot also go against her maa's wishes.
heer saw prem n knew what was goin through his mind. she knew he was shattered after hearing thiz n now she hav to do suemthing. she ran to gayatri maa.
heer: ma plz kuldi ko rukh lay, hum araam say bhi solja saktay hai plz maaa
bt gayatri wasn't listening.
heer ran to kuldi.
heer: kuldi, plz rukh jaiye, plzz prem keh liyai he rukh jaiyeee...plz dddiii.
kulraaj looked at prem who was upset n cryingg n then she looked at heer n caressed her cheek. but move forward towards the door.
heer: plz dee rukh jaiyeee plzzz

gayatri: (shouted) aur jo isko ruukhnay ki khooshish kar raha hai woh bhi yaha say ja saktaaa haiinnn.

prem n heer were hell shocked to hear thiz!!!!

precap: suspenseee!!!!!

itna tu haq banta hainaa to keep suspensee๐Ÿ˜†!!! actually haven't decided the further story as wht will happen so stay tuned to knowww๐Ÿ˜‰

plz leave ur comments n sorry for any silly mistakes which i know will be there...hehehheh

see yaaa
Edited by repunzell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update yaar...๐Ÿ‘
poor prem and kulraj ...๐Ÿ˜ญ
and this gaytri and veera...๐Ÿ˜ก
hope prem will do something soon...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
The cute little morning scene... it was so so cute!!!

OMG gayatri and kulraaj fighting... i didn't of something like that will happen!!!

Always this veera is the one who becomes the main cause of the problems and the fight... OMG this gay3 how could she say something like that...

Arggg.. i just hope that this veera only make that gay3 cry...

Thanks for the pm..

Continue soon!!

TC..