FF: Iss Desh Mai Hai Mera Dil Chapter 24 Pg 49 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy... we got an update...



Prem and heer together are
Aww...bed romance...

Without preet what can we do... he is the cupid in the story!!




Family time happy time!!
            


What did lalit gayatri gave to premeer???? might be honemoon ticket!!!


That was an


Part!!!!


Eagerly waiting for the next part'

 

Continue super duper soon!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..nice and cute update...
and the shock...honeymoon ticket tho nahi?
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it always feels pleasure to read this FF...

and most IMp is part  ur quick update...

thanks and keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
luv preet' teasing nd premeer scenes
cont soon
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago




it was an awesome update from start till end.. i loved it..
it was so beautiful...

like the morning started so pleasently...
i loved it...
the way premeer..
actually they are always romantic..

but nw they are married...
i cant still beleive it...

it was so cute...

premeer getting up...
also... their masti...
it was super cute..
prem dint want 2 leave heer...

that's so nice...
heer coming out in.. saree...
that was also.. nice..
prem must havee been busy staring at her...
also preet's masti...
that was nice...
preet is always naughty... loved his naughtiness...
he is always the best...


so every 1 liked heer's kheer that's awesome...
akhir kar biwi kiski hai??? the great prem juneje ki...

so it had 2 be perfect...

loved the update...


thank you fr the wonderful update and pm...




s soon as heer was about to go to the cupboard to take out prem's dress bt before that prem catches her.
prem: kya baat hai? aj kio buhat acha lag raha hai?
heer: aur kyu na laga!
prem: woh kyu?
heer: kyu keh aj mai hal poora maan, utma aur naam mai MRS.HEER PREM JUNEJA HOO...tu acha tu lagna hainaa...
prem: ohhh
heer: jee n punches him on his stomach.
prem: ahhh
heer: ab jio aur taiyaar hojiooo

loved it...







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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful part!!
cant wait for the next!!
plzz update soon yaaa...

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Posted: 12 years ago
ok baba karti ho update...sabar karoooπŸ˜†!!!!

thank u for the overwhelming response...it was amazing update , loved it tilll dept. okay so here is the update...!!e. (

chapter 10:

after breakfast, prem n heer was called by lalit n gayatri in the lounge. everybody floowed thm . lalit handed an envelope to prem.
prem: bauji, yeh kya hai?
lalit: khud dekh lo.
prem n heer together opened the envelope n was shocked to see that.
prem: bauji but...
gayatri: hamay kuch nhi suna, tum loogo ko karna hai yaha jo likha hai.
preet: magar iss mai kya likha hai, kio hamay bhi bataye.
kuldi: ha iss mai kya hai???
lalit: prem ar heer keh honey moon packag (so kudos to those who guessed it rightπŸ‘)
preet: wah bhai, PB keh tu mazay...
prem: chup kar preet, bt bauji mai nahi ja sakta, office mai itna kaam hai, shaddi ki wajah say bhat kaam pending hai.
keer: ha bauji prem sahi keh raha hai, hamay kaisay ja sakta hai app sab lo choor kar.
preet: tu pher hamay bhi lay jaiye.
everybody laughs.
lalit: chup kar nalayaak, mujhya kuch nahi pata tum logo ko jana hai.
gayatri: hamnay itni pyaar say tum dunno keh liyai yeh toofa taiyaar kya aur tum duunno issi accept nahi kar rahay ho ((she knows premeer can't see his mother sad)
prem n heer runs towards gayatri n kneels down.
heer: nahi maa aisay kio baat nahi, hum app say buhat piyaar kartay hai.
gayatri: tum pher tum dunno jio gayna ?
prem n heer look at each other.
prem: ha maaa
gayatri: yeh baat.
preet: kya baat hai apka emotional blackmail kaam aagaye.
prem n heer shyed n everybody laughs.
kiran cumes towards prem n heer n stands b/w thm.
kiran: chalay jio saale sahab, baad mai pata nhi mauka milay ya nhi...yeh biwiyan jo hoti haina unkeh mood swings buhat hotay hai.
kuldi: kya kaha tum nay?
kiran: kch nhi.
n they laughs.

lalit: aur ek baat suno, aj raat mai hum nay prem aur heer ka reception rakha hai so everybody gets ready. everybody starts talking abt stuff
prem: bauji jab tak mai office say hokar ajio, woh ek buhat important meeting hai.
lalit: ( abit angry) apni maa say pooch.
prem: maa
gayatri: mujh say kya pooch raha hai apni biwi say pooch, jab bhi dekho har waqt kaam kaam kaam.
everybody was smiling looking at prem"s face.
prem: kya mai ja sakta ho biwi saheba?
heer: smiles, app ja sakti hai
gayatri n lalit: heeerrr
heer: kio baat nahi ma n bauji, woh jaldi ajaiye gay, woh reception say pehlay aye gay. jaanay dijaiye unko zarror kaam hoga.
prem: ha promise jaldi aoe ga.
gayatri: okay.
everybody goes to their respective work.
prem heer zara upar anaaa
heer: ayeee
heer goes to her room n prem is no where to be seen. sudddenly prem hugs her from back.
pprem: ummm
heer: kya baat hai prem? office nahi jana 
prem: jana tu hai magar tumko dekh kar maan nahi kar raha hai n he puts his head on his neck.
heer: prem shoro aur jaldi taiyaar huye.
prem: acha yeh shoro, aur mujhay batio tumko honeymoon par kaha jana hai..
heer blushes.
prem: huye huuye meri heer sharma rahi hai.
heer turns infront of him n prem hold her through her waist.
prem: aj bolooo
heer starts playing wid his shirt button
heer: jaha app ki marzi.
prem: aray tum batio na, mai tu poori duniya ghoomi huye hai, tuum batio kaha jana hai.
heer: prem, mujh sach mai kahi specific nahi jana, bas app ka sath kafi hai meray liyai. app jaha bhi lay kar jaiye gay mai ankh baad kar keh chali jio gi.
prem: itna bharhosa hai mujh par.
heer: khud say bhi zada  app meray sab kuch hai, maa bauji aur meher keh baad app he tu ahi jis keh upar meri zindagi hai. yeh saasay ap keh he chaltay hai. agar app nahi huye tu yeh saasay...
before she continues prem put his fingers on his lips.
prem: nooo...aisa kabhi bhi mat kehnaaa
heer: magar mai tu sirf...
prem: nahi heer tum nahi janti tum meray liyai kya hoo...u're my life tooo...mujhay tumharay sath abhi buhat baari zindagi betani hai. abhi tu hamari shaddi huye hai pher bachay huye hogay aur pher ...
heer gets shyed n hit prem on his chest n thn huggs him
prem smiles n hugs heer back.


after a while prem gets ready for office n went to officen heer asked him to early, no excuses n prem was like yes madam. she smiles n kiss her on forehead n went to office. the whole day heer was mingling wid teh family. helped preet n meher in chossing the outfit for the night, helped lalit n gaytari in decoration n guuest list. played wid kuldi kids n talked wid kuldi also. then heer went to her room to decide her n prem dress. she opened the cupboard n saw a gift box wrapped on the shelve. she was confuused to see the gift. the gift was  wrapped very nicely she opened it n their was a letter attached to it. 

to my dearest n sweetest wife, one more present for you. i don't know why bt i feel like just showering things on you. i would be the most happinest n most privileged if u wear thiz gift tonyte on our reception.

love prem.

she smiles reading the letter. she kept it aside n open the gift, it was a beautifl while colour sari wid silver embroidery, it was very beautiful. she was very happy to see thiz n thanked prem in her heart.
she took a nap for few minutes.

it was evening n everybody was getting ready for the party. heer came out wearing that white sari n looking stunning. tht sari was giving her a prefect figure. she took infront n admired her husband selections, n today she decided to wear awl prem's gift which he gave her till date. so she first wore payals, thn the two bangles in each hand n thn the diamond earing. and the locket n mangulsutar. seh did a very light n decent make up, up to the mark. she just put up sindoor in her mang when sume body hgged her from back. she saw through the mirror that it was prem admiring her
heer: kta dekh rahay hoo? n put her hand on his cheek. 
prem: apni pari ko.
heer smiles.
prem: aj tum buhat khoobsurat lag rahi hoo heer, aur yeh sari tum par buhat saj rahi hai,
heer: aur kyu nahi sajaay kissi khas insaan di hai.
prem: achaaa hai, kaun hai woh khas insaan? humko bhi pata chalay
heer: bas hai woh itna khas jisko mai apni zindagi say bhi buhat pyaar karti hoo.
prem: ohhh
heer: jeee
prem: naam bhi tu hoga naaa
heer: hainaaa...MR.PEM JUNEJA.
prem: ohhh
and they both laughs. and they hugged
prem: heer, sach mai tum aj buhat achi lag rahi hoo aur tum yeh aj meray saaray gifts pehenay hai, mujhay buhat acha lagaaa.
heer: ha prem aj hamara din ahi aur mai sab ko batana chati hoo keh mai tumhari hoo aur kiss ko tum par haq nahi hai siwaiye merayy.
prem smiles n kiss her on her forehead.
prem: i love you
heer: love u tooo

heer: chalo ab tum jaldi taiyaar hojioo, mehmaan atay hogay.
prem : okayy!!!


precap: a new entry in the reception party which makes everybody dumbfounded!!!

hope u guys like it...

seee yaaa!!!!


and a *wave* to teh silent readers out there...comment a bit only plzzz!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...πŸ‘
and see my prediction comes true...πŸ˜‰
can't wait for premeer honeymoon...😍☺️
and the guests at party??πŸ˜•
pls update next part soon...πŸ˜ƒ
thnx for pm😊
Edited by priyahmt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome..πŸ‘...enjoyed reading...πŸ˜ƒ

continue...plzz try updating soon...😍
Edited by premiti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago





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hi di... i just wanna say it was a fabulous!!!!!!! update...
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it was so very cute...

it brings smile on my face when ever i get a pm from u...
because the updates are fab...


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i loved the update... actually every thng... of the update,...
and wow.. premeer on a honey moon...

prem????
complaing he has work????
that too in his office...
that to refusing for honeymoon????
dont tell me?????
i m still shocked...

are baba go and enjoy vth ur wife na...

i  m super excited here... and heer???? what do u mean by aap sab ko chodkar.. aap sab ke sath jana chahate ho apne honey moon par????
sriously????
go and enjoy na...

and preet i just love you...

lolz preet...
thank god finally these people agreed...
i m restless and super dooper excited fr their honey moon


next reception... prem went for work... and heer being a good wife agreed also.. and prem is so...

and i could imagine heer looking great for the party...
that y prem was staring at her...

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so in short that was a ...





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prem: aj tum buhat khoobsurat lag rahi hoo heer, aur yeh sari tum par buhat saj rahi hai,
heer: aur kyu nahi sajaay kissi khas insaan di hai.
prem: achaaa hai, kaun hai woh khas insaan? humko bhi pata chalay
heer: bas hai woh itna khas jisko mai apni zindagi say bhi buhat pyaar karti hoo.
prem: ohhh
heer: jeee
prem: naam bhi tu hoga naaa
heer: hainaaa...MR.PEM JUNEJA.
prem: ohhh
and they both laughs. and they hugged
prem: heer, sach mai tum aj buhat achi lag rahi hoo aur tum yeh aj meray saaray gifts pehenay hai, mujhay buhat acha lagaaa.
heer: ha prem aj hamara din ahi aur mai sab ko batana chati hoo keh mai tumhari hoo aur kiss ko tum par haq nahi hai siwaiye merayy.
prem smiles n kiss her on her forehead.
prem: i love you
heer: love u tooo


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thank you fr  wonderful update and pm...

precap: a new entry in the reception party which makes everybody dumbfounded!!!


di every time u do cheating and leave at a wrong time...

so plz 









Edited by vrushika - 12 years ago