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chapter 10:
after breakfast, prem n heer was called by lalit n gayatri in the lounge. everybody floowed thm . lalit handed an envelope to prem.
prem: bauji, yeh kya hai?
lalit: khud dekh lo.
prem n heer together opened the envelope n was shocked to see that.
prem: bauji but...
gayatri: hamay kuch nhi suna, tum loogo ko karna hai yaha jo likha hai.
preet: magar iss mai kya likha hai, kio hamay bhi bataye.
kuldi: ha iss mai kya hai???
lalit: prem ar heer keh honey moon packag (so kudos to those who guessed it rightπ)
preet: wah bhai, PB keh tu mazay...
prem: chup kar preet, bt bauji mai nahi ja sakta, office mai itna kaam hai, shaddi ki wajah say bhat kaam pending hai.
keer: ha bauji prem sahi keh raha hai, hamay kaisay ja sakta hai app sab lo choor kar.
preet: tu pher hamay bhi lay jaiye.
everybody laughs.
lalit: chup kar nalayaak, mujhya kuch nahi pata tum logo ko jana hai.
gayatri: hamnay itni pyaar say tum dunno keh liyai yeh toofa taiyaar kya aur tum duunno issi accept nahi kar rahay ho ((she knows premeer can't see his mother sad)
prem n heer runs towards gayatri n kneels down.
heer: nahi maa aisay kio baat nahi, hum app say buhat piyaar kartay hai.
gayatri: tum pher tum dunno jio gayna ?
prem n heer look at each other.
prem: ha maaa
gayatri: yeh baat.
preet: kya baat hai apka emotional blackmail kaam aagaye.
prem n heer shyed n everybody laughs.
kiran cumes towards prem n heer n stands b/w thm.
kiran: chalay jio saale sahab, baad mai pata nhi mauka milay ya nhi...yeh biwiyan jo hoti haina unkeh mood swings buhat hotay hai.
kuldi: kya kaha tum nay?
kiran: kch nhi.
n they laughs.
lalit: aur ek baat suno, aj raat mai hum nay prem aur heer ka reception rakha hai so everybody gets ready. everybody starts talking abt stuff
prem: bauji jab tak mai office say hokar ajio, woh ek buhat important meeting hai.
lalit: ( abit angry) apni maa say pooch.
prem: maa
gayatri: mujh say kya pooch raha hai apni biwi say pooch, jab bhi dekho har waqt kaam kaam kaam.
everybody was smiling looking at prem"s face.
prem: kya mai ja sakta ho biwi saheba?
heer: smiles, app ja sakti hai
gayatri n lalit: heeerrr
heer: kio baat nahi ma n bauji, woh jaldi ajaiye gay, woh reception say pehlay aye gay. jaanay dijaiye unko zarror kaam hoga.
prem: ha promise jaldi aoe ga.
gayatri: okay.
everybody goes to their respective work.
prem heer zara upar anaaa
heer: ayeee
heer goes to her room n prem is no where to be seen. sudddenly prem hugs her from back.
pprem: ummm
heer: kya baat hai prem? office nahi jana
prem: jana tu hai magar tumko dekh kar maan nahi kar raha hai n he puts his head on his neck.
heer: prem shoro aur jaldi taiyaar huye.
prem: acha yeh shoro, aur mujhay batio tumko honeymoon par kaha jana hai..
heer blushes.
prem: huye huuye meri heer sharma rahi hai.
heer turns infront of him n prem hold her through her waist.
prem: aj bolooo
heer starts playing wid his shirt button
heer: jaha app ki marzi.
prem: aray tum batio na, mai tu poori duniya ghoomi huye hai, tuum batio kaha jana hai.
heer: prem, mujh sach mai kahi specific nahi jana, bas app ka sath kafi hai meray liyai. app jaha bhi lay kar jaiye gay mai ankh baad kar keh chali jio gi.
prem: itna bharhosa hai mujh par.
heer: khud say bhi zada app meray sab kuch hai, maa bauji aur meher keh baad app he tu ahi jis keh upar meri zindagi hai. yeh saasay ap keh he chaltay hai. agar app nahi huye tu yeh saasay...
before she continues prem put his fingers on his lips.
prem: nooo...aisa kabhi bhi mat kehnaaa
heer: magar mai tu sirf...
prem: nahi heer tum nahi janti tum meray liyai kya hoo...u're my life tooo...mujhay tumharay sath abhi buhat baari zindagi betani hai. abhi tu hamari shaddi huye hai pher bachay huye hogay aur pher ...
heer gets shyed n hit prem on his chest n thn huggs him
prem smiles n hugs heer back.
after a while prem gets ready for office n went to officen heer asked him to early, no excuses n prem was like yes madam. she smiles n kiss her on forehead n went to office. the whole day heer was mingling wid teh family. helped preet n meher in chossing the outfit for the night, helped lalit n gaytari in decoration n guuest list. played wid kuldi kids n talked wid kuldi also. then heer went to her room to decide her n prem dress. she opened the cupboard n saw a gift box wrapped on the shelve. she was confuused to see the gift. the gift was wrapped very nicely she opened it n their was a letter attached to it.
to my dearest n sweetest wife, one more present for you. i don't know why bt i feel like just showering things on you. i would be the most happinest n most privileged if u wear thiz gift tonyte on our reception.
love prem.
she smiles reading the letter. she kept it aside n open the gift, it was a beautifl while colour sari wid silver embroidery, it was very beautiful. she was very happy to see thiz n thanked prem in her heart.
she took a nap for few minutes.
it was evening n everybody was getting ready for the party. heer came out wearing that white sari n looking stunning. tht sari was giving her a prefect figure. she took infront n admired her husband selections, n today she decided to wear awl prem's gift which he gave her till date. so she first wore payals, thn the two bangles in each hand n thn the diamond earing. and the locket n mangulsutar. seh did a very light n decent make up, up to the mark. she just put up sindoor in her mang when sume body hgged her from back. she saw through the mirror that it was prem admiring her
heer: kta dekh rahay hoo? n put her hand on his cheek.
prem: apni pari ko.
heer smiles.
prem: aj tum buhat khoobsurat lag rahi hoo heer, aur yeh sari tum par buhat saj rahi hai,
heer: aur kyu nahi sajaay kissi khas insaan di hai.
prem: achaaa hai, kaun hai woh khas insaan? humko bhi pata chalay
heer: bas hai woh itna khas jisko mai apni zindagi say bhi buhat pyaar karti hoo.
prem: ohhh
heer: jeee
prem: naam bhi tu hoga naaa
heer: hainaaa...MR.PEM JUNEJA.
prem: ohhh
and they both laughs. and they hugged
prem: heer, sach mai tum aj buhat achi lag rahi hoo aur tum yeh aj meray saaray gifts pehenay hai, mujhay buhat acha lagaaa.
heer: ha prem aj hamara din ahi aur mai sab ko batana chati hoo keh mai tumhari hoo aur kiss ko tum par haq nahi hai siwaiye merayy.
prem smiles n kiss her on her forehead.
prem: i love you
heer: love u tooo
heer: chalo ab tum jaldi taiyaar hojioo, mehmaan atay hogay.
prem : okayy!!!
precap: a new entry in the reception party which makes everybody dumbfounded!!!
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