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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for the comments folks...bt i'm soo sorry for being late. just got tyme so decided to update. to day was literallly a hectic day, chalo no chup shup cumin back to the update:


chapter 21:

prem n heer woke up the next morning a bit fresh n fine. heer was preparing prem's favourite breakfast whn suddenly prem came from back n hugged her n heer got a bit sacred.
heer: prem!
prem: kya?
heer: tum nay mujhay dara diya...kio aisay galay lagata hai kya?
prem: kya kar rahi ho in a very sleepy mood.
heer(smiles) : tumharay liyai nashta bana rahi hoo
prem: mujhay nhi karna n makes a pout n goes n sit on the table.
heer got confused, "issi kya howa". she quickly makes their breakfastn quickly takes on the table.
heer: yeh loo, nashta taiyaar.
prem: mujhay nhi karna n moves his head away.
heer sits on the chair, "but kyu?
prem: but aisay he.
heer (a bit sad) : but mainay itnay pyaar say banaya.
prem ignored it n then heer saw prem n thn decided to feed him.
heer takes the paratha mixes it wih dahi n thn puts infront of prem's mouth.
heer: plz...ek baat
prem (winks at her) n takes the bite n smiles.
heer: yeh kya tha?
prem: woh mai tumharay hath say khana chata tha aur tum waisay mana kar dayti tu mai nay socha aisay sahi.
heer hits him on his hands n prem laughs out.
prem: waisay paratha buhat tasti bana hai, aur nhi khelio gi.
heer blushes n thm makes him eat the breakfast. later on prem also feed her.

after breakfast, prem was sitting on the carpet n heer was oiling his hair. prem was enjoying the way heer's hand was playing in his dense hair n was also enjoying the massage so he just keep quiet n closed his eye. heer was enjoying doin prem masaaging bt after a long silence.
heer: itnay kyu chup ho?
prem: disturb mat karo
heer: tum aisay kar bhi kya raho jo disturb na karo mai apko
prem: maza lay raho ho.
heer: kiska hai?
prem: apni girlfriend keh hatho ka jo itnay mazay say mujhay masaage kar rahi hai
heer (hits him on her shoulder) : mai tumhari gf nahi, fiance ho.
prem: meri fiance marti buhat hai
heer: achaaa...jio kissi aur ko lay lo.
prem: okayyy
heer (anger) : kyaaa!!!!
prem: tum nay tu kaha!!!
heer: mai nay kaha aur tum nay maan liyai.
prem: ummm...yesh!!!
heer got hurt listening to thiz n prem was enjoying thiz. he was having fun teasing her bt whn he didn't hear any respond so he looked back n he was shocked to see tht heer was crying bt was trying not to show him.
prem suddenly stood up n sat near her on the sofa.
prem: heer kya howa? tum roo kyu rahi ho?
heer (trying to remove her tears) : bas kuch nahi...aisay he, i'm alrite.
prem (put his hand around her shoulder) : heer plz mat roo kya howa?
heer: woh tum nay bola na keh tum kissi aur keh pass chalay jio gay. 
prem smiles n makes heer put her head on his chest.
prem: bas itni si baat
heer: yeh tumko itni si baat lagti hai
prem: mai mazak kar raha tha, mai sirf tumko tease kar raha tha.
heer looks up from his chest : promise
prem kisses on her cheek : promise.
heer blushes n put back her head on his chest.
prem: tum meri zindagi ho, mai tumko choor kar kaha jio gaa!!! iss janam kya, mai tumko anay walay hazaaro janam mai kahi nahi jio ga. i love u babyyy!!!
heer (smiles) : love u tooo!!!

after they came out of their hug, they were lying on the sofa and prem was playing wid heer's hand n her ring finger.
prem: acha batio kya karna hai in chuttiyon mai, v hav 4 to 5 days holidays.
heer: how abt shopping, outing n mastii.
prem: ur most favourite work.
heer: but not withouut you.
prem smiles hearing her words.
prem: chalo okay hum shaam mai shopping par chaltay hai.

so then the rest two days past by prem n heer enjoying loads. they went for shopping getting stuff for each other, fighting on little bits things n later on laugh on each other n hug each other. they also went to amusement park n hav fun taking each other to the ride they were afraid off, it was a pay back for each other.. they went to favourite restaurants n hav fun eating n talking n gossiping. around them people used to love thm they mingle wid each other. n wid their little fights they used to say them "cute couuple n made fo each other ". heer n prem used to smile looking at each other n hug thn. 

the night of second day whn they came back home, they were hell tired , just kept their stuff in the loungen kissed each other n went wid a big smiles to sleep. prem was way happy that heer was back to herself. his main motive was to bring back her smile n laugh after that forest incident n was happy to see that. heer was happy that she n prem was enjoying like hell n she got to spend sume tyme alone wid prem.

precap: the next morning sumebody knocked at the door n heer was shocked to see and culdn't believe it!!!

okay guys, here is the update, hopefully u will enjoy it!!! full of premeer 

see yaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago
yey...i'm first...dinka chika dinka chika...
nice part yaar...👏
heer is soo sensitive...❤️
and prem...😍god...he is becoming more and more naughy...😍
loved their scences...❤️
and the guests????😲let me guess...kahi juneja's and maan's to nahi?????😉
Edited by priyahmt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

That was an really awesome, fantastic part!!!


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Just read the part!!! Loved it!!


Awww… prem and heer are
Loved prem and heer parts…. How he made heer to make him eat..
Their outing at home and all the thing they did was more enjoyable and awesome that the camping… loved it so much…
The precap is interesting!! I think raj might be at the door??? Now what is he gonna do???

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Thanks for the pm…

Eagerly waiting for the next part…

Continue super duper soon!!!


Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that person must be raj!😡
oops! sry i just got carried away,😳
nywz nice update
pls cont soon
Thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome apdate ...loved it ...👏
thanks for the pm ...
wating for the next part ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab! luved it...!!!
premeer scenes wer damn cute luved it..!!
whose on d door? wa8in 2 c...!
thnx for d pm! =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i have edited my comment on previous page as well for earlier chapter!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
so sorry as i thnk last one to comment... loved the update.. it was so cute... so very cute... i to loved it... it was awesome... mindblowing.. love d it di.. i loved everythng,,
aur ap itna suspense kyun rakhate hon????? abhi bhi suspense.. a kya hoga who is this who is come????
he bhagwan!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
update pls
eagerly waiting 4 next chap
pls update asap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww...amazing...
waiting to see who that person could be...
continuee...try updating soon...