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FF :kabhi alvida na kehnaa chapter 31, page 33 (Page 8)

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thank u guys for commenting...truely loved it

and heres the next chapter...hope u like it


chapter 19:

while everybody was tensed n waiting for premeer n the gang, they saw raj cumin from the other direction full sweating.

rohan: guys, see raj is back
everybody looked at that direction,
priya: raj tum kaha gaye thay? sab daaray huye thay
raj: woh mai...
saniya: woh kya?
raj: woh mai jogging karnay gaya tha...ha jogging
priya: tum pagal tu nhi thay...
before she continues they see premeer n others cumin from the forest. everybody rushed over there. raj smirked n went to freshen up.

prem put heer down,
priya: tum kaisi ho heer?
heer: sahi hoo
rahul: achi kaisi nahi hogi jab prem nay isko godh mai uthaya 
heer bushes n prem happily punches rahul in stomach.

priya takes heer to tent so that she freshen up n wash her foot coz of walking. when heer away prem thought, "agar heer ko nahi pata woh forest kaisay gaye tu pher iss ko kaun lay kar gaya". suddenly rahul shouts, prem idhar aaa...prem stop thinking n cume here.

after a while v see that everybody is sitting around teh bomb fire chatting n eating. heer n prem are cuddled together n eating.
prem: heer, yeh loo aur khao.
heer: prem tum bhi khao
prem: heer, tumhara khaan zarori hai, tum nay subah say kuch nhi khaya.
heer: aur mujhay bhi pata hai keh tum nay bhi kuch nhi khaya hoga, jab subah mujhay nhi dekha hoga tu tumhari jaan nikal gaye hogi.
prem smiles n kiss heer on her forehead.
heer gives him a bite n so did prem gave heer a bite. n they were happily eating.
when raj came n greeted everybody, heer moved closer to prem n prem noticed thiz bt didn't notice that muhc. raj cumes to thm
raj: heer mujhay pata chala tum subah nahi mil rahi thi...kaha thi?
heer: woh maii...
prem: mister app kaha tahy subah ?
raj: woh mai jogging par gaya tah
prem: tu boss bata kar jatay haina.
raj: magar heer kaah thi?
prem: woh galti say forest mai chali agye thi
raj: whaattt
heer: gabroo mat raj.prrem nay mujhay sahi waqt par dhoodh liya than stares at him angrily.
raj: feelin a bit weird "ok" n goes from there.

prem n heer was sitting qeitly n enjoying the eacefulnes of atmosphere wwhile everybody was chatting n sume were singing also.
heer: prem, mujhay kuch kehna hai tum say?
prem: ha heer boloo
heer: wohhh
prem: bolooo
heer: pehlay bolo, tum naraz nhi hogay
prem: mai tumhari kissi baat say naraz howa ho aj tak
heer: nahi...
prem: pher boloo
heer puts her head on prem shulder n prem caress his cheek.
heer: woh mujhay wapis apnay ghar jana hai.
prem: kyu...mom dad keh pass kyu jana hai mujh say kio galti huye.
heer: prem meri baat suno
prem: i'm sorry heer bt plz mujhay choor kar mat jio otherwise i will di...
heer moves back n keeps her finger on his lips.
heer: yeh kabhi mat kehna agar tum ho tu tumhari heer hai.
prem: pher tum janay ko kyu keh rahi hooo
heeer: woh mai yeh keh rahi hoo...keh mujhay hamaray ghar wapis jana hai. mujhay yaha par nahi rehnaa
prem: kyu heer?
heer: paat nahi prem bt mujhay nhi rehna, mujhay wapis ghar jana hai aur tumharay sath tyme spent karna hai akelay.
she had tears in her eyes n hugs prem tightly.
prem: acha heer, tum jo kaho gi...wohi hoga, hum kal subah hotay he ghar wapis jaiye gay aur yeh sab yaha par rehay gay aur one week baaad yeh sab ajiaye gay...okay?
heer: okay n shokes her head on his shoulder.

after a while prem said to heer: 
prem: ek baat bolo
heer: ha
prem: jab yeh plan bana tha na trip ka tu jab mera dil he nhi cha raha tha anay kaa
heer (shocked): tu bola kyu nahii
prem: woh tum itni khush thi na tu mujh say raha nahi gaya aur tumhari khushi mai meri khushi hai.
heer(whisper): kash tum bool daytay
prem: kuch bola
heer: nahi...but agay say jo bhi tumharay dimagh aur dil mai hoga tum share karo gay.
prem (smiles): dinagh ka tu zaroor share karo ga magar dil ka tu tumhay pata hai woh tu tumharay pass hai.
heer hits him on his chest n hugs him: love you
prem hugs her back n smiles: love you tooo

precap remains the same.

i'm sorry culdn't update fully, sorry for any kistakes. there is a bit renovation goin on in my place so a bit busy...
but next tyme paka long updateee
do comments n hit the like button
seee yaaa

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nice update yaar!
i think heer ko raj pe shak hogaya hai!Ermm
nywz luv premeer scenes
 cont soon
thanx 4 PM

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okay di so u have decided to keep the suspense... fine...
talking about the update...
i loved it...
from start till the end ... it was superb...
as i have alreday told u u'll find ur sis... i mean me in jail...
because of that stupid raj... is he gone mad????

he is seriously dying from ma hands ...
otherwise also navratri is gng on... i'll become durga and kill him...

premeer part was superb... all that prem posssiveness.. towards heer...
it was far greater...
and what main jogging karne gaya tha raj?????
u do smthng have the courage to say it...

heer moved towards prem... that means does she knows that
raj has done it?????
i mean i thnk so by her reaction!!!!!
and she wants to go home also?????
this implies she has cm to knw every thng...
i m guessing so...
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after a while v see that everybody is sitting around teh bomb fire chatting n eating. heer n prem are cuddled together n eating.
prem: heer, yeh loo aur khao.
heer: prem tum bhi khao
prem: heer, tumhara khaan zarori hai, tum nay subah say kuch nhi khaya.
heer: aur mujhay bhi pata hai keh tum nay bhi kuch nhi khaya hoga, jab subah mujhay nhi dekha hoga tu tumhari jaan nikal gaye hogi.
prem smiles n kiss heer on her forehead.
heer gives him a bite n so did prem gave heer a bite. n they were happily eating..
i loved this...
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the update... i was super duper excited... especially.. the precap...
but since my sweet sis has decided to keep
it a suspense we can wait...
the updtae... was...too good..
with all kind of diff emotions...
it was...
awesome-graphic/">
love u di...

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today also.. like always...
suspense abhi baki hai mere dost!!!!
this is wht u have to say na???
di we shld share the secret especially this one...
so jaldi jaldi suspense kholna..
kay????
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thank you di fr the pm... and also a beautiful update...
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Edited by vrushika - 04 October 2011 at 8:43pm

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nice update...
so heer is aware of raj's true colour...
i think heer heard everything...
waiting for the next part...
thnx for the pm...

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wow absolutley awesome loved prem carrying her and now heer wants to go home which i think is right love prem and heer so cute!!!! 


your doing awesom!!!!

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Originally posted by sreyap92

wow absolutley awesome loved prem carrying her and now heer wants to go home which i think is right love prem and heer so cute!!!! 


your doing awesom!!!!

thankooo...i really appreciated tht u liking my workBig smile!!!

i won't disappoint u guys in near future alsoSmile!

thank u for taking out time n commenting!
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Originally posted by priyahmt

nice update...
so heer is aware of raj's true colour...
i think heer heard everything...
waiting for the next part...
thnx for the pm...
ummm...lets see if heer knows or there is sumething elseErmm!!!

thank u for commenting!

will try to update soonSmile
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awesome update...

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