thank u for the valuable comments n yesshhh "priyahmt" u were right !!!
and i'm soo soorryyy i can't thank individually coz nowadays i'm bit busy at home...so will comment later on that...!!!
but i read awl the comments n loved them...its encourages me lot n give me lots of thoughts...thankooo!!!!
so here is the next chapter:
the next morning heer woke up n saw the tyme it was 12am. heer, "shittt...late hogaye...sab kiya sochay gay"!!! she quickly got ready wearing a simple shalwar kameez n went to the kitchen knocking prem on the way bt didn't care.
prem: oyee...dekh kar chalo naaa.
heer: baad mai dekho gi n rannn
prem made a confused face n went to lalit n balraj who were watching tv.
heer entered in the kitchen n saw her mother n mother-inlaw making lunch as it was late for breakfast.
heer: sorry n looks down.
gayatri: kyu betaa?
heer: woh mai aj late uthi na pata nahi alarm kab bajaa thaa.
veera: sorry nai good morning kehtay hai n its okay. n give a kiss on her forehead.
gayatri (brings a plate) : haa auur dekho mai nay prem say bajaa kat tumharay liyai aloo ka paratha aur kheer rakhi haii.
heer: thanko mammmaaa n hugs herrr!!!1
gayatri: acha bas bas tum jio aur sab keh sath match dekho...
veera: aj tumhari kitchen say chuttiii
heer laughs n goes out in the lounge.
heer: good morninggg!!!!
lalit n balraj: good morning betaaa
prem: good morning nahi, good afternoon ho rahi hai.
heer: jo bhiii
heer sits on the opposite sofa of prem n starts eating her breakfast.
prem: tum paratha kha rahi hoo
heer: haa tuuu
prem: magar mama nay kaha tha paratha khatam hogaye whn i asked for more.
heer: woh unho nay meray liyai safe kiya tha.
prem yeh cheating hai.
prem: u're soo meannn
heer: and wht abt youuu
lalit: tum dunno tu aisay lar rahay ho tu shaddi keh baad tu ek doosro keh kaat dogay.
balraj n lalit laugheddd
prem n heer blushed n smiled.
after a while heer recieved a message on her cell from priya.
priya: hey, v;re back!! how are you?
heer: hey, i'm good n how was it?
priya: it was so much fun bt v missed u n prem.
heer: awww :)! chalo next tyme
priya: yeah, btw wht are u doin?
heer: nuthing as such, our family is here for two days so enjoying wid them.
priya: thats good.!! how abt v cume in evening to meet them.
heer didn't want them to cume coz she knew then raj will also cume n she didn't want that. but thn she replied.
heer: yah sure.
priya: okay then me, raj, rahul n saniya will be there by 6pm. see yaa
heer: yaaa n was a bit sad.
prem saw heer's expression throughout she was messaging. he was confused to whom she was. coz first she was smiling, then a bit sacred n now sad after messaging. he wanted to know wht happened.
prem asked through his eyes n facial expression bt thn she shake her head as in nothing.
heer excused her self n went to her room leaving her mobile behind unfortunately bt then fortunate for prem coz he read awl her messages wid prem. he was angry that raj will be here bt he need to control infront of the family. he also excused himself n rushed to heer's room.
balraj n lalit smiled at each other
prem knocked at heer's room n went inside n saw her standing near the window. he went n hugged her from behind keeping his hands around her waist n kissed on her cheek.
prem: kya howa?
heer: woh priya ka msg aya tha...
prem: keh woh loog aj shaam mai arahay hai.
heer looked at prem.
prem: mai nay tumharay msgs par liyai thay.
heer: prem magar raj
prem: tum kyu fikar karti hoo woh kuch nahi karay gaa
heer: agar iss nay wapis wohi ( a bit sacred).
prem: mai sab kuch sambhal loga n iss raj ko iski aukaat bhi yaad dila dogaaa. tum pareshaan mat ho. tumko kuch nhi hogaa
heer: aur mai yeh bhi nhi chati keh tumko kuch bhi hoo. mai tumharay begair kuch bhi nahi. she moves infront n looks in his eyes wid tears.
prem removed his tears by his thumbs.
prem: mujhay kuch nhi hogaa pakaaa
heer then hugs prem n keeps her head n his chest n prem also hugs him.
prem: and i'm sorry woh mai nay tumharay msgs parhay.
heer: tumhay poora haq hai mujh par aur meri cheezoo so no soorryy n thank u.
prem smiles n kiss on her forehead . n then back to their hug.
in the evening, the family was having a gala tyme whn everybody wa stalking n laughing, revilishing old memories..
whn suddenly the door bell rang. heer looked at prem as she knew who it would be. prem assured her through his eyes tht relax, everything will be fine. heer smiled.
prem: mai dekhta hoo!
prem went n opened the door. and saw priya, soniya, rahul n raj!!
prem: hey n hugged everybody. whn it was raj's turn he tried to act normal bt in his heart he was boiling.
raj: hey buddy
prem hey (in a calm way)
raj was confused.
they awl entered inside n prem introduced them to their parents. heer greeted everybody n had a smile on her way now coz she knew that prem is with her. raj decided to be chilled n relax so that nobody notices his intentions.
raj: hey heer, wassup?
heer (in a sly tone): i'm good n nothing much n enjoying with my familyyy (in a excited and happy tone she said my family)
raj: thts nyce.
gayatri n veera went to arrange for their refeshments. others sat in the lounge n started talking randomnly. raj tried his best to be close to heer n gain her attention bt he was unsuccessful coz heer was sitting beside prem closely n was talking to others.
lalit: so how the trip ?
priya: buhat maza aya uncle...
raj: bt v missed heer n prem.
heer (wispered) : as if i care. prem heard it n laughed hearing thiz.
balraj: kya howa prem issi mai hassnay ki kya baat hai?
prem: nahi papa woh kuch nhi. kio aur baat hai. heer looked at prem n pushes slightly on his chest slightly so tht nobody notices bt raj did n he got angry.
balraj: aur beta raj tumhara un sab mai kaun best frnd hai? chalo shoro tum sab batiooo. heer say start kartay haii
balraj: heer batioo
heer: meraaa...ummm (looked at raj).
raj was sure that heer will take her name n thn the family wil get suspicious abt it n then they will hav a fightt. he was smiling wickedly.
heer: aur kaun hoga prem ofcourse daddd!!!!!
raj was shocked n fuming wid hatred looking at prem.
prem smiled his million dollar smile n put his hands around heer.
soniya: bt tum nay tu iss din kaha tha keh raj is ur best frnd!!!
heer: ha kaha tha bt mai bhool gaye thi keh u can't judge a friend by its look n his sweet nature bt can judge by its intentions!!
it was silent in the room for a while.
heer continued: and i m very well aware abt PREM's intentions n nature.
everybody smiled hearing thiz. balraj n lalit was on top of the world hearing thiz. they were proud of their children.
prem without caring abt their fathers sitting their, he kissed heer on her cheeks n wispered 'love you' which only she heard n she blushed. he knew heer said thiz coz of raj bt then he also knew that whtever she said was true coz she lies abt him.
evrybody: ooo!!! they both got shyed.
raj was confused abt heer's answer if she got to know anythin wht happen in the forest. and was fumin in anger that awl the attention was getting to prem.
precap: prem: ur wish is my order ma'am
heer hit him on his stomach n hugged him : love u much
prem: love u sooo muchhh
in other house:
raj: i will kill u mr.prem junejaaa
so here it is...hope u will like it. do leave ur comments \
Edited by repunzell - 15 October 2011 at 6:04am