sorry for late update, was caught up in some things
so here is the update!!!
heer woke up n was sitting in the lounge reading newspaper n wid a mug of coffee. she was so busy in reading that she didn't noticed that prem came n kept his head on heer's lap n lied on the sofa. heer, "good morning". prem, " good morning". and he start reading newspaper too. heer, "prem first let me read then u can read". prem: "no v can read together". and so they started reading together.
after a while the bell rang
heer: prem go n open the door.
prem: no u goo.
heer: prem u goo
heer: but how can stand up whn u are keeping ur head on my lap. and she make a pout.
heer smiles thinking that he will go n open the door. but then prem sit on the sofa straight and start reading.
prem: now u can goo
heer hits him on his shoulder n went to open the door. prem: ouch!!! n he smiles n start reading.
heer opens the door n get shocked to see them
they said: surprise!!!
heer (loudly) : app looggg
they said: jeee
prem gets curious to hear heer's voice n rushes to the door n was surprised to see them.
prem: daddd mommm!!!!
lalit, balraj, gayatri n veera were on the door wid smiling faces to see their children.
prem n heer bends down to take their ashirwaad.
gayatri hugs heer, :meri betiii"
prem: aur maiii
veera: tu meera beta hai n hugs him. prem shows his tongue to heer.
heer: dad, dekhay na yeh hamesha mujhay taag karta hai.
lalit: kyu re kyu heer ko taag karta hai.
prem: yeh hamesha mujhay maarti hai.
balraj: heer tumharay maarnay ki adad gaye nahi
heer: papa yeh mujhay pareeshan karta hai.
prem: mai karta hoo
heer: haa tum
gayatri: acha bas bas baad mai larnaaa!!! hum abhi aye hai aur tum dunno nay shoro kardiya, hamary peechay kiya kartay hoo gay. prem n heer blushes n looks down.
heer: app loog fresh ho jaiye, mai nashta lagati hoo.
prem also follow heer, " mai iski madad karta ho n rushes to the kitchen.
both the couples laughs seeing their children n goes to their rooms to freshen up.
heer start making eggs n paratha whn prem hugs her from back.
heer: hatto mai tum say baat nhi kar rahi. n pushes him.
prem (without leaving her) : kyuu!!!
heer: tum nay sab keh samnay bola keh mai tum ko marti ho aur papa say dant bhi khelaiyee
prem: tum nay bhi tu dad say dant khelaiye hai mujhay!!!
heer keeps quiet
prem: acha baba, sorry mai mazak kar raha tha...ainda sirf tareef karo gaa n he laughs.
heer hits lightly on his shouulder bt prem kisses her on her cheek.
heer was surprised to see thiz n looks at prem n he winks. prem, " my morning kiss" mai nay nahi diya tha na. and heer blushes!!
heer: acha shoro mujhay nashta bananay doo. and then prem helps her in making the breakfast n setting the table.
after a while their parents came n started to hav their breakfast. heer was a bit nervous coz she had made breakfast for her in-laws for the first tyme bt prem assured her tht they will love it n they did.
lalit: wah bhai, nashta kha kar maza agayaaa!!!
gayatri: ha bhai, buhat acha haii!!!
balraj n veera also praises the food.
gayatri: waisay itna acha nashta banaya kis nay?
heer: hum dunoo...mera matlab hai, mai nay aur prem nay dunno mil kar banaya hai n looks down coz she knew her cheeks will be red in am n don't need to min.
lait n balraj: ohhh while gayatri n veera smiles looking at their children. they way they are contributing in each other life.
balraj: waisay tum loog aj college kyu nhi gaye?
prem: woh hamara college trip par gaya howa hai. they will cume day after tomorw.
lalit: tu tum loog kyu nhi gaye?
heer (a bit sacred to tell them) : wohhh
veera (notices it) : kya howa beta.
prem: aisay kio baat nahi mama woh hamay ek doosray keh sath tyme spend karna tha tuu dil nhi chaha janay ka.
both parents: ohhooo
prem n heer look at each other n prem smiles lookin at heer that he will handle it n don't need to make them tense. heer also smiles back looking at them.
the rest of day passed by enjoying wid the family. prem n heer both were happyto see their parents coz they were missing them bt didn't showed to each other bt today their surprised visit made them happy n thanked the God above!
precap: more family moments n re-entry of sumeone whom do u hate!!!
i hope u guys like it n please do leave ur comments plzzz!!!! n now rushing to update IDMHMD...give me few more mons!!!
but plz do comment here also!!!!
Edited by repunzell - 13 October 2011 at 7:18am