FF :kabhi alvida na kehnaa chapter 31, page 33 - Page 19

Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
luv premeer scenes
thank god dat heer nd prem passed their exams wid gud marks
eagerly waiting 4 next chapter
thanx 4 PM
Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late comment *catching ear*..

They passed with such good percentage.. awesome..

the part was so superb..

continue soon!!!

take care
Posted: 12 years ago
u knw..i m waiting for somethng di..
Posted: 12 years ago
thank u awl for the lovely comments...love u awlllπŸ€—!!!

thiz update for u awl bt esp for vrushu for bagging me for the last one weekπŸ˜†!!!

here u gooo!!!


CHAPTER 30:

prem n heer told the news to their family, who were very happy to hear the result n insisted them to cume soon. prem wanted to stay back few days wid heer so tht they can enjoy bt after seeing heer's happiness n her insist of goin back, he culdn't refuse it n decide to go back next day only.

prem n heer were sitting in the lounge whn prem's phone rang.
prem: hey
rahul: whatsup buddy?
prem: chilllin n watching tv.
rahul: ghar par?
prem: nahi, road par  tv dekh raha hoon!!
heer hit him on his chesr, the way he was talkin to
prem: ouch!
rahul: kiya howa?
prem (takin heer in his side hug): kuch nahi.
rahul: acha sun
prem: sunna
rahul: mai nay aj raat roya rodale mai party throw ki hain, tu aur heer ajana
prem: kis khushi mai party?
rahul: mai pass howa ho!
prem: honours maray haina, jo party throw kar raha hai
rahul: tu yaha par aa, pher mai bata hoo kis khushi!
prem: (smilin) chal okay, see yaa

heer, haviing her snacks: kiya bool raha tha?
prem (takin a bite from it): aj raat royal rodale bola raha tha?
heer: kis khushi mai?
prem: (laghing): pass honay ki
heer also laughing wid it.
heer: kab jana hai?
prem: 9pm
heer: kiyaaa...itnaaa raattt kooo!!!
prem: tu kiya howa?
heer: nahi prem, itni raat ko nahi
prem: kyu, 
heer: dar lagta hain
prem: meray sath bhi dar lagta hain.
they both had an eye-lock session.
after few minutes.
heer: nahi, kabhi nahi.
prem smiled.

the whole day prem n heer were being lazy, ordered pizza for lunch n watched movie n tv the whole day.
it was 7:30pm, whn both prem n heer went to their respective room to get ready.

after about an hour, prem came out of his room, n shouted heer's name.
prem: heeerrr...
no response.
prem: heeerrr...jaldi karooo
heer: arahi hoo, babbaaa...two minutes.
prem: pata nhi yeh larkiyan itni kyu dair lagati hain.

after like good ten minutes, prem was abt to shout heer's name again.
prem: hee...
but stopped midway, whn he saw heer cumin downstair looking like an angel in the sky. she was wearing a black gown wid minium makeup n had curled her hair, looking like a princess.
prem was astounded n had a liitle mouth open.
heer smiled looking at him. shut his mouth n prem came back to his senses.
prem: kisko knock out karnay wali ho?
heer: un sari larkiyon ko jo tum par flatter honay wali hai mr. prem juneja
prem: ohhh. prem was wearing a white shirt, few buttons open wid blye jeans n his hair gel back, lookin handsome as ever.
prem hugged heer n said: u're looking beautiful, my princess heeriyaii :D!!
heer got shyed hearing the compliment.
and off they went to the party!

the party was on full swing, there were many guest almost whole of the college n plus sume outsiders coz it was a club.
sanju saw prem n heer cumin so she guide them to where they were standing by waving to them.
saniya: ufff...u both are looking awesumee...!!!
rani: such a cute couple
sanju: they definitely compliment each other.
everybody were praising prem n heer. heer was getting awl shyed n prem was looking here n dere, looking down to avoid them
rahul: dekho akisay sharma rahay hain.
prem: ab bas bhi karo yaarr!!! 
they all laughed!!!

prem n heer n awl their friends were enjoying the party, it was on full swing!! they also played lot of games, danced n pulled each otehr legs. they also pulled dare game in which they had a blast by giving stupid n silly dares to each other.

they all were cracking jokes to each other whn they heard a voice.
man: look, look who is here.!!!
they awll looked back n it was none other then Raj!
heer looked at him n then moved closer to prem. prem also sided near heer.
rahul: (wisphering): yeh kaha say tapak gaya??
raj: kuch bola tum nay ?
rahul: nahi, mai bas yehi pooch raha tha keh tum yaha kaisa?
raj: kyu nhi asaktay?
rahul: nahi, nahi asakta, (in slow voice) bas kio tamasha nhi karna
everybody laughed hearing thiz, raj also listened to it bt ignored it.
raj: kaisay ho prem? 
prem: acha hoon
raj: tum pass tu huye hona ya fail hogayeee (laughing)
prem: pass bhi howa aur tum say zada acha numbers say howa, ohh before i forget did u give the papers? everybody had a wicked smile after this.
raj: jee haan...
prem: ohhkkk

raj: ek game hojiayee
prem: kaisa game? he was already angry seeing raj over here n so he culdn't tolerate anymore.
raj: iss room mai ek game howa hai, jo yeh hai keh u hav to eat things in a plate bt u can't object or move back after seeing the dish.
prem: thats soo easy
raj: it won't be dude after seeing the dishes.
prem: huhh...lets seee
raj went inside, asking them to follow him.
heer knew abt thiz game n she also knew tht the dishes kept over there are not good in taste niether for health.
prem n gang were moving forward whn heer hold his hand.
heer: prem, tum yeh game nhi khelo gai.
prem: magar kyu??
heer: kyu keh mujhay pata hai waha disehs achi nhi hoti, i saw tht game a while ago.
prem: heer kio baat nahi naa...
heer (in tears): nahi prem.
prem (cupping her face): please heer, i don't want to loose or back out infront of that bast**d!!
hee half-heartedly agree to it. prem kissed her forehead n they went to the room.

raj, prem n two other men were standing infront of their dishes.
raj: lets do one thing 
prme: kiya!
raj: if i won thiz game so u will allow me to go wid heer for a dinner 
prem (in angryyy): u son- of- b*t*h!!!
raj smiling but heer n rahul hold prem's hand before he goo.
rahul: prem he won't ever win, i know u will win n v will show what v wants. calm down bro. prem looked at heer who was calm coz she had confident on prem.
prem: chal sahi hain raj but meri bhi ek baat sun lay, agar mai jeet gaya tu tujhay heer keh samnay jhuk kar meray boots saaf karnay hogay!!!
heer smiled hearing,
raj in anger n frustration: okay!!

the host asked them to open theit dishes n they will be given 5 minutes to look over it n the next 10 minutes time to eat n the one who finished earlier will be the winner n will be given a gift hamper.
one by one everyone opened their dishes.
one man, he had cocraches.
other men: alife insects.
raj: lobsters
and prem: green n red chillies.
the two men n raj were not content wid their dishes n were angry on prem's luck coz he just got chillies. everybody else was also happy to see prem dish tht it was not tht difficult bt it was the most difficult dish for prem which heer only knew because PREM WAS SEVERLY ALLERGIC TO ANY TYPE OF CHILLY.
heer (in strick voice): prem, u will back out!
everybody looked at heer, most happy was raj coz then he already won before starting it.
prem knew the reason y heer was saying thiz.
prem :NO!
heer: u will prem for my sake: 
raj: kiya howa prem, haar maan gaye!
prem was looking dangerously at him n heer showed raj a disgusted look.
prem: prem juneja kabhi haar nahi mantaa!!!
heer looked shocked at prem
heer: prem!
prem: heer, samjo naaa i can't loose infront of him.
heer: tu mai kuch bhi nhi.
prem: heee...
host: time is abt to start in few seconds.
heer looed at prem in teary eyes n back off, she stood wid her back to prem n went out of the room.
prem eyed sanju to go behind heer, she went to heer.


host: and the tyme starts...here u go.
prem took a deep breath n started eating.
everybody was having difficulty eating, esp prem he culdn't chew it properly! coz whn ever he chewed it, he started having headache bt eh wanted to do it, do it for his heer. after sume tyem the two men back out coz they culdn't eat. raj was also having difficulty eating bt he was not showing it, trying to act smart. but what eh culdn't see that he was way behind prem in the maount bt they ahd to eat fully. 

whn they were only few left in prem plates, prem started coughing, his eyes became red n his chest started paining. heer heard prem's cough n ran to him. she looked at him n already was crying n asking him to stop it!
but prem didnot stop eating. he was still eating it, heer was very angry on him for not listening.

after ten minutes, the bell rang, it was few left on both prem n raj's plate.
but there were less in prem's plate as compared to raj's.
host: and so the winner is none other prem!!!
everybody clapped n prem rushed to hav water. the whole gang followed prem. rahul went to take their gift from the host n kept in prem's car. heer also went behind prem. she was way angry on prem n was having  a staine look.
after having an ample amount of water bt few chocalates, prem was much better.

after a while prem n heer went home. wid hee being angry on prem n not talking to him!!!

Precap: 
prem: heer sorry, sorryyy
heer: get lost from here!!!!
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heer (crying): sanju, prem abhi tak wapis nahi ayaa!!!


Edited by repunzell - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
amazing yaa...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
plzz try updating soon
waiting for the next part...😍
Edited by premiti - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
nice part... superb update...
precap got me worried...
waiting for the next part ...
please update soon ...
and thanks for the pm ...
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar...πŸ‘
loved all premeer scenes...😍
and this raj...why u brought him back...???hope he won't disturb premeer again...😑
and precap...😲
update soon...πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for pm...πŸ˜ƒ

Posted: 12 years ago
omp poor prem
please update soon. can't wait to read next part
Posted: 12 years ago
FINALLY! GOD I HATE THIS RAJ! POOR PREM! I HOPE THIS THING DOESN'T AFFECT OUR LOVE BIRDS RELATION! PRECAP SHOCKIN! WAITING FOR IT! THNX FOR D PM!
Posted: 12 years ago
hey i missed many epi coz of exam so i'll comment late. sorryπŸ˜’

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