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Posted: 12 years ago
SHIRLYS thank you for the story.😊 I like your concept and great to see  PH as college students.

repunzell thank you for continuing the story. Very nice of you.  I finished reading your story today.
I liked all the chapters written so far. You made every update interesting  Keep it upπŸ‘πŸΌ

Looking forward to see your next chapter.

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Posted: 12 years ago
i know i m super duper late thiz tyme...really sorry guys!!\

thank u for the amazing comments n hitting the like button!!!

just give me few more minutes, i'm updating this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
few more minutes..matlab 5 min???
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay chalo...will read tomorrow...coz..now...gotta go... actually... i have to get up early in moring...update okay...will be waiting di..love u take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 29:

the exams were over finally n prem n heer n their friends were sleeping over at prem's place.
in the living room, 
rahul: so guys, raise ur hand with me who thinks they are failing thiz tyme.
everybody giggles hearing thiz. 
rahul n prem raised their hands.
prem: i'm with you dude, no chance of clearing...uhhuuu
heer had a smile on her face looking at prem coz her old prem back, full in mood n pulling each other legs. he is back.
sanju: but tum dunno ko tu heer nay parhaya tha na?
rahul: issi wajah say keh rahay hai, coz of her v are flucking bt thiz tyme v are not blaming her.
everybody laughed hearing thiz n heer throwed a cushion on rahul's face.
heer: very fuunnnyy rahul but i bet u that u both will pass.
rahul: kyu pher tum fail hogii
heer: rahul keh bachay, shoro gi nahi tumko.
she stood up n ran behind him, n rahul was running around teh sofa.
prem laughed hearing thiz, seeing his heer laughing n jumping around which he missed for few days coz of his health.
after all the jumping n talking, here the door bell rang.
prem: phewww...here cumes the pizzaaa!!!!
he n heer went to take it, prem paid the bill n heer took the pizza n cokes in the room.

as soon as prem opened the lid, n was expecting prem to serve but then prem took one slice n moved back.
everybody was staring at him
prem: what.
sanju: serve!!!
prem: excuse mee...mana mera ghar hain bt that doesn't mean keh mai tum loogo ki khatir dari karo ga. self service!!
suuny: tumko tu mai baad mai dekh loga, abhi pizza kha lo!!! 
everybody laughed n had pizza.

the whole night they were talking, watched movie, n gossips around. in short they were having an awesume night. while everyone was getting ready to sleep, heer took sume leftovers n went to put in the fridge n asusual prem followed her wid an excuse to help her.
prem hugged heer from back whn she was closing the fridge.
heer: prem, u sacred meee!!!
prem: how did u know its me!!
heer: i can feel u anywhere n everywhere.
prem: ohhh n he smiled.
heer: chalo sab intezaar kar rahay hain.
prem: nahhh
heer: prem, chalo
prem: pehlay mera kisss
heer: kiyaa!
prem: kiya, kya matlab, subah say yeh sab aye hain aur hamay akelay tyme nahi mila, so ab dooo.
heer smiled n kissed him on his cheek n so did prem,
after that they awl went to sleep.

the next day everyone went to their home, coz the result was cumin out in the evening n all of them wanted to be alone coz they wee scared esp prem n rahul
heer, was the one who was most relaxed n she had full faith that she n prem will clear it.

heer after washing the dishes, came in the lounge n saw prem watching tv bt he was not actually watching it, but was in a thinking mood.
heer: kiya howa prem.
before prem could answer, his phone rang n it was from home. heer came n sat near prem n prem put his hand around her shoulder n put the phone on speaker.
prem: heylo two moms, two dad.
heer giggles the way he greet n hit him on his chest.
on the other side all of them laughed hearing it.
mom: aj tu mera beta buhat fresh lag raha hain
dad: nahi lagay ga jo papers jo khatam hogayee.
prem laughss
prem: apki bahu nay meri buhat siawa ki.
mom: aur meri  beti ki kis nay siwa ki
prem: mai nay, bukhar mai bhi mai isko college lay kar jata tha.
heer: achaaa
prem: aur kiyaaa!!!
dad: acha bas bas ab tum dunno larna bad karo.
mom: beta, pher tum ghar kab arahay ho,
heer: mama, jaisay he result aye ga hum next day ajaiye ga.
dad: okay done, so u soon at home wid great marks
prem: don't expect anything high from my side dad.
dad: i hav never did beta, mai tu heer ko keh raha tha.
heer laughs.
prem: daddd
mom: (smiles) okay now u both wait for the result n v wait for you
they both the phone down.

prem n heer went back to watching tv. after a while, 
prem: heer, 
heer: ummm
prem: tum ghar chali jana, mai nahi jio ga.
heer quickly looked up at him
heer: kyu?
prem: kyu keh i know i will not clear 
heer: i know u will
prem: heer, meray papers achay nhi huye thay
heer: but i know u will clear it.
prem: magar...
heer: if u think like that, then i will also not go home.
prem: heer u hav to
heer sat straight n hold prem's face.
heer: if u will not go home, so will i not go. whereever u will n stay so will i. coz i can't live without you.
prem was very impressed by heer's words n hugged her.
heer: but i know u will go n u will clear too.
prem: how are u so sure?
heer: coz i hav faith in us.
prem: itna faith"
heer: yup
and they both smiled.

result was out n prem was standing near his room's window. he didn't hav the strength to watch it so he asked heer to do that as it was online. their most of friemds clear it as he was getting messages, rahul also cleared by just passing marks by 45% bt he was way happy coz he was expecting to fail. prem was here very tensed coz he didn't know abt his result n plus heer was not cuming up as it was half an hour passed.
prem: yeh heer kyu nahi arahi hain, itni dair hogaye...shayad mai fail tu nahi hogaya, shit...heer had so much faith...shitt!!!! he was so tensed n worried that he didn't notice when heer came n stood infront of him wid a normal face.
prem studied her face bt was clueless abt it so he was sure that he flucked.
prem(upset): mai fail hogaya na...i knew it i will
he turned back n went near the bed.
prem: shit yaar, sab pass hogaye aur mail fail.

heer: jab hum piyaar keh test mai kabhi fail nahi huye, tu iss test mai kyu hogay.
prem was confused by her words n went back to her.
prem: what do u mean by that?
heer: hmmm
prem: batio na heer!!!
heer: MERA PREM U CLEARED N NOT ONLY CLEARED U GOT 75%!!!
prem was shcoked to hear thiz
prem: are u serious
heer: dead seriouss!!!
prem was so so happy that he hugged heer n also pulled her up n made her make rounds.
heer was also laughing
heer: prem...bass bass...mujhay neechay utharo, mai gir jioo gii.
prem was also shouting n them made her stand.
prem: thank you.
heer: i told u na u will do it, 
prem: what abt you?
heer (calmly): i got 80%!!!
prem: n u are so calm about it, heer its 80%...congratulationnnsss...he again huggged him
heer: i knw bt the thing i m happy abt it that v both cleared it...yaayyy
prem: yeshhh
heer: love youuu
prem: love you tooo sweet heart!!


precap: a dare given to prem, heer tensed abt it, prem adamant to do it!! what is it? will heer make prem agree to not to do it? will prem listen or will he win?
Edited by repunzell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
suder dupr update yusra...πŸ‘πŸ‘
loved the masti by the gang...πŸ˜ƒand premeer romance...😍
poor prem and rahul...both got result fever rt?πŸ˜†πŸ˜† me2 have it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
prem got 75%..wow..all credit goes to heer...πŸ‘πŸ‘
can't wait to see the next chap...πŸ˜ƒ
update soon..πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for pm..πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by priyahmt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update!
Premeer mainia! luved it!
thnx a ton for d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
grear update ...loved it ...
premeer were awesome ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a fab..upate
loved it..di..too good...wow...prem heer super

but now plz..update soon..coz the precap is killing me...
love u take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally got the lovely  update...
 
plzzz update soon..