FF :kabhi alvida na kehnaa chapter 31, page 33 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
super update ...😊
loved premeer scenes ...
but ye raj ...please premeer ko kuch naho ...
thanks for the pm ...
and please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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thanks for pm.😃

Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

That was an fantastic part!!!






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I also want this raj chapter to end soon!!!

this raj has gone mental.. mad... but atleast his truth is out in front of everyone..

raj pointing gun at prem and heer...

i know that nothing will happen to premeer... and prem must have done something after he found out raj has brought gun!!!
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Eagerly waiting for the next part'

Thanks for the pm'

Continue super duper soon!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u for the lovely comments guysss🤗!!!!

chapter 24:

everybody looked shocked whn they saw raj pointing gun at prem. heer was tightly holding prem's arm, she couldn't believe that raj can go tht much. prem didn't know wht to do n moreover he was tensed abt heer also. 
rahul: raj yeh kiya bachpana hai, gun neechay karooo!!!
raj: nahi...aj mai kissi ki nahi sunoo gaaa...agar heer meeri nahi ho sakti tu kissi ki nahiii
heer: tu chalioo golii raj.
raj looked back at heer and he saw heer was standing infront of prem.
heer: chalio goli raj kyu keh agar prem ko kuch howa tu mai zinda nahi raho gii.
prem: HEER!!!!!! 
thiz was the reason prem was tensed that heer may take thiz step.
raj: tum hat jio heer, mai aj prem ko nahi shoro gaa.
prem didn't trust raj so to protect heer prem back sided heer.and it was in few seconds that didn't know wht happened.
before raj press the trigger the principal n two pollice officer(PO) came n put gun on raj's head.
PO: beta yeh game acha nahi, gn neechay rakho.
raj was shocked to see the police officer n so put the gun down.
the principal asked why was raj doin thiz n so everybody told everything since the forest incident.
prem was relaxed n so he knelt on the floor wid his head down. heer came out of tht shock n went to raj n slapped on his face.
heer: mujhay tum say kio baat nahi karni magar ek cheez zaroor kehna jio gi keh tum kiya duniya keh kio bhi taqat mujhay aur prem ko alag nhi kar sakti. kyu keh hamay bandnay wala upar wala hai aur woh hamay kaisay alag kar sakta hai. mujhay nafrat ati hai apnay upar keh mai nay tumko itna acha dost mana, sharam ati hai. chalay jio isssay pehlay mai kuch karo. le jaiye iss ko officer.
raj wid defeated face went away n so everybody slowly slowly dispressed from there.
heer looked back n saw prem still in that position. she went towards him, knelt down n put both her hands around on his cheeks n lift his face up. and she saw tears in his eyes. although she herself was crying bt removed his tears from his eyes. they didn't spoke anything bt they eyes spoke alottt. and after a while , they both hugged each other tightlyyy not to move apart. after like few minutes they composed themself n went home.

at home, prem n heer freshened up n came in the lounge. when prem came downstairs, heer quickly went in the kitchen and bought sume thing to eat for prem because she knew they didn't eat anything.they both had a very quiet lunch , didn't said anything. and whn prem noticed that heer is quiet which is unusual so he took a pice of roti wid paneer n brought infront of heer's mouth to make her eat. heer smiled n happily eat. heer did the same bt prem wid the bite also bite her finger.
heer: ouch...premmm n hit on his hand!!!
prem laughedd
heer: u're soo baddd!!!
prem: i m nottt
heer: yes u aree!!!
prem: achaaa
heer haaa
and then they both look at each other and laugheddd.
prem: i was missing ur smile n laugh since v came back n wanted to bring that back.
heer smiled!!!
prem took her hand : heer, forget wht ever happened, raj is in jail now, he will get punishment for his duess n now nobody can do anything of us.
heer: ummm...
prem: now no more being saddy saddy n only happyyy!!!! 
heer: i will be prem coz u are with me n i know u will protect meee n tugged her hand in his arm. and they went to the lounge.
prem: achaaa
heeR: yesss my protector
they both smileddd!!!

heer: waisay prem u know whtt
prem: kyaaa
heer: kal kuch haiii...
prem: kiyaaa
heer: from tomorw v are starting studying for our exmasss!!!!!!
prem: no waaayyy!!!!!
heer: pagal hoo
prem: mujhay nhi parhnaaa
heer: achaawww and went to her room.
prem: aray yaarr yeh parhayeee!!!1


precap: learing, understandinggg, coffeee, sleepless ness nights = exams!!!!

i know its not that good, sorry bt do leave ur wonderful comments!!


Edited by repunzell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like and love it ...
thanz god raj is in jail
update was fabulous,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

The part was awesome.. loved it!!!


Oh.. i so much hate this raj!!!

Awww..
premeer love what to say no words!!

Thanks god that PO came in time.. otherwise whar that might have done...


Nooo.. i can't see prem crying..


wow..
interesting precap.. exams... best of luck to them.. hehehe..


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Posted: 12 years ago
great update ...loved it ...
the end was so sweet ...
thanks 4 da pm ...
and please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank God heer nd prem ko kuch nai hua.
and raj is in jail now.
premeer scenes were awsm
pls do cont soon
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.

Edited by sweta2005 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
thank god that raj's chapter got an end...
aww...now my premeer have to concentrate on studies...
can't wait to see their romance come study...
thnx for pm...