here is the update:
chapter 24:
after their friends went prem n heer n their family were having dinner when lalit mobile rang
lalit: hello, okay...yah yah i'l be there...yah yah don't worry.
everybody were lookin at lalit to whom is he talking.
after he put the phone down.
balraj: kiya howa lalit?
lalit: hamay abhi he wapis nikalna hoga, canada say clients agaye hai n they want an urgent meeting with us.
heer: but dad...
lalit: sorry beta, but business hai jana tu paray ga.
prem: magar atleast khana tu khatam karay.
on the door step, the family was bidding good bye to prem n heer.
gayatri: apna aur heer ka buhat achay say khayal rakhna
prem: jee maaa.
balraj: aur heer tum prem ko thappar marna baad karo.
everybody giggles.
heer: dad n she hugs him.
and then they went to their hometown n heer went in to kitchen to set the things which were messed up n prem followed her to help her.
after a while v see prem n heer sitting on the roof wid their coffee mugs and looking at the stars n enjoying the peaceful atmosphere.
heer: kitna acha laga na, hamaray family aye thi.
prem: haaa, ek ronak hogaye thi bt u don't be upset hum apnay semester break par un logo say milnay jaiyeee...
heer (wid a broad smile) : saacchhiii
prem (hit her nose) : mucchhhiii.
after a silence,
heer: prem ek baat boloo
prem: boloo
heer: i want thiz raj chapter to come to an end. i don't feel comfortable when he is around n feel sacred n dusgusted.
prem: ur wish is my order ma'am
heer: kya matlab?
prem: i'l talk to him face to face in college tomorw.
heer: but...
prem: don't worry, no fighting bas isko samjioo ga.
heeR: love u muchhh
prem: love u sooo much.
they both smiled n went to sleepp after a while.
in other house:
raj was sitting on a rocking chair n was recalling awl the incidents which happened after the forest incident. "kiya heer aur prem ko mera maqsad pata chal gaya hai? kiya unko pata chal gaya hai keh mai heer say piyaar kartaa hoo!!! ab kiya hogaaa!!! prem kaisay react karay ga". raj goes back in a thinking mood n then after a while smiles wickedly.
"u're dead prem junejaaa n then laughsss"
next morning, in the college prem n heer were sitting in the class together n raj n priya were sitting together. they were having their boring accounts class n prem wasn't concertrating n was head down.
heer: prem parhooo
prem: itni boring class hai...ufff
heer: prem exams honay walay haiii
prem: tuuu
heer: parhooo
prem: tumho na parhanay keh liyaiii
heer: ohhh
prem quickly n suddenly peck her cheeks whn nobody looks.
heer (shocked): prem!!!
prem: sorry, culdn't resist after seeing ur cute face.
heer blushes/
thiz was being all watched by raj n he was boiling wid anger, "kio baat nahi karlo jitna maza karna haiii...pher dekhnaaa!!!!!
after the classes ended they were goin towards the cafeteria to hav sumething whn prem recieved a text message from raj
"i don't know why bt dude i saw a gun in raj pocket now. don't know y he bought it"
prem was shocked to read thiz n saw heer giggling n talking wid priya n sona so decided not to tell her otherwise she will be tensed. so he replied sumething to rahul.
prem n heer wid their other friends were having their lunch when raj came.
raj: heer i want to talk to u abt sumething, can u cume?
heer: (trying to act calmly): raj yaar jo bhi bolna hai yaha boloo, sab hamaray dost hai.
raj: nahi mujhay akelay karni hai.
priya: aray yar raj, kiya hogaya hai karlo na kiya baat hai yaha par.
raj: nahi mujhay heer say akelay mai baat karni hai.
prem knew what was raj's intention so he watching him closely n he knew if he said sumething to him so he will shout and he wanted everything to happen infront of everybody so that everyone gets to know the truth!!
prem: raj kiya baat hai?
raj: tum say kissi say kio baat ki?
rahul: raj yeh kiya tareeqa hai baat karnay ka
raj: heer caalo
heer: mujhay nahi ana, karni hai tu yaha karo.
heer was now getting afraid that y raj wants to talk alone. she was everytime lookin at prem. bt prem conveyed through his eyes, "don't worry, everything will be okay, u remain calm.
raj: heer chalo...
prem: agar isko nahi ana tu kyu force kar raha hai, yaha kar lo baat warna jiooo...
raj angrily looked at prem bt prem smiled sweetly.
raj suddenly hold heer's wrist, "chalo heer" n tried to make her stand.
everybody was shocked to see thizz.
heer : raj mera haath shorooo
raj: nahi tm chalooo
prem couldn't control anymore. coz he can bear anything bt can't resist anyone hurting his heer. he stood up n went near raj.
prem: raj heer ka haath choor.
raj: nahi choro gaa
prem (came near him): raj choor
raj: nahi choro ga...kiya kar lay gaaa.
prem puled heer's hand strongly from raj's grip n hold it.
raj was stunned to see thiz.
everybody else was trying to get why raj was doin thizz!!!
prem: aindaa mat karnaaa.
raj: kyuuu
prem: can't u get one thing in ur bloody mind that she is my finance n v love each other.
raj: i can't.
prem: tu tu pagal haiii
raj: ha ha mai pagal ho...pagal ho heer keh piyaar maiii
everybody were shocked to hear thiz bt then they were double shocked to hear a hand meeting sumeone's cheek.
it was prem who slapped raj
raj was shocked n his face was all red.
prem: sharam kar sharam. tujh ko hum nay dost mana aur tu nay dosti ka yeh sila diya.
raj was boiling wid anger, nothing was goin in his mind, first heer not listening to him n now prem slapped to him infront of others.
prem: meri ek baat sun lay, ghoor say heer sirf meri hai aur kissi ki bhi nhi ho sakti n pointed a finger towards him, " aur agar tunay agar say kuch bhi karnay ki khooshish ki tu mai tumko choro ga nahi.
" mujhay pata hai forest mai heer ko tunay he kidnapp kiya thaa, sharam ati hai tujhay apnay dost man kar,.
everybody was shocked to hear thiz tht it was raj, they feel disgusted about him.
prem after composing himself turn towards heer who was in shock after all thiz. he went near him n put his hand around her shoulder. she looked at him n hugged him quickly. prem wid heer turn back n started to move out of the cafeteria.
raj: agar heer meri nahi ho sakti tu kissi ki bhi nahi".
prem n heer looked back n they saw raj holding gun, his face full of anger n the gun was pointing towrds heer they both were shocked to see thiz n most of awl heer who was thrilled to see the gun pointing at prem.
"kabhi alvida na kehnaaa"
precap: wht will happen? wil raj shoot prem? will he be successful his plan? was thiz the final good bye (alvida) to heer from prem.
stay tuned to knowww!!!!
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Edited by repunzell - 12 years ago
