Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

LIFE really changes!!!!ch1...pg1

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Posted: 12 years ago
heloo...guys hows u all...okay...
MOST u may know i am SAIRA...so im thinking to write an ff again...altough others r not updated bt stillπŸ˜†...
i read dis in one novel so thought of write it here wid replacing de characters to fav PREM nd HEeR...so...hmmm...
 
 so ...
 
 
        LIFE REALLY CHANGES...😊😭😊
        
CHAPTER 1...
 
FRM MORING only dad was shouting...
"pick all de utensils...plzplz...paint wala ajay ga aur aisa na ho keh he wud b standing on de door nd u all wud b picking up ur things..."
 
Although dad ko andaza bhi tha keh ghar ka samaan hi kitna  hai...it wud b picked in 20mins...bt DAD IS DAD...😊
MOM fed up of listening so...
 
"BALRAJ MAAN...ill u shut up now...my daughters ill pick dem up...understood..."
 
"TEJI MAAN...if ill not take tension den who ill take...ur brothers???"
 
"c i told u many times not to take my brothers name in our talks ...y u break ur leg over there names...Y?????"shouting...
 
"excuse me u oldy...dont even think tat my leg ill b broken...tang(leg) totay mere dushmano ki"
 
"whom u said OLDY...me...im ful 12 years younger den u...MR.."
 
den only my brother entered...
 
"y r u fighting MOM DAD???...plz let de peace to stay in our house plzzz..."
 
DAD"no beta...v werent fighting..."
 
bhaiya...named as NIHAAL...
 
"very funny dad...so was dis de flowers cuming out frm ur MOUTH...nice joke..."
 
MOM"beta...u go nd fresup ill put de lunch on de table for u..."
 
nihaal"so nice of u mom...really luv u..."gives her a side hug...nd moves towards his own room...
 
AFTER bhaiya left de house again de hustle nd bustle started in our house...MOM ND DAD...
 
AFTER 1 month...
only 1 week is left our nihaal bhayias marriage...
 
"MOM...i wan 3 new dresses for bhaiyas marriage...right"
 
"okay my sweet heer...u ill get it..."
 
"thnxx MOM...i really luv u sooo much...muaah"gives kiss to her mom...
 
"MOm wen is bhaiya going to cum frm delhi now...only one week is left for is marriage nd..."
 
"he ill cum after two days..."
 
"oh kk..."
 
all mother father nd daughter went to sleep as dey were tired of marriage...
 
tats only wen de disaster known as earth quake attacked there house...nd HEERS eyes went CLOSE...
 
guys ...do comment nd tell me if u wan me to continue dis ff...if not so do tell me...
hope u like it...
WID LUV...
SAIRA
 
 
 
CHAPTER 1...pg 1
 
 
 
do comment..nd enjoy it!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
yaayyy i'm the first one to comment⭐️!!!

anyway its an interesting conspet...very eager to read more!!!

do update soon!!!

P.S: and plz don't forget ur other FF coz of thiz...most of thm do itπŸ˜›!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
its nice...
lets see wat interesting coming...
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Posted: 12 years ago
LUKIN FORWARD...!
seems nyc concept..!
update soon! n thnx for d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey saira... sm1 told me my sweet sis is really busy so when i got this message i was a bit shock... just kidding.. great concept really looking forward to it... and plz yaar yeh to app update karoge na????

so plz do upate... waiting...

and thankx fr the pm...

love u
take care...
bye cya...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice concept
thanx 4 adding me in ur PM list
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb yaaa...gr8 concept... πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ
plzz try updating soon..😍.
thnx for d pm...😊
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ff...
wht happnd to heer??????
is she safe...?
pls update soon...
and pls add me to ur pm list too
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Posted: 12 years ago
can't wait till next chapter!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Saira

It's great you have new story ! Earth quake happens then what? It'd be nice to see how ppl reacted,  and what happened to the ppl who you just introduced in the story. πŸ˜Š