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Casa 15 Part 203 B on 136 (Page 78)

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged
20th Sat 2012
Mangal Kunj Malabar Hill
Part 201 B
 
 
HL wheeled his breakfast into the room, bacon eggs toast and coffee. He stood in the balcony responding to his text messages.
The jasmine and roses were in full bloom, the company that cared for the plants around the house did a splendid job.
Except his wife was not around, otherwise she would cut the roses and place them in vases around the room.
 
He walked over and sat on the huge wrought iron swing. Some thing caught his attention, a tiny gold colored claw clip. He clamped it on his pinkie. She was very careful about her things, very rarely lost any. This must have been from the evening they were chatting and later went on to other delightful pursuits.
"My notebook is filling up, you need to return my things" she had complained once
He had chuckled in response saying "Nahi Khanak, I will get a new notebook for you"
He walked into the room, the room was a mess, papers strewn every where, user guides glossy photos of the universe, from his new new love astronomy... boxes lay everywhere, telsecope parts, tripods, lenses...
He walked to the bathroom...
Stepped out a few minutes later
 
"Well if you hate the dump the room has turned into, then please come clean up" he thought enticingly.
 
Nobody entered his room to clean unless he specifically requested it
 
Poured himself a full mug of coffee and walked over to her closet texting responses... her clothes hung in neat piles
All color coded from light to dark...
He walked over to the shelf, one contained stuff ferom her child hood, a school badge, some merit cards for good performance in 5th 6th and 7 grade, a purple ribbon... some tiny plastic bangles and her Aada's glasses and Bai's old saree...
 
In the one next to it, there was a mirrorwork fabric covered box, he opened it for the first time, it contained all the note cards that accompanied his gifts... they all said the same thing "To Khanak From shantanu" but behind one there was a big star symbol and a smiley face and a tiny print "My most fave"
He thought about it, realized it must be the very first one...
 
The book on "pacts" lay in the far corner of this shelf  with a book mark  on Page 38  EmbarrassedWink
"I knew you were trouble but I couldnt resist" it said, she had manually added an apostrophe and penned down his full name
 
"Shantanu" right in between trouble and but


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poor Shaan... thinking abt her..  wants her to clean his room.. and his new love - astronomy??? looking at the planets to see if they can be together??

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adi 201B is in 82..we have not yet reached page 83..n 201  A is in 79..


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awesome part adi..
but kyun choti choti parts..
shaan's new love astronomy..hhhmmm...
roses n jasmines on full bloom n shaan thought if khanak was here she would decorate the vases with roses..
his room is all messy n he wants her to clean up the mess..
the pink line was awesome..
another update milega???

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Aww

That was very cute !

Is he exploring all this for the first time ????

Did he not miss her before this ???

Question time : What was the first gift that contained the note " To Khanak from Shantanu "

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Update choti hai..not fair! We need more CASA dose Aditee Tongue
Oh and the last pink lines...were they referring to the incident which caused their separation??

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Originally posted by ABlank90

Update choti hai..not fair! We need more CASA dose Aditee Tongue
Oh and the last pink lines...were they referring to the incident which caused their separation??

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Originally posted by priya_cool_123

Aww

That was very cute !

Is he exploring all this for the first time ????

Did he not miss her before this ???

Question time : What was the first gift that contained the note " To Khanak from Shantanu "


mmm...something he sent when she was in chembur...
haan...dhruv's wedding time the photos n flowers/chocolates..right???


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