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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

awesome update adi..
spanish reminding her of their honeymoon n his spanish GF..
the pink line was awesome..
will we get a bold blue line as reply for her..
Bunch is definitely there.. waiting for it Aditee..

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aditee IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged

Part 198 C

9:30 ish Friday October 5th 2012

Green Park

Anusha: Choices, choices choices (gushes)

Samar laughs and shakes his head

Samar: One is taken already

Anusha (looking at Samar) I am hoping its not him

Khanak:  (looking at her husband) I am hoping its not him

Anusha: I am too (smiling at samar)

Samar: Sorry ladies  "I am tomado" (I am taken)

Anusha: Bummer! (smiles)

Shaan watches what his wife is drinking, it looks clear

Samar: can I get you something? (to Khanak)

Khanak: Umm..mmm (shakes her head vigorously)

Anusha: Where do you work Khanak?

Khanak: Modi & Dastur architects

Anusha: Wow! Brainy!

Khanak smiles

Samar and Shaan are talking about seating for the game and wiring the sorround sound properly''..

Anusha: What do you do for them?

Khanak: Currently on a DLF Project '''.a high rise on Sohna Rd

Anusha looks confused and looks at Shaan "Arent you also with DLF?"

Shaan: Nope! On loan actually, just for a few months, will be gone soon

For some reason it sounds like a threat to his wife

Samar: Hes so good they all want him

Khanak: There is more than one? (looking pointedly only at Samar)

Shaan: Many actually! (softly)

Anusha: How does it feel to be wanted? (laughs)

Shaan: Smug!

"Shameless" thinks Khanak

Knock on the door, the driver appears with 50 bags of food, the maid gets them all and goes to the kitchen

Anusha: I came for the food, I don't care for soccer

Samar laughs

Khanak: I came for''..soccer players

Samar: Spaniards are not playing today''

Khanak: I am fine, I will settle for cute guys in shorts

Samar: Many are wearing shorts in this room today

Her husband is texting pretending not to listen

Khanak: The team jerseys are missing though

Samar: Shaan's wearing one

Khanak: I didn't notice! (firm)

He looks up at her, his eyes tell her "Ofcourse you did!"

Anusha: Ouch!

Shaan's lips twitch he goes back to his iphone

Anusha: Looks like youll have to settle for me

Shaan smiles again, annoying his wife

Gloria: Done puedo en contrar un profesor de Hindi buena en Delhi (Where can I find a good Hindi teacher in Delhi?)

Shaan turns around forming a larger circle including Gloria in the convo

Shaan: Depende de si usted es ta buscando un hombre o una profesora (Depends on if you are looking for a male or female) (looks at his wife)

Gloria struggles to translate in english

Samar does the needful

Samar: Se le olvido anadir guapo (you forgot to add good looking) (winks at Shaan)

Shaan: Si

Samar: Shaan's Hindi is bad she taught him some (pats Khanak's shoulders, she is visibly shy) translates in Spanish for Gloria

Gloria: Que bella profesora! (what a beautiful teacher) (smiles warmly)

Samar: what a beautiful teacher!

Shaan: Hermoso hecho

Samar: beautiful indeed

"OMG" He thinks I am beautiful replays in her mind a million times

Anusha: Hes mine now Gloria, so say something nice about me (smiles)

Hugs Shaan's shoulders

Gloria: Funny? (looks at Samar to confirm if she said it right)

Khanak: I have Javier Hernandez (smug)

Her husband looks at her, there is a loongish honeymoon history about the guy, how shaan tried to coach her about European soccer and how she only wanted to know about Javier, and what came of it''

Samar senses some strong undercurrents, he suppresses a smile, hes happy'..

Gloria laughs and makes s ad face and says "I am a married woman" in Spanish

"Good luck" she says

Khanak: Thanks'' (meanginful)

They all laugh and chat more

Food gets served around 10:30

She nibbles on chips and salsa, and just wanders by the table, and peers down at everything, Samar had told her whats veggie

Her husband has been noticing her for a few minutes, her eating habits annoy him no end anyway, she drives him insane again

He goes for second helping,

Shaan: Chips for dinner?

Khanak: Ummm (looks at her plate)

Shaan: Want to stay skinny for Javier?

Her heart skips a beat, multiple''.

Khanak: I am not hungry

 He serves himself more food'

Khanak, plays with her chips

Shaan: Veggie doesn't appeal to you?

Khanak: The gal in blue dipped the shrimp serving spoon in it! (accusing)

He rolls his eyes "Whatever" "You just need an excuse"

Khanak looks away

Shaan: The game shud start ina few minutes hope you stay up and don't faint (sarcastic)

Khanak: If you care so much, bring me untainted vegetarian food (flirtatious)

Smiles as she shakes her fork

"Good god!" he thinks looking at her blouse'''.the thin muslin like cotton reveals more than it hides

Shaan: I have some rice, bean and cheese (enticing)

She takes step forward and looks at his plate while he rests his eyes on things that torment him on her form

Khanak: Is this it? (pokes on his food with her fork)

Shaan: (husky) this is it! (his eyes are obviously not on the food)

She starts to eat, unmindful of the meat on the side'.. he watches her audacious attmept to flirt''

She makes a face "Spicy" "Sss" she groans

He spoons some sour cream from his plate and holds it for her, she gladly devours it and goes back to eat the bean and cheese again''.. he alternates'' after every mouthful of  bean and rice he feeds her sour cream

His eyes are glued to her face and the eating motion

"I am full" she declares playfully smiling, just when he brings a spoonful of sourcream to her, she opens her mouth on it and then lets go'.. makes a face refusing to eat, just letting her lip be coated with it, holds his wrist''

"Not quite" he says deeply, licking the spoon clean himself'.with his wrist still held in her grip.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed






Edited by aditee - 17 September 2011 at 9:54pm

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adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
sizzling ht chemistry!Wink love it!

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iluvmanar IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
yaa...so they got the tym alone..luvved it yaar...

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dishbhan Goldie

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Shit Man!

Awesome ... kya kar rahi hain Adi ...Blushing aisa sab detail likhegi tho hum tho mar jayenge yaar ... kash ...

She is completely flirting with him. She can eat from his plate with meat by the side, but worries that someone has dipped a shrip spoon into the veg bowls, whats that about? Anyways, hubby feeding food is something else only for her, she must have not eaten like this in days ... from his hand ... so she must be high right now.

Waiting for another one ... greedy ho chali hoon main ... kitne bhi padhu kam hi lagta hain.


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IF_rida Goldie

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
loved it aditee,,,,,,,,,,, superbClap

the cobv was fun but how u've penned abt their gestures and luking at each other was fantasticThumbs Up

the hindi teacher part was lovelySmile

hmm... lots of honeymoon memories ... Wink

shaan can be jealous of the team players as well... gud that he dressed up like themTongue

finally they talked

i am jumped in joy when he fed her the creamWink

loved it ... that it happened alternatively after every mouthful or rice and beansDancing

the blue and pink line... awesomeDay Dreaming

loving it even more... plz one more update aditee

goin tno read this again... continue soon.

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RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
fireworks started..shaan checking her out..
am loving it..
wat will happen next??
dont just stop it now..
give another update..
hope its not yt time for u to sleep..
if so will wait impatiently for the next update..

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged

the talk that Khanak and Samar had regd soccer and its players.. too good.. she is so openly going after him.. 'will settle for cute guys in shorts'.. 'will have Javier Hernandez'...

she eats from his plate and she flirts with him.. and the Bunch and Punch... awesome... as Shaan said to her once b4 the wedding.. "Khanak, u dont know what u r starting here'..

hopefully Shaan will take her to his place and then  we get more of Shanak...

btw, Aditee.. need one POV from Shaan.. regd all the flirting and the soccer LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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