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Casa 15 Part 203 B on 136 - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago
too many possibilities...thinking constantly about casa. 

plzzz update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 201 D
1:48 AM
21st Oct 2012
Sunday
Vasant Kunj
 
Her phone rings, she wakes up startled, she looks at the number, she knows who it is...
Khanak: Hmmm?
shaan: i am outside... can you open the door (completely normal tone)
Khanak: Abhi?
Shaan: Haan abhi (patient)
She springs up from bed in shock, terrified... she has no idea why he is here, wonders if Dadi sent him
She looks for a scuncie and ties her hair...
Runs to the door, turns on the outside light, the steel grill door, creaks and makes a lot of noise as she unlocks...
He is standing there in one of his six pocket knee length shorts and a AX tee i  white, looks like he is ready for a pool party... someplace
She lets him in, half asleep
She had just fallen asleep after ossing and turning, worrying about her fate. and her place of residence...
 
He walks in calmly, he has a duffel bag and his laptop bag, strung on his shoulder
She had no idea he was in Mumbai until he intercepted Dadi's call
 
"Aap Mumbai se a arahe hain? (curious)
"I think so" (expressionless)
Khanak: yahan?
Shaan: Dadi told me... (curt)
She goes to the divan and sits down, outwardly calm...
Gets up, turns on the kitchen light and gets him water...
"Dinner?" she asks courteously, as if nothing's wrong between the two...
"I ate on the plane"
"Oh!"
She fidgets and later walks back to the divan and sits down, he leans on the wall, hands in pockets, one sandaled foot on her wall
"Do you want to tell me your version?"
She is quiet...
He just stares at her...
He admires her courage, her guts, her  will power, she had been through so much already in life, yet
Khanak: This is not a drama
Shaan: I realize its not...
Khanak: Some one has complained...
Shaan: did he give you a notice
Khanak: Nahi...
Shaan: What do you plan to do?
Khanak: Abhi socha nahi...
She is quiet and withdrawn, her eyes are puffy as if she has cried a lot...
Shaan: enjoying your freedom so much?
Khanak: If thats how you see it
 
Shaan: I have promised myself I wont let us come to blows... (cold)
Khanak: I have no such expectations of myself (bitter)
 
Shaan: Did you say you would sue him for unlwaful ouster?
Khanak looks at him shocked, some things are so simple for the wealthy she thinks...
Khanak: I cant afford a lawsuit... I cant (shakes her head)
Shaan: You are just going to let him slander?
Khanak: pata nahi...
She leans on the wall and shuts her eyes...
Shaan: Ive spoken to a moving company, get what ever you need in the morning, we are getting out of here...
Khanak is horrified, her heart beat intensifies... "WHERE?"
Shaan: Vasant Vihar (blunt)
Khanak: I CANT... I cant... (chokes on a lump in her throat)
 
Shaan: You see it as a game? Feels like having lost? (rubs it in)
Khanak: I dont want to move in with you...
Shaan: Dont worry, you are not... not in my bed... (disgusted)
She is apalled
Shaan: You can pay for food... you can pay for room and board if it hurts your pride so much...
She looks at him stunned
Khanak: Room mate? (shocked)
Shaan: If thats what you want to call it...
Khanak: That is crazy...
Shaan: I have to make weekly trips to Mumbai. I will hardly be home
Khanak: You were hardly home (anyway)
Shaan: Lets not start digging up dirt (sarcastic)
Khanak: I cant go live with you
Shaan: i spoke with your landlord
Shaan: Wont be too difficult, we can each live our lives... you arent allowed to bring male guests I wont bring females
There is a lengthy painful pause as she understands the implication...
Shaan: i wont lay a finger on you, Khanak "Mistry" (biting, cold)
Khanak: I dont care for intimacy...
they stare at each other like they would claw each other's eyes out...
Shaan continues " Ive promised Gupta you will vacate  in a week and as a reward have also promised to drag his sorry ass through the courts for the slander" 😡😡(furious)
 
She looks at him stupified... rage, sadness, irritation that he interefered, all bubble up simultaneously and egg her towards yet another showdown...
 
Edited by aditee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Great updates Aditee. Loved on how u presented the whole situation. Out of all this mess it atleast shows that Shaan cares for Khanak, hope Khanak realizes it. Prad is going to be a dead meat.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing aditee👏👏

wow he's reaches at 2 am directly to vasant kunj😊

i liked that he's calm and still admires her courage and will power😃
 
taking decision widout talking to her was nasty but the decision is right 👍🏼

but if he had talked😉 to her she must 've rejected right away ... and he knows how to get his way so its gud

finally she'll be moving to vasant vihar🥳
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he has talked to her landlord...   i guess he wont spare him so easily

but wht abt prad's visit he hasn't said anything to her abt it... he cant let it go easily... it really not like him😕

i wont lay a finger on you khanak "mistry"... OMG y he called her mistry😭

waise we dont care abt a finger he shd lay himself on her😉

n she doesn't care abt intimacy😉

the blue line was superb... each and every word shows that he was really furious😡

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesum adi..luvved it...luvved how he hs planned 2 shift her frm here...and that not allowing female guests and male guests r superb...wonderful writing dear...waiting 4 the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update!!!! oh no they're fighting again!!!!!! they are all set to claw each other's eyes out. but atleast they're together...lolll
i thought khanak wanted to get back w/him so what happened now???? weren't we working towards reunion?? is that scrapped???

pls cont sooon
Edited by aNsHu_tEjPaL - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sooo Many Updates Over the Weeekend !!!!!!
 
Aditeee ... On a Rolll arent you?? ... Good Good !!!!!
 
OMG ... So Much Happpened ...
Pradyun Visiting ... Igniting Shaan... the Possesive Shaan !!!!
He is SOOO Furiously HOT !
LOL !!!!
 
OMG ... Why do they FIGHT yaaar ... SOLVE the problems and then they can fight FOREVER ... In bed !
Sigh !
 
 
Brilliant ... Exciting ... Shantanu & Khanak  .. its time they Takes Matters Seriously and make a Final Call !!!!!
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is noone around ???
 
Where are the Regulars ... CASA addicts :P !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
adi...
awesome...
shaan acting cool as cucumber but he is to the point..
khanak didnt expect him to come..
wat adi..they are talking as if they r making a business deal..
waiting for them to shift to same place n fight afterwards..

PS: the update no. is 201E we have 201 D already in page 91
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Posted: 12 years ago

There they go again...we are gonna get a big one, they are merciless with each other, totally believe in hurting as much as they can as if that will make their own hurt go away, maybe it will for a bit, then it will be back 10 times more...

Ok I am waiting with bated breath...I am not gonna makes guesses this time...
 
Adi this update ending has to go down as one of the most nerve racking one in CASA...
 
Ab kya? Aage kya? sigh...its a whole night away...