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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic aditee

finally prad is there to add more spice to it

waiting for shaan's feelings

he'll surely feel to kill prad

waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aditee... u r offline...
going to shopping w/o reading an update 😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 201 A

Saturday October 20th 2012

Vasant Kunj

Noonish

Pradyun is prowling

Khanak: bye Dadi!

Hangs up, he smiles

Pradyun: "aap busy ho?" (speaks in affected Hindi to prove he is learning)

Khanak: Hum busy nahi hai, vyast hain (smiles)

Prad: Wooow! What does that mean?

Khanak: Busy in Hindi

She goes to the kitchen, gets water from the frig, hands it to him, asking "Should I make chai?" "I don't have coffee ingredients"

Prad: Main chai peeyenge!

Khanak laughs out loud "This is bad" "You need lessons"

Pradyun: I love the idea'..

She starts to make tea'''

 

Sat 11:25 ish

Mangal Kunj

Malabar Hill

He tosses in bed, feels with his hand, all over, Nope!

No sign of her. Opens his eyes and looks at the empty side, lifts his head and buries it into the pillow, face down, almost chokes himself.

Raises his head looks at the clock' checks his phone there are 17 missed calls. He swiftly sifts thru hoping to see a number he knows well. It starts with nine and ends with 9 and has zeros in between.. like her silences'''

Nope! Not one call, or text message'''.

He is tired and achy, he needs atleast half a dozen hours of sleep. He was working until 10 last nite and had gone to grab a drink with friends at  Jazz by the Bay. His weekly trip to Mumbai will continue until Casa gets handed to residents/owners in two months

 

It was looking and feeling incredible to be in those completed structures. Now his responsibility was around, ensuring all safety measures were being followed. Power and communication reliability was the immediate priority, back up generators, separate sub stations feeding clusters of buildings etc.

Nachiket and him were easily putting in 12-15 hour days''.

He had flown in Friday morning at 8, been at the site past 10.

His marriage and personal life was taking a solid beating

Work was definitely a high, he had fooled himself for a while that having a good time with friends, staying out late, getting drunk, "acting his age" was everything

Casa had changed everything'''..

He was doing really well since he was back. Rahat had jokingly remarked two weekends ago about defecting to DLF.

Happiness all around, except at Vasant Kunj

 

Those big black eyes haunted him, the way she stood up and walked away.

He rose from bed, walked over to the couch, hit the space key

He had had no clue how many pictures he had of her. They were all in a master folder, in random groups, he did not like to see them when he copied them over. He liked to see them at night or when he was by himself.

When he pursued her, he would stay up nites, it was his "cookie and glass of milk"

He would look at pictures in one folder for the very first time.

He had 10s of folders. When was with him, he had "other" things that would occupy him, so pictures were not on the list particularly

Their relationship has got to be the most volatile! He thought''''

Sitting in his apartment in Baltimore, he would look at their honeymoon pictures. Even picked up his phone a couple times to call her, and his ego got the better of him''

He looked at yet another folder for the very first time, savored every look, every smile, every tendril of hair''.

Got up suddenly, walked over to the balcony''..

"I am frick--- not going to spend the rest of my life moping" 😡😡thinking so, he SLAMMED the balcony door, almost shattering the glass, as his heart shoved a million thoughts to his brain

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Coming up...
Shantanu Gujral's thots continued 

 

Edited by aditee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay!!! mil gaya..but looks chota..
*edited*
waiting to know more of shaan's feelings..
shaan looking at her pictures..
continue soon..
lambha wala update dho na..
Edited by RB81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aditee

Prad's just foolish
 
He is just letting his infatuation take the better of him
 
We are all prone to doing ridiculous things at times in our lives
 
May be some of us have never...
 
But my characters are normal human beings, they are dumb, unreasonable and selfish
 
 


@ bold...just like us...forever demanding updates😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yups Shaan...good thinking👏...stop moping...career will give you high for a while, you need to work on that marriage of yours...make that your first priority...you need to realise wife is "WISDOM(worries...nah) INVITED FOR LIFE"...

Don't give up...!!!!!

Dunno what biryani is cooking in his mind tho...Next update hope sooon...PLZ ADI!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow aditee

he's looking at her picz that at least shoved thoughts to his brain

finally he'll stop moping... com'on go for it bring her back

waiting for another update to know more abt it

jaldi se adi plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
just superb yaar...brilliant...lekin itna small ku hai???
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice  update. waiting to see more about "his feelings" ...😊Edited by neethurose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliantly described...it clearly shows what shaan is going through...even he has suffered a lot n now after reading d blue line i m so damn sure dat nw even he vl take every possible efforts 2 reunite with khanak...wow i m really excited 2 read d next part pls continue soon