NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21) - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

awesum part πŸ‘ n naitik's b'day hw nice n naksh in paris




thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight08

hii jasmine..

i read all the parts in one go.. n it's really good!
 
keep up the good work! 😊
 
Kaumudi.



thanks a lot for the encouraging words😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetu_naksh

hii jasmine
awesome part
and precap sound interesting😊
thanks for the pm



ty dear 😊

the next few parts are very interesting 😊😊

😊u are always welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago


ty dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey plzz next  part write soon na 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_chopra9

hey plzz next  part write soon na 



sure... i would post the next part in the  evening
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting 4 ur update post it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonu10

waiting 4 ur update post it soon



ur wait is over... i am updating it right now.. would post it very soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminedayal18



ur wait is over... i am updating it right now.. would post it very soon 😊

yay!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER - 6
after taking blessings from the family members.. naitik goes back to his room and akshara g3 n bm move to the kitchen to prepare food
ak:- bm.. apki dj se bat ho gyi na?? unhone janamdin manane k liye haa kr di hai na..

bm :- haa bahu.. tere dj ne haa kr di hai or kha hai khub ache se krna sb taiyari..

g3:- ha bahu.. is baar janamdin pr kuch alag sa karenge taki sb ka man khush ho jaye.. or fir tumhe paris bhi to jana hai.. to khushi khushi jana..
ak gets a bit sad on hearing the name 'paris ' as she would miss every one there..

g3 :- bahu tumne sari taiyari kr li hai na?? hme bhi bta do kya kya krna hai...

ak :- maa ap chinta mat kijiye.. sab kaam ho jayega... ap or bm khane ka intezam kr lena.. rashmi mere sath decoration krwa degi..
(they suddenly hear a voice and turn around n see dj n rb standing there..)or ham na kuch karenge!!!
ak:- dj.. ap bs hm pr apna ashirwad bnaye rakhiye or hme apne sujhaw dete rahiye...

dj:- khush reh bahu.. tera har kaam pura ho... (dj hugs ak)
ak:- maa.. main rashmi k sath bazaar ja skti hun?? sara samaan le aungi... or ap hme kitchen ka sara samaan bta do..
g3:- ha bahu.. main tumhe 1 list de deti hun tum or rashmi jakr le aao...
ak :- thik hai maa.. main taiyar ho jati hun or rashmi se bhi keh deti hun..lls
(ak goes to rashmi's room)
rashmiii... rashmii...
ra:- ji bhabhi..
ak :- jldi se taiyar ho jayo hme bazaar jana hai.
ra:- pr bhabhi...
ak:- pr vr kuch nhi.. hmne naitik k birthday k liye surprise plan kiya hai.. bs usi k lie samaan lana hai or thoda bohot kitchen k liye samaan lana hai.. Ab jldi se taiyar hokr niche aa.. main bhi taiyar hone ja rhi hun.
ra:- ji bhabhi.
(akshara hurries into her room)
nk:- itni der kha lga di jaan??
ak:- nk mujhe bazaar jana hai.. maa ne kuch samaan lane ko kha hai.. hm bad mein bat krenge.. please mujhe taiyar hona hai warna maa gussa karengi
(ak gets ready and comes down leaving naitik in the room and he is upset)
ak n rashmi go for shopping and buy decoration items and gifts.. rashmi buys a watch n ak buys a photo frame with 3 frames in it.. she also buys a sherwani for him... she gets a small pendant for g3 nandini rashmi n bm... she calls varsha for further plans..

she buys the things necessary for the kitchen and comes back home with rashmi
ak :- rashmi.. tum jldi se yeh sara samaan apne kmre mein chupa do.. main kitchen ka samaan maa ko dikha deti hun.
ra:- ji bhabhi.
g3:- bahu.. le ayi sara saman??
ak:- ha maa... sara saman packed hai or maine rashmi ko uske kamre mein hi rakhne k liye keh diya hai..
g3:- thik hai beta.. ab tum aram krlo thk gyi ho.. jao.. main tumhara or naitik ka khana upar tumhare kamre mein hi pahuncha dungi..
ak:- pr maa...
g3:- arre jao.. sara din kitna kam krti rahogi?? abhi jao or aram kro.
ak:- thik hai maa..
(ak goes into her room n finds nk waiting for her)
 naitik:- ho gyi shopping???
ak:- ha naitik ... sb le ayi.. abhi to main bohot thk gyi hun.. sir bhii bohot dukh rha hai or pair(feet) bhi dukh rhe hain.
nk:- jaan ap let jaiye.. main dba deta hun..
ak:- nahi nk.. apne ap thik ho jayega..
(nk pushes ak onto the bed)
nk:-ap aise nhi maanengi...
in this process nk falls on top of ak n the bg music is on..
they both forget to close the door of their room
g3 comes to give them food but returns back on seeing them having fun..
naksh are so engrossed in each other that they dont even come to know..when did they sleep..
it is morning.  NAITIK'S BIRTHDAY. and everyone is ready for office.. no one has yet wished him.. not even akshara.. nk is very sad..
dj asks every one to hurry up as they hv a meeting.. he signals ak to manage everything..
as soon as they go.. varsha shourya and anshu arrive to help ak n all for the decoration etc..
EVENING TIME
all the preparations are done and everything is prepared.. there is still 1 hr left for nk to return frm the office

varsha:- ab hm sabhi taiyar ho jate hain jldi se or fr uske bad sara samaan rkh kr.. sari lights off kr denge.. naitik ji ko aise lagega ki ghr pe koi nhi hai..
everyone agree to her and quickly get ready..
varsha has already set everything on the table and is waiting for others to come..
varsha:- anshu.. tum jakr lights ka dhyan rkho..
an:- thik hai bhabhi..
ak:- varsha wo gifts kha rkhe hain tune??
var:- ak.. tnsn mt le.. sb ache se rkh diya hai maine... acha chlo ab nk ji k ane ka tym ho gya hai... jldi se table k pas khde ho jao.. anshu.. yad hai na??
anshu:- ji bhabhi..

all have taken their position and anshu switches off the lights.. its pitch dark in the hall...

naitik has arrived and is surpised to see no one in the house..
he calls out... maa... aksharaaa... bmaaa... rashmiii... kha ho sb???? aksharaaa...

suddenly.. he hears everyone clapping and singing happy birthday naitik... and is very surprised and happy...
guys the next part would be updated tomorrow morning...


Edited by jasminedayal18 - 12 years ago