guyz i know that few of u r disappointed with the current track...i can't change the track at this point
if u feel that Maan is missing because of which u r not happy then from now on wards Maan has the key role to play
if u r feeling that Pari is getting more importance guyz she always has importance in the story from the beginning... once imagine the story without Pari's character then u would definitley know the importance of her character
though it is a love story MAAN , GEET and PARI are the leads so plz try to accept this fact
if u feel that surrogacy track is too long sry can't help it ... if u guyz check HM track it took almost 10 updates but u didn't complain since u loved it
if u feel Maaneet's romance is missing...it looks out of place if i include romance in the story at this point of time
she meet him,
tried to avoid him,
fallen for him without her knowledge,
confessed her feelings with the support of her friend,
tried to stay away from him when she remembered her promise,
she is lucky enough to get married to him,
even though she loved him she hesitated to surrender herself,
her friend's advise made them become one,
his love for her erased the thin line of hesitation between them,
their symbol of love came to this world and she got rid of the pain that she is facing from years,
her son filled their life with happiness,
her friends pain broke her,
she thought of helping her and invited trouble in her life without her
knowledge...and...
this is the way the story is going on...life is not fair all the time...she has to face everything in life to become a complete human being
When i read ur positive feed back it encouraged me to write more, when I read ur negative feed back it helped me to correct myself and have a check on what i am writing. I don't know y I took up this track but some gut feeling is making me to deal with this track may be i got influenced by some of the happenings around me because of which u guyz r suffering... sry for disappointing u
guyz this is my concept and u r aware of my way of dealing with the things...u can skip 3 more updates if u r unable to connect urself with the story
thanx to all those who r with me by encouraging, advising,guiding and helping me.I have learnt a lot because of u guyz keep on giving me feed back
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PART - LXIX
PART - LXX
Ramu: no madam...plz don't get down..voh Roopa...she is a
... she is a SEX WORKER...someone gave u wrong information
Geet: what r u saying?
Ramu: madam not only that woman...this area itself is not
good...it's too dangerous for women to come near this place...so i didn't drive
the car to the exact location where u asked me to drive
Geet didn't believe her ears, she became astonished and couldn't
react ... she remained frozen and didn't say anything
Ramu: madam...madam
Geet: ha...i think u r right the address might be
wrong...drive me home immediately
@ Khurana Mansion
Geet hurriedly went inside her room and closed the door ...she
almost emptied the completely filled water bottle ... she sat in the relaxing chair
and hugged Arya tightly on to her chest...she closed her eyes as she started
thinking of what had happened and what might have happened.
Geet's Self thought: mujhe vaha nahi jana chahiye tha...agar
Ramu kaka ne sahi tarah se situation ko nahi sambala toh...pata nahi kya
hojata...and i am not alone Arya is also there with me..i am sry Arya...i am stupid
enough that i took u to a filthy place...i am sorry...i won't be able
to forgive myself if some thing happens to u because of my stupidity
Her mind is filled with various kind of scary thoughts and
she is sweating profoundly, her eyes are shedding tears without her
knowledge...her hands are shivering out of fear. She remained in the same
state cursing herself for her haste decisions for 2 hours...Arya felt
uncomfortable and he started hitting on her chest and pulling her hair...she
opened her eyes and kissed Arya
Geet: plz forgive me... if it is possible
She then placed Arya along with some toys in the cradle...Arya
silently played with the toys without bothering her and accepted her apology as
if he is aware of her mother's plight by smiling at her.
Geet smiled through tears at Arya, she went inside the washroom
to enlighten her heart by shedding the remaining tears. She tried to pat
herself inwardly by washing her face. She came into the room and has seen Maan
playing with Arya. Her heart beat skipped as she felt she has done something
wrong ... she remained silent how to tell Maan the worst experience of her
life.
Maan: Arya...howz the day?...where did u go along with ur
mom?...aaj kal donom bahot masti kar rahe ho papa ke bina...
He has seen Geet and came near her.
Maan: do u have time for ur husband?
She smiled uncomfortably and lowered her gaze.
Maan: Geet where did u go?...and what is the need to take
that filthy route?... I am warning u Geet that area is dangerous and u don't
have any idea of what sort of activities that take place over there...vaise i have warned
Ramu also about this...don't repeat this again
Geet hesitantly gave reply to Maan anticipating his
reaction.
Geet: voh Maan... i have asked Ramu Kaka to take me there
Maan: what?
Geet: yes
Maan: Geet...r u aware of what u r talking?...y did u go there?
Geet's voice is cracking by now
Geet: in...in search of... surrogate mother
Maan became furious listening to Geet but before he could
say anything he wants to know what exactly happened and y she landed up in such
a place.
Maan: tell me exactly what happened
Geet explained each and everything to Maan how she has done
research about surrogacy, what happened in the hospital and y she went to that
place. Maan listened to her patiently hiding her raging anger.
Maan: did u meet that woman personally
Geet gulped in and struggled to frame a sentence
Geet: no... Ramu kaka mujhe gadi se utarne nahi diya...he
found out about her and informed about her
Maan remained silent thinking about the guts of Geet and the
way she has done everything without discussing with him.
Maan: what do u think about urself?...do u think i am a
fool?
Geet shivered and stepped back listening to his ferocious voice...Arya started crying when Maan shouted at Geet...he called
the maid and asked her to take care of Arya...she left from the room taking
Arya along with her...he came close to Geet
Maan: kya sochke tumne ye sab kuch kiya...don't u think i
have the right to know what my wife is doing?... and how did u forget that
Arya is also there along with u...if the driver is not wise enough what
might have happened to u and Arya? ... what about me if something happens to
anyone of u?
Geet: i didn't knew that place is dangerous otherwise...
Maan: who asked u to interfere in others life?...how many
times i told u not to think about her...u don't have the right to take decision
about Pari and Yash...it's their life and they are capable of dealing with
their problem...there is no need for u to become Mother Teresa...don't forget
that u have ur own life...if u...
Geet: Maan whatever happened is not there in my hands... i
didn't expect that woman would be so cheap
Maan: agar aise aurat nahi toh kaise auart iss tarah ki kaam
karne keliye tayar hoti hai...don't u have common sense...ye baat jaanne
keliye itna research karne ki kya jaroori hai...who would carry other's
child in her womb for money?...do u understand what i am referring to?...or
do u want me to explain more clearly
Geet: stop it Maan...how can u say that every woman who
helps the unlucky couples is a bitXX...i don't agree with u...it's my bad luck
that i came across such a woman
Maan: yahi problem
hai tumhari...har koi tumhari tarah sedhe nahi sochte...there r so many things
which u doesn't know ... u r too innocent to think about such things... u said
u have selected 3 women and the first one itself turned out to be a
bitXX...and i am sure that others are also of the...
Geet got angry the way Maan is talking about the women who
are helping others though by taking money... she thought of defending few innocent
women who might have present among those diXXX women...she started talking
whatever came to her mind
Geet went completely out of control trying to defend those
women whom she doesn't know...her stupidity reached heights and she is unaware
of what she is talking
Geet: Maan stop it...u would treat me also in the same
manner if i become surrogate m...
Before she could complete the sentence ... he slapped her
on her face with full of force and said "Don't u dare ...don't u dare to let
that thought enter ur mind...did u get that?"
He pointed his finger on Geet's face and said in one go
Maan: don't forget that u r wife of Maan Singh Khurana
before u speak anything...to hell with Pari's problem... u r not going to
repeat this mistake again... it's my responsibility to take care of my family
and i am not a fool to remain silent if u take advantage of the freedom that i
gave u
Silence prevailed between both of them... Maan is looking
straight into her moist eyes still pointing his index finger towards her face...he
didn't realise that he slapped his wife...Geet is in a complete shock...she is
looking at him making her eyes big...she couldn't believe that Maan slapped
her...after few moments she realised what happened and kept her hand on the
cheek where Maan slapped her.
She said with a low pitched voice "Maan... did u slap me?"
Geet's voice brought him to senses he blinked his eyes and
opened his fist...he stared at his finger prints on Geet's cheek and looked at
his fingers...he couldn't believe that he slapped Geet while trying to control
her and made her realise what she is doing?...he stepped back and faced his back
towards her ... he ran his fingers through his hair...Geet collapsed on the floor
and buried her face into her knees.
Maan's self thought: What am i doing?...Geet what did u do
to me that i lost my control and raised my hand on u...what's wrong with
u?...what r u doing to me...
"I am sorry" said Geet with a cracking voice
Maan turned back and has seen that Geet is crying sitting on
the floor...he went near her and placed his hand on her head.
Maan: Geet...Geet...look at me
She slowly raised her head and looked at him "I am sorry
Maan...i am sorry for everything..i won't repeat this again...plz don't go
away from me...nothing is important to me other than u in my life..plz don't
leave me...i can't bear any kind of distance between u and me...i am sorry"
Maan placed his hand on her cheek...he has seen that she got
scared of him and is shivering out of fear...he didn't understand how to console
her
Maan: how could u think that i would leave u?
Geet took his hands into hers' and leaned towards him such
that his forehead touches hers'...Maan narrowed the distance between them and
kissed on her lips. He got up and lifted her up ... he
carried her to the bed with his arms and made her sit on the bed...she got
hold of his hand and made him sit beside her...he wiped off her tears and made
her rest on the bed and he also laid beside her so that both of them are facing
each other...Geet is still crying Maan wiped off her tears and touched the
imprints of his fingers on her face with his hand...looking at the marks he
realised that he gave a harsh blow on her face...he felt embarrassed for his own
behaviour towards his wife...he is trying to tell her sorry but unable to speak
looking at those marks.
He kissed on her cheek which made her smile through tears...she
placed her hands around his neck and hugged him.
Geet: I am sorry Maan
Maan hugged her back and gently patted on her back to assure
that everything is fine...he kissed on her neck and placed gentle kisses on
her collar bone to soothe her...she hugged him tightly to feel secured in his
embrace...he broke the hug and kissed on her lips passionately feeling guilty
for being rude with her...they are feeling complete in each others embrace
and remained in the same state for some time.
Geet rested on Maan's chest and closed her eyes...Maan is
looking at her innocent face.
Maan's self thought: it shouldn't have happened...I got worried
about u and Arya which made me to behave violently...Geet there are so many
things which u couldn't understand because of ur innocence...nobody thinks
fairly as u do...everybody is selfish and no one cares about the
others...money makes them do anything... ...u r too
naive to deal with these stupid kind of researches ...y don't u understand
that u r not the one who has to decide about Pari's life...Pari ke saath Yash
bhi hai...it's not good to interfere unnecessarily..we shouldn't help anyone
unless and until they ask for according to the present situation...being too
good is not appreciated now a days...too much of anything would lead to
disaster
He made sure that she slept peacefully and then got off the
bed. He went to maid, took Arya into his arms and came to his room.
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Next Day
Maan is searching for something in the room.
Maan: Geet where is the Blue File?
Geet: It's there in the shelf itself
Maan: no Geet it's not there
Geet checked the shelf and she also didn't find the file.
Geet: I think it is there in the study...let me get the file
Maan also went along with Geet to search for the file...Geet
is checking the shelves and Maan is checking the drawers of the computer table...he
opened the drawer and has sheets of papers filled with hand written content
where some points are marked with red ink and some are highlighted. He took
those papers out and read the content...he became angry looking at the
research Geet has done on surrogacy...the way she analysed the things,
gathered the information about statistics, the TO DO list... everything...he
got surprised looking at the efforts she took to gather the information.
Maan: surrogacy my foot!!!
Geet turned towards Maan listening to him and has seen the papers
in his hand...she got scared anticipating his reaction.
Maan: what's all this Geet?...this is what u r doing
sitting at home?... it's just common sense which is lacking in u...all this is
not what exactly happens
He tore the papers and then he has seen the addresses of the
women she has collected.
Maan: so these are the woman u have shortlisted...all r the
same
Geet: Maan plz i agree that whatever i have done is
wrong...i should have informed u before taking any step...but plz don't say
that every woman is like that bitXX
He got angry because she is still arguing with him
Maan : thik hai... i will make u understand in ur own
language come with me
He gave instructions to the maid to take care of Arya until
they come back.
Geet: Maan where r we going?
Maan: u will come to know
He took her to one of the addresses she has collected. They
have reached Ramani's house who became a surrogate mother a year back.
He observed that they belong to lower middle class family.. looking at the house, the family members
and the locality they are staying everything appeared fine to him. Maan asked Geet to talk with her and he
remained silent. Geet got surprised at Maan's behaviour ...she discussed with
Ramini and gathered some information.
Her husband informed Maan that they are in need of money
last year as Ramani's husband has heart problem and he has to be operated. One
of their rich relatives doesn't have kids so they approached them and offered
huge amount in return for surrogacy...Ramini has to do this inorder to save her
husband and her husband also accepted after the counselling given by the
doctor.
This time they are happy enough and they don't want to do it
again for money...so they said NO to Geet.
Geet: Maan y r u doing this
Maan: i said u will come to know
This time they have
reached the other woman Siddi's house. They found the house is locked...he
asked the neighbour's about her. They informed that she died one week back
because she is a victim of HIV.
Geet got bewildered listening to them..Maan looked at her
intently and didn't say anything. Ramu opened the car door for them to get
inside seeing them approaching the car.
Geet leaned towards Maan and clutched his shirt with her
hand ... Maan turned towards her and has seen that she has fainted...he got hold
of her from falling on the ground he hurriedly
made her sit inside the car and Ramu passed him the water bottle. He sprinkled
water on her face and patted on her cheeks calling her name.
Maan: Geet...Geet
She opened her eyes and adjusted herself properly in the
seat
Maan: r u ok?
Geet: ya i am fine
She is looking at him whether he would speak something but
he didn't say anything.
Geet: y r u doing this?
Maan: to make u understand what reality is...everything is
not fair in life Geet...hope now u understand y I got angry on u
Geet: I am sorry Maan
Maan: u don't have to say sorry...there r so many things
out of ur knowledge ... no woman does something of this sort without any strong
reason... whatever she has done is to save her husband..if they know that
whatever they have done is fine then y r they hesitating to do this again for
money...and the other woman no need to explain...don't believe each and
everyone blindly...we have to be careful enough not to invite the trouble
unnecessarily
Geet rested her head on Maan's shoulder ... placed her hand
on his chest and closed her eyes.
She remained silent...he called the driver and Ramu drove
them to the mansion.
PRECAP: what the hell?...Y r these women so sensitive?...don't they understand that their stupid decisions will effect others lives?
P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge
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