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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the update...plz update soon " />
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it
plzzz update marvee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please add marveepmlist for pm's for my ff's

The Shadow of My Soul
Part 11
 



I WILL NO LONGER BE WRITING ON INDIA FORUMS, PLEASE REFER TO MY BLOG TO READ MY STORIES.

https://marveesfictions.wordpress.com/

Edited by marvee-khan - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

marvee that was reeaallly damn good,,,very blushilicous update😳😆 i wonder what is going to happen next, and how her dad will react???

 
please update soon
we love ur fanfic, don't be disheartened from lack of likes cause some people read from phone and u cant like there...
 
thannnkkyou for beautiful update!!!😛😉👏
Edited by choco786 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a n amazing update...

I always wonder why I touch you, 
Mabye cause I just cant get enough of you, 
Your touch energizes me.
If I didn't I wouldn't be me.

I'd feel lost and out of control, 
Losing trust in myself.
Not able to know if Ill have control around you.

I feel your skin by me, 
It makes my skin crawl with difference, 
Emotions I cant explain, 
If i wrap my arms around you, 
Im scared that soon, 
It wont just be my arms.

I want to touch you, 
I want to know your there, 
Cause if I'm down, 
I know you'll pick me up, 
You'll know just how to make me laugh.

Your touch moves me to different heights.
You fill my body with the knowledge, 
Of knowing you cant be mine.

I forget who I am when your around.
I lose contact and wonder what your thinking.
I know that touch I long for through the day, 
Could be a light punch or a soft push, 
To get you to notice me.

Your touch intoxicates me, 
You make me feel found, 
And not so much like a loss.
Only with YOUR TOUCH, 
Do i feel free...

Continue soon tc...😊
❤️ 
Priya
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...
luved it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Marvee !

I love the pace of the story..not rushed up at all! Their banters are as usual sweet <33
Wonder if they the end of this trip is going to be unpleasant... The precap got me wondering.

xoxoox
Edited by coolvini4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update Marvee...
don,t get disheartened by less no. of likes...
i,m really loving this story...
the flavour is more real in this as they are approaching slowly in there relationship...
her fears, dilemmas thats all so real...
don,t change it write what u have planned for this as this is an amazing concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...

Uff...  they actually managed to control their feelings... beautiful...

Precap seems interesting...

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH MY THAT WAS DAMN HOT😳😳😳😳

I'M STILL BLUSHING...WOW☺️

THAT WAS ONE FANTASTIC UPDATE...HOW THEY WERE MESSING AROUND AND WEREN'T EVEN REALIZING WHAT THEY WERE DOING...AND THEN SOON ENOUGH THEY WERE TOO CLOSE..AND THEN...HAAAYYYEEE KITNA ROMANTIC THA😉

MAAN AND GEET BOTH GETTING JEALOUS WAS JUST PRICELESS😛

AND GEET...YES I UNDERSTAND HER PLIGHT...I MEAN AGAR SHAADI KI PEHLE YEH SAB HOGA TO PHIR SHAADI KE BAAD KYA KYA HOGA🤣

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK HUN..AND KEEP ME POSTED LIKE USUAL😊

UPDATE SOON😃